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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: undisclosed

what are you refering you to naz?😃

I am a innocent girl...thats my only referrence n preference...😳😛😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...

interesting ...

read a few parts .. loved dem .. will read d rest soon ...

add me to ur pm list ..

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi friends, I am back with the next update...oops its long again😉😆
Early morning, Priya wakes up all tired. Nakul comes and gives her coffee. Nakul notices her face is all swollen.
Nakul: Didi are you alright.
Priya; Yes. Why?
Nakul: no nothing. Nakul hesitates. Dadi asked to pay her a visit now.
Priya;
Ok

Priya gets up from her bed and gets ready. She goes to daadi's room who is searching for something in her cupboard. Priya knocks the door and takes permission for entering the room

Priya; Daadimaa. u wanted to meet me
Daadi: Yes. I guess we need to have a chat
Priya;
hesitates. ohh.. ok...

Daadi shows her some old albums of her son and daughter in law and tells her how they lost them in an accident. Few pics slips from the album which Priya picks and asks who is the person in the pics. Daadi says it Vicky who left house as Maan got angry over him for doing mischeves. Priya is all confused why daadi is telling all this to her..Dev comes and asks Priya to accompany him to office as he could not contact Adi and needed help. Priya agrees and goes. Daadi is thoughtful and thinks she will talk to Priya in the evening...

Maan and Geet are still in bed holding each other. Maan kisses Geet's eyes and gets out of bed. After sometime, Geet wakes up and feels all heavy. She opens her eyes with lot of difficulty and searches for Maan. She notices Maan is getting ready and sees the watch. She gets up suddenly as they are late. she runs to get ready and returns quick. She asks Maan why he didnt wake her up and goes before mirror when she notices her eyes are swollen and remembers what happened last night. she looks back at Maan and realizes Maan is silent as he concerned for her. She goes n gives him hug saying she is fine...Maan Geet finish their breakfast and inquires about Priya and servant says she left with Dev. They leave to office.

As they reach office, Maan forgets the file in the car and Geet gets back the file. Geet enters the lift looking at the file. After going a couple of floors, the lift suddenly stops and the lights go off. Geet gets all scared and starts pressing the lift button but nothing happens. Geet notices that she is not alone in the lift. She asks if someone is there but does not get any response. She tries to use her phone to see who it is, but her phone is knocked down. Before she can bend down, someone forces her against the wall of lift and Geet is all shocked. She thinks its Maan and he is trying to scare her, n calls out for him, but as the person's hands run through her bare hands to shoulder (as she is wearing sleeveless), she realises its not Maan. She shouts for help. She starts feeling the breath of the person over face and her neck, and gets alll numb. The person starts pressing himself over her and Geet is speechless in shock. Her eyes r filled up in tear and her lips calling for her help, but the voice not coming out. The lift suddenly starts back and lift opens. the persons gets down leaving Geet. The office people notice Geet still in lift all shocked and help her to Maan's cabin.

Maan is all shocked at Geet's state, but Geet says she does not know who the person was. Police comes and does inquiry, and concludes there was no one in lift as no one else has seen him...Maan is all thoughtful and consoles Geet. Maan and Geet get busy with their meetings.

Dev and Priya return to office from outside meeting. Maan asks Adi to tell Priya to return home as he and Geet will be getting late. Adi informs her the same. Priya comes out of the office looking for Dev, but security informs that he already left. Priya walks out of building thinking how she will return Khurana Mansion. She thinks of hiring a cab, but realises she does not have money. she just starts walking...

After finishing work, Maan and Geet start to leave and Geet asks Adi about Priya who informs her she left, but Geet asks how she left. Adi says may be by cab. Geet calls home and gets to know Priya did not return. Geet gets all worried as she thinks Priya hardly knows the ways and has no money either. Maan, Geet, Adi, Dev search for Priya but fail to find her and return home. Geet is all upset and Maan feels a sense of guilt as he was one who asked her to leave...Its midnight and Nano asks Geet to eat something which she refuses. She madly stares at the entrance and all walking around tense. Nakul informs Priya returned.

Priya is walking towards outhouse when Geet calls her behind. Priya stops and looks back at Geet who gives her a tight slap. Everyone is shocked at Geet's sudden reaction. Geet yells at her for being so irresponsible and not informing. Priya finds it hard to stand still. She feels dizzy and tries to come to conscious by shaking her head, but fails and loses consciousness. Dev holds Priya and save her from falling. He takes her to outhouse and Maan takes Geet to their room. Doctor is called for Priya who says she is okay, but needs rest ...

Precap: Geet and Priya in ladies nightout and Maan goes behind them.

Please do leave your suggestions and comments😛😊😊
Edited by Naz_Angel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it loads
can't wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
muahhh
xxx
Posted: 14 years ago
OMG! Who assaulted Geet in the lift? Wait, it must be that Kunal. Grrr! 😡
And what's happening to Priya? 😲
Great update Naz!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amaaziing work! Nice! Keep it up!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part ...i think kunal is the one in lift inside

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
i am sure the person in the lift was that business client who was glaring at geet...
well geet will get to know that priya didnt have any money to go back and she might feel sorry...
waiting for the next update...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rahmona_pakswe

OMG! Who assaulted Geet in the lift? Wait, it must be that Kunal. Grrr! 😡

And what's happening to Priya? 😲
Great update Naz!

thanks Mona...but police said no one was there😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

loved the update...

i am sure the person in the lift was that business client who was glaring at geet...
well geet will get to know that priya didnt have any money to go back and she might feel sorry...
waiting for the next update...
pl cont soon

thanks ...sure...
Geet knew Priya had no money😛😊

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