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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: shalinikanagu
just now i caught up this ff and this is really really good.

thanks 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Cool_janu
i luvd it👏

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-GayabCat-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#113

hey everyone thanks so much for liking

am thinking as our friend geetu is no more why don't i just dedicate this whole fanfic to her?

what you all think. shall we..

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Flame.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

Hey Ayesha, Read your FF at a stretch and i much admit that i love your FF!! Too good yaar please PM me when u update your chapters !! 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: aahana1
Hey Ayesha, Read your FF at a stretch and i much admit that i love your FF!! Too good yaar please PM me when u update your chapters !! 😊

thanks and will add u

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trinitynyx

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Posted: 14 years ago

#116

Before I begin, I'd just like to say that I do like the concept behind your writing. However, I would like to offer some constructive criticism.

1) Your writing is all over the place, one second your setting up your characters, the next your going forward with the story; it's quite confusing. I understand that you want to establish their personalities, but you're throwing in little tidbits all over the place and messing up the pace of the story.

You tend to jump from one thought to the next, but don't finish the previous thought...which you should

2) Your grammer needs work. I'm a stickler for grammer, so it's very hard for me to read something and enjoy it if the grammer isn't up to par.

3) You need to differentiate when you jump from Arnav to Khushi. It has to be a clear distinction (see part 2 "meanwhile at the gupta house")

Again, I'd like to point out that I'm offering constructive criticism. In no way am I belittling your work. That is not my intention. You can take my criticism or leave it, that's up to you. I'd also like to mention, again, that I do like the concept behind your work. I just wish it was a bit more ... articulate.

Good Luck!

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Khushi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#117

Awesome FF Ayesha. Update soon Please. And add me to your Pm list.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#118

Hi dear:)
I have just read your Fan-fiction and I would like to say it's awesome. I love each chapters/parts of your ff. This is my favourite ff at the moment :) I can't wait for ArHi's marriage :D just hope nothing happens which stops the wedding :O

- pleaseee update longer & fast. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter/part.

-please add me to your PM list, thanks! Xx