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He just saw a happy family... rahul feeding rany & Geet pampering amy. He just calmed himself ..she looked happy. He called adhi & told him to book the return tickets. He could see the happiness in her eyes .. Least did he know it was because of him, because of him making her feel complete just being there for them. His mere presence made her feel so contended.
She wished nothing more.. She actually never wished anything! She always got everything from him in abundant let it be his love, possessive?ness, his anger his protective?ness, his care.. whole of him .. Just hers only hers she didn't even have to claim him. He just gave himself totally to her without even his concern. .. how much ever he deny he can't deny wat his heart holds for her deep inside. One day he will realize & then even if she denies he won't listen.. no one can stop him then .. Not even the strong wall of friendship & respect that now conceals his belief. his feelings.. his expression?. ..
Then he would revoke the commitment he once took from her to be his only his. How could she deny then, how could she deny to the one whose innermost heart lies bare and cherished only for her. The one who seeks comfort of powerful primal attachment only within her. How his soul mingles twins with hers. The feel he beholds unknown to him.. Just a regret she never treasured it, understood it when it was all hers, now fears the unknown. Don't know if she could even stand a girl next to him now, when then she used to be the person helping him out sort things. She didn't even want to ask abt his family now, because her heart ached to learn the truth. Wat if the truth dooms her, sinks her into a sorrow unrecoverablely. It was her mistake always. She never understood anything. Never understood his care, his passion, his possessiveness all this was just him for her!! her genie. But least did she knew wat all that actually meant. By the time she realized guess it was too late. To late to even realize wat he meant to her. How unknowingly she had began to lead a life with him being part of her every breath, her every beat, her every word. still unaware wat that feeling meant.
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She was drawn back to the memories of first few month alone in US. She was so thrilled new place, new college, house, car.. ..CAR !!!she eventually did take it out. She spend hours looking at genie's photo asking him if it was ok if she took his car out alone. She promised him she won't wreck it like she did to his new car in Bangalore. She chuckled... with the thought of wat she did to it...after driving the brand new car from the show room into the tree, all her genie was concerned after the crash was her. He immediately hugged her & checked if she was fine. He never let her drive again not that he feared she will spoil the car but feared she will hurt self. Though he never said it that way.. but she understands it now. As he just gave her everything ..the house, the car.. nothing was materialistic then.. she realized it only when she actually understood the meaning of materialistic at the first place!!! when she realized wat it meant owning his house, owning him. She actually owned him. She could tell him to do anything & he would just do it. Off coures he will throw all kind of tantrums before actually accomplishing te task..but eventually do it for her.

The house.. she arranged the house just like wat he liked. She was so particular. She was not realizing she used to fight with him for the same in Bangalore but here when he was not around she strangely did like he wanted, like he would keep it if he was there. His way became hers..didn't even know when & how. She did cook Italian food often because he likes it. Not that she was expecting him to join her. No she knew he won't he was so clear about his wedding with Kavitha. She was happy for him, but she hated that female..Simran was so sweeter. She spoke to her nicely but this kavitha ..aaah!!

dressing.. she laughed..though Maan never ever told her anything about her patiala suits, don't know why she started wearing western outfits. It was initially odd but the thought he may like it, he admires girls wearing such cloths she slowly began to find herself comfortable in them. Before selecting a dress in the morning she would discuss with ballu & genie's photo wat to wear. She didn't even know wat he liked on girls they never discussed such things when they were together those 4yrs, but some how she knew he liked something that was impalpable, subtle. She didn't miss him, she always felt he was there with her, like her parents. When ever she wanted she could just turn back to him & she knew that he would be there for her.. it was just upto her to extend that hand & look for him.

She grew really independent, independent enough not to let him down!!! it was his thought that gave the zeal to her to excel, to do well. She performed well in her studies oops otherwise genie would get angry.. thats wat always drove her
bill pay nahi kiya tho genie naraz ho gayen ga!!
car wash
house cleaning
laundry
every thing just was for him.
like he was always there watching her..
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He lifted his brow & questioned.. she broke out of her thought & looked at his questioning eyes. She smiled & shook her head. He smiled & sat between the kids. It was the dessert time.

Geet smiled at amy - chocolate ice-cream
he kissed her immediately...2
Geet - u r really pushing ur luck now
he turned his lips down & made a baby face.
Geet - teehk hain u finish one & then we will see
rahul ordered a coffee rany - ordered a chocolate sundae
even Maan ordered a chocolate sundae
amy immediately looked at Maan & rany & got angry
Maan & rany just shook hands for selecting the same thing.
Amy - mujhe bhi chocolate sundae chaiyen
Maan - copy cat
even rany said - copy cat
just then the dessert was served. Amy got really upset & pushed the sundae on Maan.
Maan was all ready very annoyed with so much of things running his mind & then the thought he won't be ever able to see his dodo again, ..how would he get the guts to face her again especially with this emotions running in him differently. He raised his hand at amy.. rahul immediately stopped him mid air & gave a agonizing look to Geet, to let something like this happen. Amy got scared & crawled behind Geet, almost shaking ...pale. He expected every thing but not Maan raising his hand.
Amy made a terrified face.. I will call 911 he threatened Maan
Maan was so pissed off he pulled his hand away from rahul & threw his phone to amy.. yehlo karo..
amy took the phone & punched in the number..
it was totally a different turn of events..totally unexpected.
Cops were there in few mins & it was so embarrassing for all.
Geet sat in the corner holding her head & rahul trying to speak to amy. It was a mess.. a clear mess!!


Geet, amy & rany drove back home. Geet was crying all the while, amy was feeling guilty. Amy was pale & drawn back.. he didn't mean to be so mean but one thing lead to other & then other.. eventually all this. He was shaking & hugging Geet when they walked into the house..dodo I am sorry ..she was in tears, self scared & worried abt maan's reaction. She couldn't say much to amy, he was already too scared.


rahul followed the cops to help Maan out of all this. Well that was Maan Singh Khurana they were dealing with. It just took him few calls to get rid off those cops.
Maan & rahul cabbed it back to the house. They never spoke, but some where Maan did feel he was not that bad a guy as he thought he was!!!. well his decision of going back was not wrong he thought though his heart bleeded with even thinking of leaving his dodo. The thought itself was so painful he didn't know how was he going to just part.

Maan came back home & gave a threatening look to amy & roared.. aab kya karo ge?? aab tho tumhara 911 bhi mera kuch nahi bigade ga. U don't even know whom dealing with!! He looked at Geet ..is he nuts to do something like this.
Amy hid behind Geet getting scared. He was already getting a fever in fear & now he was totaly scared he almost fainted. Rahul immediately lifted him & laid him on the couch.
Maan - enough of ur drama he said it in a irritated tone.
amy face was pale.
Rany rushed in & got rahuls stethoscope & BP checking device.
Geet rubbed amy's hands feeling scared & looking worriedly at rahul
rahul wrapped the BP machine around his little arms & the stethoscope on his chest. The pressure was high & heart his heart beat was ok.
Maan didn't know the seriousness of the situation here. He assumed it to be one of his pranks.
Rahul looked at Geet giving a reassuring look. She kissed amy & carried him to the room.
Rahul - I will take him..bahut dara huwa hain.
Maan - yah kaisen dar sakta hain.. he only knows how to trouble people.
Geet - GENIE.. she almost painfully screams his name. He has never heard call him like that so broken so much in pain & anger.

He turned to meet her eyes..it was in tears.. she seemed so hurt, so much of pain agony, misery..helplessness of being torn between her own heart & soul. She always tried to be strong, keeping her feelings inside, but her eyes told a different story, of the pain she couldn't hide.
Why r u troubling him.. can't u see he is not well, her voice cracked.
Am I the one troubling him he almost said in a tone that mirrored hers.. his eyes now looked as much as pain as hers... it was the pain of her blaming him for the cause of those tears. His eyes no longer were glisten, they were all red and sore, tired of all the hurt..pain betrayal his past ..his cry to be with her. Lonely from & being away from all the happiness he ever had.
Jab se aaya hoon woh mujhe pareshan kar raha hain. Instead of mending him tum uski side le rahi ho.

-BLOG maitri part 45-

Precap
Maan angry at geet

-PREV PART 44 NEXT PART 46-
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Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Whoop whoop me first
Awesome update::
Urrgghh hate that Amy ki bachi alwaiiz irritating maan every second,,can't believe he had guts to call 911 but Maan got easily bailed by just a few calls
Poor maan alwaiiz getting ganged up on wiv no one on his side not even his dodo
Oooh so now maan angry on geet,,lets see how geet manofys him
Cont soon
Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
@hima dnt talk abt madhoshi its end was a shock to me
i still remember me was in pakistan
btw my relatives wen i read last part i almost fall out of my couzin bed and i was like
how could she do this
when everything opened she ended so soon
bt now i tnk it was goos the story dnt losse its main moral or aim or line
just as our drama did


@ hima translation 4 U


by seeing the end dnt u gt dishearted or b a looser
by seeing problems and troublems dnt loose ur strength
its just a start of a Love story
it was happiness at start bt now will be covered with sadness

i actually meant wen a lovestory start it has to be sad it cant be happy always same here till now it was more of love in friendship bt now its Love so it has to get some sad part dont loose hope darling!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by muskaan_cute19 - 14 years ago
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Yaaay me second
Another fabulous update baji 🤗
An emotional update though especially the end part 😭

So Maan actually is leaving, because he thinks that Geet has her own happy family, but in actual fact she is only happy because he is there..!! She is probabaly really happen that Maan is actually there as it makes her feel complete 😳

Loved the past where Geet lived her every day life as if Maan was with her, she even dressed differently because she knew he admired girls in such clothes... So she didn't miss him, because she always felt like he was there with her, she lived her life as she would have if Maan was there.. That is why she has become such a strong and independent women, because that is what her Genie would have wanted her to become
She lived her life with his memories, whilst he was living in pain of the past

Both Maan and Amy are constantly arguing, but I still do not understand why Amy hates Maan so much? 😕

Didn't like the little 911 problem that took place and Maan was actual going to raise his hand on Amy 😲 How could he do that? Afterall Amy is a little kid even if he was annoying Maan a lot...

And even when he got in the house he started to shout on Amy... 😭 Why is Maan being like this I know Amy has played loads of pranks on him, but Amy just a small child and that is what little kids do... Poor Amy he got really ill because he was really scared...
The last scene between Maaneet was just 😭

They both are expressing the pain they are feeling through their eyes they both can see pain in each others eyes, both of there eyes are like mirrors that reflect nothing but pain, mainly pain and longing to be together..

But Maan is in pain that she is blaming him for the tears she has, and he is tired as he has had a tough past and he somewhere wants her to be with him as well... 😭

When will Genie realise he is in love with his Dodo?

Maan angry on Geet this time, can't wait to read what happens seems like a argument is going to take place...

Once again loved the update 🤗
xx
Edited by humz_786 - 14 years ago
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Res OMG! Amy called 911?! He annoys me, but I feel sorry for him too. Waiting for the next update :)
Edited by Krishnaluv94 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh god
im so scared of genie shouting
bechara amy
wt is wrong with him
is he all right
hope he isss

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Posted: 14 years ago
@hima translation for u
by seeing the end dnt u gt dishearted or a looser
by seeing problems and troublems dnt loose ur strength
its just a start of a Love story
it was happiness at start bt now will be covered with sadness

i actually meant wen a lovestory start it has to be sad it cant be happy always same here till now it was more of love in friendship bt now its Love so it has to get some sad past dont loose hope darling!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hmmm... manpreet read the update silently... no happiness😒
maan almost slapped amy, well he was going through so much of pain that it all ended up like this... fine amy was wrong, actually very wrong but still i dont know y i felt that maan should have controlled his anger...well it was not exactly his fault as well... amy was irritating him like hell... mai hoti toh shayad thapad maar bhi deti... but still...n i felt bad seeing amy's condition, dodo's fear n maan's pain😭
Edited by Manpreetmann - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ramhari



Sure will give
i am scared Wardah Scared that it will end.
Last night I was rereading Madhoshi
There too when the pain ended the story ended 😭
I love dodo and Genie so much too.
Cant think of parting with them

arre baba ..there is no pain here..
they are just having a good time..
humara amy hain na...masti ka dose dene ke liyen...
he has lots of plans to trouble maan😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan_cute19

@hima translation for u
by seeing the end dnt u gt dishearted or a looser
by seeing problems and troublems dnt loose ur strength
its just a start of a Love story
it was happiness at start bt now will be covered with sadness

i actually meant wen a lovestory start it has to be sad it cant be happy always same here till now it was more of love in friendship bt now its Love so it has to get some sad past dont loose hope darling!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks sweety
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