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Posted: 14 years ago

😆😆😆

maine tera last post dekah to i thot u posted..
me was gonan shout yaayyy me first!!
lekin aisi kismat nahi😭😭😭😡😆😆😆😆😆
Edited by aashluvsmaan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nidhi!!
loved ur ehtesaab ka continuation!!
n thanks for the pics sweets!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

😆😆😆

maine tera last post dekah to i thot u posted..
me was gonan shout yaayyy me first!!
lekin aisi kismat nahi😭😭😭😡😆😆😆😆😆

main bhi wahi karne aayi thi..😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
arey yaar jaldi...my eyes r burnin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Posted: 14 years ago
diii...aur kitini der lgega🥱
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: niddzz


thank u so much aashu...!!! but i must admit the part i wrote is nothin widout EHTESAAB that di has created...!!! so the credit goes to muskan di..!!
4 the pics u kno they are as bribe so that we can get an update...!!!
u need more help in findin pics...just tell me what kind and may b little description i can help u find them...i m free sum time now..lol...but let me confess i dont kno how to upload them on IF...hehe...but can find them on geet FB and 4ward u d link...!!!

are thanks yaar..
my writeup is more or less ready..pics dhoondi hi nahi hai abhi tak..😆😆
yes muskaan is awesome! no words to describe her yaar..
she is a classs apart!
u dont kno how to paaste pics??????😲😲😲
see its very simple...seekhna hai kya?? mai sikhayegi..lekin kal !
abhi mai chali...2 baj gaye...kal kaam pe jaana hai subah suabh!😭😭😭😭😭
gn...😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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His eyes no longer were glisten, they were all red and sore, tired of all the hurt..pain betrayal his past ..his cry to be with her. Lonely from & being away from all the happiness he ever had.
Jab se aaya hoon woh mujhe pareshan kar raha hain. Instead of mending him tum uski side le rahi ho.
For god sake genie he is only 7yrs old
iska matlab yeh tho nahi woh kuch bhi kar sakta hain
she painfully says he just trying to win attention
attention ka mujhe pata nahi he is definitely winning lot of hateredness
she holds his color u can't hate him..
Maan was taken a back with her action, she was actually questioning him.
He looked at her grip & then inched backward feeling terribly hurt.
U can't hate him.. she said it again firmly.
he doesn't even know how to talk to elders. He doesn't have any basic manners a 7yrs old should have.
She still angrily repeated herself..like she was not listening to him
He snapped her hands.. I hate him.. I hate anyone who ill treats u. do u even know how I feel about all this. Do u know how much it hurts me. Yeh sab meri liyen kitna mushkil hain.
She was still lost ..u can't hate..him..her heart felt numb, like something in her was snapped

he shook her holding her arms .. do u even know wat u mean to me???
she froze for a moment.. & looked back into his eyes.. the eyes that were just accusing her, not listening to her plea..his own plea..just lost in a world that kept them apart.

do u know??? she asked still looking into the barrier.
her question shook his mere integrity, his mere existence. He was looking into her eyes piercingly & suddenly this question just disillusioned everything. Those piercing eyes of hers , were like fire they burned his soul. He instantly released her arms his eyes dipped down.. not able to bare those piercing deep almond eyes. The question turned back to him changing every thing he thought, his believe, his feelings, his emotions, he couldn't stand their any longer. He probably just felt a spark of his deep emotions.

She fell on her knees helplessly seeing those uncertainty still in his eyes..his denial..his refusal to his own feelings. His yet again running away from the reality. How was she to confront him in this state of mind.

do u know??? her question haunted him as he paced restelessly in his room. he pushed his hair behind unsure of the answer & that question just scared his heart further. he had to get away from here. from her before he losses it completely.


Rahul went back to his room after tucking the kids under the spread. He sat on the bed & thought about the whole days incidents. It was all not right. Then his thought went over maan's jealousy his possessiveness for his dodo. He thought for a while..picked a photo frame & slowly caressed it. He thought for a while caressing the cheek of his love. He placed a small peck on her forehead & sighed. He picked his phone & punched the numbers.
Plz call cut mat karna..
she cut the call ..after all wat happened she didn't want to talk.
he closed his eyes & called again
jaan it is not about us
she cut the call again.
Maan over heard his conversation & stood froze near the door. He had come to say sorry to his dodo & tell her he was leaving tomorrow. Then when he scanned the room it looked more like a guest room.

He didn't understand wat exactly was going on. He got really worried for his dodo now. When he reached another room, which they had decided as her room when they brought the house. He slowly peeped in to see she was crying holding the phone in her hand. He didn't understand why was rahul staying in the guest room & why was she not answering his call.
Kanhi mera gussa rahul pe tho nahi uttar rahi
oh god yeh sab kya ho gaya. I ruined their life.
He went back to his room feeling angry at self. Strangely he was happy to see them apart. That was even more disturbing. How sadist he could be. Why was he so happy to see them apart. He wanted to scream, wanted to yell.. vent out his emotions. he couldn't sleep it was past mid night.

He went to the basement just to find amy sitting cuddled up in a corner. Amy looked at him from the corner of his eyes & turned his back to him. Maan didn't want to say anything him as he was already really ruined lot of things.
Maan - Tum yanha kya kar rahen ho
amy - I can't sleep with these long hairs he cribbed
Maan almost laughed ..tell me about it.. I used to hate it so much myself.
Amy cutely got excited - u used to wear turban
Maan made a face yah until I was 15
amy - then
Maan - I fought with dad & cut it
amy - mama ne kuch nahi kaha?
Maan - my mom died when I was young
amy sweetly - aapki mama nahi meri mama
Maan smiled & hugged him.. that was it about his dodo she always accepted him the way he was. he knew his dodo would have got angry but then finally accepted it.
Amy - phir dodo mujhe kyun nahi cut karne dethi?
Maan couldn't answer that, he knew how stubborn she was
amy - pata hain school main sab mujhe tease karthen hain
Maan looked at him. He looked pale & drawn. He felt bad he was angry at him earlier today.
Maan - shouldn't u be in ur bed now
he nodded
Maan - challo
amy pulled his hand down - aap mama ko mat batana
he smirked
amy frowned ..
amy went to his room intentionally switching off the lights knowing that Maan would need it as he was still there. Maan shook his head knowing him by now...he turned again hitting his foot on the table. Dodo!!! he wanted to scream.. but he just hit the table in frustration. ..yet again hurting his hand on the plank that was on the table.


-BLOG maitri part 46-


Precap
Maan trying to fix things between rahul & geet

-PREV PART 45 NEXT PART 47-
thanxs a lot for all the comments
love u all a lot
please please comment
will PM later
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Haillahhh😍 ...me 1st after long long tym...😍

feeling like Jumping on the bed My Day yupieee...
loved the update❤️... its really great


Originally posted by: muskanp

Maan - Tum yanha kya kar rahen ho
amy - I can't sleep with these long hairs he cribbed
Maan almost laughed ..tell me about it.. I used to hate it so much myself.
Amy cutely got excited - u used to wear turban
Maan made a face yah until I was 15
amy - then
Maan - I fought with dad & cut it
amy - mama ne kuch nahi kaha?
Maan - my mom died when I was young
amy sweetly - aapki mama nahi meri mama

Cute...🤗

Wondring itni raat ko Geet kis se baat kar rahi thi??? Rahul tu apni sweetheart se kar raha tha??? 😳
hmmm jugno mama jesa jasos chahiye yahaan🤪

Maaneet r in so much pain... "😉Izhar Bhee Mushkil Hai Kuch Kah Bhee Nahin Saktay Majboor Hai Uff Allah Chup Rah Bhee Nahi Saktay😉"...
MUSKAN




Edited by NayabSaher - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow i cant believe that i'm third to comment
it was an amazing update..
amy has made his dad act like a kid 😆
ab maan dodo ban raha hay
dr. rahul is dr. naintara's hubby na..
i'm really lovin this..
and thanx for the update.. it was a double update for me 😃😛
cant get enough of ur FF's.. cont soon
Noor
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res
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yeh kya hua kaisa hua kab huaaa 😭😭😭
cannot see these two in pain di jaldi se MU clear karooo
Edited by Maaneet_09 - 14 years ago

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