maaneet FF[My knight in Shining armor]note on pg68 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
awesome...

maan is in a dilemma...lets c what he does...

waiting for the shock...will she hug him or something??

continue soon...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
nice part...what shock???cont soon...thanks 4 pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
the story is developing nicely but im getting annoyed😭 at the way you end just too early..its too abrupt and short..make it longer...thanks for the pm⭐️ ...keep up the goodwork👏 and please next part i want to see something really happening before 😉 you end it again..is the surprise like this? she stabs him with the dagger? nooo but i trust you make it a happy start...good luck😊
Edited by wala66 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
wonderful update!!!
o geet enjoy her freedom... thats gud .
poor Maan he stuck b/w phases ..what shock??? why did you stop here just cant wait for next part...
plz cont soon and thnks for pm:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
awesome update
wat kind of shock ?
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
fanx 4 da update luvd it
finally geet ran away
what shock plzzz cont soon x
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely update...thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Guyz enjoy reading it... plz leave comment and give feedback abt character and story... i like to read what you guyz r thinking while reading... plz press like button and dont b kanjoos... silent readers please come out of silent mode and give ur veiws...
once again enjoy reading it...😉

Part 4

Maan jumped back and princess attack him with dagger in her hand. Maan was taken back by her action. Princess once again launched herself towards him. Maan jumped back again and bend down and took dagger out of his boot.

He stopped her next attempt with his dagger. She looked at him with rage in her eyes. She was breathing loudly and she said while catching her breath "If you are here for token of gratitude, then I have nothing to give you at moment."

After completing her sentence she turned away and once again attacked him with more force. He stopped her again and now he started his attempt she stopped his each attempt with grace. "Princess is not just a pretty face after all" thought Maan with smile.

While stopping his attempt Geet never know when she was trap between his body and wall. Geet's dagger was under Maan's dagger, they both were trying to catch their breath while their eyes were locked observing each other move. Maan slowly raised his free hand slowly pulled princess scarf over her face. He was once again stunned by her beauty, his eyes slowly move form her one feature to other. At the end his eyes stopped at her lips he smiled lightly then said "I won't mind kiss as token as gratitude"

As she heard his words the angry demon in her woke up and she pushed him away. She again and again launched herself at him with dagger he kept on stopping her each attempt. She once again attack him and this time instead of stopping her attack he just jumped aside while pulling her scarf off her head.

Geet's hair came out. Her dark hairs were trap for Maan as soon as he saw princess this time he lost sanity. She was breathing heavily, there was dagger in her hand ready to attack again and wind was playing with her hairs and she had frown on her face which was making her looking more sexy.

Geet saw her opponent got distracted and she took full advantage of his situation and instead of attacking him with dagger she gather all force and kicked his leg.

Everything happened so fast one moment Maan lost his balance and fell on the ground and next moment princess was over his chest. Her one knee was on ground while other was on Maan's chest. She placed the tip of her dagger directly over Maan's heart. She smiled for a moment and asked "what your name sir Knight?"

Maan is much stronger than princess and she could be next moment under him without much effort but he was liking this side of her infect he never saw this side of woman before in his life.

All the women that came in his life was one whom he flirt with or the one that who entertain him and drool over him. He never had serious girlfriend because of his profession.

He smiled and replied "Maan singh khurana!"

"Well! Sir Maan singh khurana why are you following me?" she asked him with authority.

"I am here to take you back home!" he replied.

She was so near his face, she could feel his breath over her lips; she could smell tobacco over his lips yet she want to taste them. She threw the indecent thought away and concentrated on her present.

"Tell them I won't come back until they change their decision!" she ordered him.

Maan's reply shocked Geet "I am not a royal messenger!" he shot back at her.

"Well I am not coming with you, you can go back" she informed him.

She then pressed her dagger at little over his heart and murmured softly "I don't mind stabbing you but you saved my life once that is why I am letting you go if you cross my path again you won't be lucky next time."

Maan just smiled in response. She got up from him and pulled her scarf from his hand and walked out of alley gathering her bag in her arms.

Geet walked out of alley towards the more crowded side of market. "What did her highness think I will let her walk out on me that easily?" thought Maan and ran after her once she reached the heart of market he started his drama.

"Geet!" he called her at top of his voice. She stopped at once and turned towards his voice "how dare he call me by my name?" she thought.

"Geet! how could you leave me?" "Please don't leave me!" he said.

"Don't you dare to say that again!" Geet warned him.

Maan looked into her eyes and got lost again and then he slowly walk towards her and bend in front of her as he was about to propose her, he took her hand in his and said "Geet don't leave me, my life without you is nothing, if you really want to go then please take my breath, my heartbeat, my laughter, my pain, my love, my life, my existence with you because without you none of these matter. Geet I know I have faults and flaws in me but you are great person because you love for who I am, Geet you are the most beautiful thing in my life, I will always be there for you, I will always be there holding candle in darkness, I will always be there as a shadow in scorching sunlight, I will always be there holding umbrella even before it rains Geet I will always be there to save you from each and every pain and problem, I will be even there to face death before it touches you because Geet Maan is nothing without you, Geet if you left me today I will be left alone forever, Geet punish me however you want me just don't leave me!"

Geet was lost in his words she always dream of some one's love, who is there to hold her hand, who is there to save her from surrounding, who is there for her not for her crown, who is there with her like her own shadow and never leave her.

For unknown reason her lips smile. She was brought out of trance by some one comment in background "What a beautiful couple!"

She took her hand out of his but as soon as her hand left his she felt empty. She was about to roar when she was once again shocked by his words "She is my wife and she is leaving me because of our silly fight over color of curtains!"

She wanted to kill him with her glance if possible because of his words.

Maan didn't know from where he put such an emotional words together because he had never even thought of saying anything cheesy to someone and here he sound more like Romeo than Maan. But he can't deny something in her eyes force him to say this all.

Geet thought it is better to walk out of here with him then creating a scene. She came and held his hand and guided him out of market and he followed her without word. She heard cheers from behind as they walked away from crowd. All the girls were giving Geet shy smiles while all the Guys were giving Maan very indecent advices.

She took him somewhere private once they reached in park which empty she pushed him away "How dare you call yourself my husband?" she questioned him.

"Why? What's wrong with me?" he asked her.

Geet looked at him from top to bottom and try to point out what wrong with him but she couldn't. He was too perfect, each of his body curves was perfect curved, he was tall and handsome more over he is ready to die to save her life and he come to take her back.

When she didn't replied his question he said "at least I don't sleep with your maids!"

He really regret saying these words because as soon as words left his mouth pain and agony slip inside her big eyes. After a moment pain was took over by anger and disgust in her eyes and she turned and walked away.

As soon as Maan realized what he had done he ran after her and held princess by her shoulder but before he could say anything she pushed his hand away and warned him with each word dip with anger and disgust "Don't you dare touch me and don't you dare you follow me!"

Maan got irritated with princess tone and said "fine!"

"Fine!" she repeated his word and turned and started walking once again.

Maan saw her retreating figure in darkness and unknown fear swallowed him.

to b continue...
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Edited by somakazmi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
nice update continue soon dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update...
nice jodha - akbar scene..

thanks for pm..
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