FF M&G'KHOOBSOORAT HAI ZINDAGI' pt24@120 31/1/2013 - Page 36

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"KHOOBSOORAT HAI ZINDAGI"

" PART 17 "


Both are still lost in their own world when a loud noise of horn bring them back . both parted themselves maan looked at geet her head is down and her face turn into a dark pink shade with embarrassment and she is fidging her dopatta . maan rest his finger under her chin made her to look into his eyes and asked with a husky voice

" Geet will u come with me on a date "

thats when geeet realize everything and she become more nervous she never go out with anyone alone in her life there is always someone with her but whats now if she say no then maan will b hurt ,that a thing she cant accept , she looked at him he is waiting for her answer with so much love and hope somewhere deep in side him he is also scared and nervous its a first time that he is asking someone he always the one threw orders seeking permission and asking anything is not in MAAN .

If she say no then , and the way she is staring him with mix expression there is confusion , nervousness , trust . Maan see her state she unable to speak and maan took her silence as her deny maan close his eyes pain and compose himself before he speak something to her to ease the situation that did not make her sad to she refusing him

Before maan could speak he heard a meek voice " ok " maan instantly open his eyes to confirm is he hear right or its his on illusion . Geet see him staring with confusion she smile a little to confirm her answer and node in yes. Maan's face light up with the thought of his geet has trust on him and she is coming with him making him feel special he want to hug her but control himself and lead her back to car he very gently opne car's door for her when she sit he come on his seat and start driving toward the surprise .


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Their car reach on the destination Geet who is engross in her thoughts did not see where they were now , maan come and open door for geet when geet didnot move he poked geet bringing back to reality . geet raise her eyebrows then see maan holding door for her she get embarrass and quickly come out. She looked around its not look like a resturant or a crowded area , inafact its looks very deserted place where they r standing its a porch with dim lights and there is only one car thats maan's .

" chalein geet "

maan said with a gentle smile geet once looked at maan she lowered her head and start to move to the direction where maan is standing when she pass maan he held her hand stoping her to move further . When maan held her hand geet's breath got struck in her throat she is already hell nervous and maan making it mor dficult for her and a shiver run through her veins when she feel maan's chest touching her back maan near her ear as his hot breath landed on her neck making her knees week Geet crunch her dopatta in her free hand . But maan's words bring her back

" geet do u trust me "

maan ask in a whisper he want to see a happy geet without fear without tension atleast when she is with him he want her to become comfortable with him but when he saw geet's scared and nervous face he did not like that .

Geet turn back to face him she saw a man with unconditional love , care , respect , how she cant trust him his eyes always give her strength to fight with her sorrows he never speak so much but his eyes always speak to her giving hher strength that he will b ther when no one come to her he is waiting for her answer but never say a word now he is in pain because he think she d'not trust him enough and how can geet let her maan hurt . A smile crept on her lips when she recall her thoughts of saying maan as HER MAAN at that moment she decided whats she want .

Geet close the gape between them and she put her hand on maan's cheek and speak without any hesitation

" I TRUST U MAAN MORE THEN ANY ONE IN THE WORLD "

There is a new light and smile on her face that makes maan's heart jump in joye and unlimited happiness fill his body . Maan held her in his strong arms in a peaceful hug
geet hug him
back and rest her head on his chest .

After a while maan parted and lead geet to other side this area is more dark there is no light only moon is there to witness their love but now geet did not hesitate she held maan's hand and start walking with confidence .


And then the sight come in front of her took her breath away she looking at the sight in amaze . Maan come from behind he kept his one her waist and with other hand he held geet's hand and ask

" u like that "

Geet turn to his side she held his both arms and said with a spark in her eyes and a glowing face like a child get his most desired toy

" i love it its so beautiful just like my dream world maan "


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Edited by love4all - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
haye awsme maan asked date geet said yes and now maneet on date and maan sai if she trust love geet answer she trust him fully do next soon
Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear
change the heading dear its still updating
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: payalpari

awesome update dear

change the heading dear its still updating



because i am still updating dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
waiting 4 date
cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely...

they r finally on the date...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

PS -- welcome back...missed u n ur updates...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love4all



because i am still updating dear

opps sorry 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum part...
geet trust him more than anyone else..
she s slowly opening up with him..
waiting for the sight dat made her so happy..
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
well thats a long gap but glad u updated...
maan asked for a date...
wondering where did he take her

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