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Posted: 14 years ago
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FF:Revenge from the lover

Part 19

In the morning,Maan woke up and saw geet's smiling face.He remembered about the previous night and smiled.He softly picked her up and put her on the other side of the bed.He was trying his level best not to wake her up.Then he went to the washroom and after that he went to the kitchen for making lemon juice.When he came back to the room.He saw geet holding her head.

Maan:Geet tum yeh juice pee lo.

Geet drank the juice.Then she went to the washroom when she came back,She saw maan getting ready for the office.Maan looked at her.

Maan(Worriedly):Geet tumhare sar ka dard theek hua?

Geet(Smiled):Haan bas theek hai.

Maan:Tum aisa karo ka aaj office mat jao.

Geet:Its ok maan.Main theek hoon.

Maan:Nahi main nahi chahta ka tumhi koi masla ho.Iss liye tum aaj office mat jao.

Geet:Acha nahi jate.

Maan smiled.Geet came close to him and put the tie around his neck.

Geet(Softly):Thank you.

Maan(Questioningly):Kis liye?

Geet(Looked at him):For everything.

Maan(Smiled):Tumhi kisse cheez ka liye mujhe thank you khane ke zarurat nahi hai.Kyuki tumhi khush rakhna mera farz hai.

Geet put her arms around his neck and closed her eyes while taking her face close to him.Maan put his hands on her waist and kissed her on the lips.Maan wanted to bite her lips but then he stopped because he didnot want to hurt her.They stopped kissing.

Maan(Whispered in her ear):Tum mera saath aaj diva hotel main dinner karo ge.

Geet nodded her head in positive.

Maan(Lovingly): I will be waiting for you at 8:00 pm...Ab mujhe late ho raha hai main chalta hoon.

Geet:Per aap ne tu breakfast bhi nahi kiya.

Maan:Main office main kar loon ga.Acha apna khayal rakhna.Meet you at 8:00 pm.

Maan went to his office.At 7:00 pm,geet was selecting her dress.She picked white saree because maan loved white colour.

She got ready when her mobile rang,She attended the call.

Geet:Maan main bas aate hoon...

Geet(After hearing the other side):Nahi aisa nahi ho sakta...You are lying...

Geet(After listening to the caller):Theek hai main wahan aate hoon and i'm sure that i will prove you wrong.

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Geet entered in the restaurant.The hall was decorated beautifully by white and red roses with candles.The lights were dim and music was playing in the background.

That was the song:

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7eXzIlmmiEI&feature=player_detailpage[/YOUTUBE]

She saw maan bent on his knees.When she came closer.Maan looked at her eyes.His smile turned into sadness.

Maan(Questioningly):Geet tumhi kya hua?Tum kyu ro rahe ho?

Geet(Crying):Mere rone ke waja aap ho.

Maan(Confused):Main..Maine kya kiya?

Geet was trying to speak.

Maan:Tumhi yeh sab acha nahi laga?I'm sorry agar maine tumhi hurt kiya.

He was about to wipe her tears but she stopped him.

Geet(Angrily):Don't touch me maan singh khurana...I have trusted U...But you have broken my trust.

Maan(Trying to stop his heart from breaking):Mujhe kuch samijh main nahi aa raha ka tum kiya kha rahe ho...Maine kya kiya hai?

Geet(Angrily):Tum mujh se poch rahe ho tumne kya kiya.Tum ne mujh se mera sab kuch cheen liya...(Her tears fall) How could you do this to me.Maine kabhi nahi socha tha ka tum itna gir jao ga.

Maan(Controlling his tears):Geet maine humasha sirf tumhare khushi ka bare main socha hai.

Geet(Angrily):Khushi tumne murder kar ke mujhe khushi de hai.

Maan then remembered about dev's incident.

Maan(Feeling guilty):I'm sorry geet..Main murder nahi karna chahta tha per pata nahi kaise mere waja se ..

Geet stopped him.

Geet(Angrily):Main ab aap ka saath nahi rah sakte.

Maan(Confused):Matlab?

Geet:Mujhe divorce chahiye.

Maan(Shocked and two tears fall from his eyes):Geet tum jante ho main aisa nahi kar sakta.Main tumhi nahi chor sakta.

Geet:Theek hai main bhi aap ka saath nahi rah sakte.Main yahan se jaa rahe hoon.

Geet turned to leave but maan stopped her by gripping her arm.

Maan(Tears fall from his eyes):Geet tum mujhe chor kar nahi jaa sakte...Main akela rah jao ga Please.

Geet:Maan mujhe jane do...Main yahan nahi rahna chahte.

Maan(Fall on his knees while pleading):Please mat jao geet.Mujhe chor kar mat jao.Main tumse bohat pyar karta hoon pleasee.

Geet's heart was telling her to stop but then her mother's face came to her mind.She pulled her arm while tears started to fall from her eyes.She quickly walked away.She knew if she stopped then she could never leave.

Maan(Shouted while crying):Pleaseee come back.I can't live without you.I love you too much...Come back!!

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Rahul knocked at the door in the hotel.Sameera opened the door.Rahul happily hugged her.

Sameera(Confused):Kya hua bhaiyya??Aap itna kyu khush ho?

Rahul(Happily):Our mission is accomplished.

Sameera(Gleefully):Sach main bhaiyya...Wow!!...Waise iss mission ka bare main mujhe sab kuch nahi pata...Thori confusion hai aap ne kaha tha jab mission pora ho jaiye ga tu aap mujhe batayein ge.

Rahul:Ok.So basically story tab se start hui thi jab dad ko ye pata chala ka maan ka father Mr.Khurana humare mother se pyar karte tha.Dad ko jab iss bare main pata chala tu inhone mom ko mara.Mr.Khurana ne dad ko mom ko marte dekha tu inhone dad ko roka.Jis ke waja se Mr.Khurana ke dad se laraye ho gaye.Mr.Khurana ne dad ko shoot kar diya.Dad ke death ka baad mom hum dono ko iss jaga se dor le gayein.Mom ke death cancer se ho gaye aur hum log orphan house main chale gaye.Wahan se Ravi uncle ne hum dono ko adopt kar liya.Baad main mujhe pata chala ka Mr aur Mrs.Khurana ke car accident main death ho gaye.Main khush ho gaya lekin mujhe baad main pata chala ka Mr.Khurana ka aik beta bhi hai...(angrily)Iss murderer ka beta itne aaram main rah raha tha aur hum log aise gharebo wale zindagi guzar rahe tha.Maine maan ko dekha tu iss ke chakal iss ka baap se bohat milte thi isse dekh kar mujhe iss murderer ke yaad aate thi.Main isse tabah karna chahta tha jaise iss ke baap se humare sare family tabah kar de.

Sameera(Confused):Per maan aap ko paise kyu deta tha?

Rahul:Iss liye kyuki isse pata chal gaya tha ka dad iss ke company main kaam karte tha.Maan ko inke murder ka bare main nahi pata tha.Main maan ka karib rah kar iss ke weakness jana chahta tha.Per jab mujhe iss ke weakness nahi mile.Tu maine tumhi is ke university main bheja.Woh ye nahi janta tha ka tum mere behen ho.

Sameera:Maine haar tareka se isse trap karne ke koshish ke per i failed.Tab mujhe pata chala ka iss ka khawab main koi ladke aate hai jis se woh pyar karta hai.

Rahul:Jab tumne mujhe iss bare main bataya tu main pareshaan ho gaya ka main ab kya karoon.Per fate was also at our side.Tab hi tu mujhe baad main pata chala ka maan ko iss ke dream girl matlab geet mil gaye hai.Maine start se hi koshish ke ka kisse tara geet maan per trust na kare.Baad main mujhe dev mil gaya main janta tha dev maan se nafrat karta hai.Phir kismat ne mera saath diya aur savitri devi ko geet dev ka liye pasand aa gaye.Maine dev ko bohat mushkil se razi kiya aur dev aur geet ke shadi ho gaye.Poor maan sare kaam woh karta tha for example geet ke mother ke treatment e.t.c per hum geet ka samne aise show karte tha ka ye sab dev karta hai.

Sameera(Confused):Per aap ne dev ko kyu maarva diya?

Rahul:Sara kuch sahee chal raha tha magar dev aur mere baatein geet ke maa ne sun lee aur iss budiya ne sab maan ko bata diya.Maan ne jab dev ko arrest karwa diya tu mujhe dar tha dev mere bare main kuch bol na de.Maine iss ko maarva diya.Poor maan woh samijhta raha ka iss ke waja se dev maara hai.Per ye Maan bhi na iss ne geet se shadi kar le.Maine in ka relation build hone se pehle geet ko aise evidence dekhaye jis ke waja se woh maan ko galat samijhne lage...Per baad main pata nahi maan ne kya jado kar diya.Main jaan gaya tha woh iss se pyar karne lage hai.Tu aaj maine isse aise evidence dekhaye jis se ye prove hota tha ka maan ne iss ke mother ka murder kiya hai.Geet was not believing me but maine aise evidence iss ka samne rakhe ka wise se wise banda bhi mera yakeen kar leta.Maine ye iss liye kiya ta ki geet maan ko chor jaye.(Cheerfully) Aur isne maan ko chor diya.Atlast Maan Singh khurana has destroyed!!

Geet was standing outside the door.She was shocked to hear it.She came here so that she could ask Rahul about some place where she could stay.Tears were falling from her eyes.She remembered when she pleaded maan to release dev from jail.He took back the case because of her happiness.She remembered different occasions when he preferred her happiness over his happiness.She was crying while feeling embrassed.She remembered that she left him alone when he was pleading to stop.He was trying to tell her how much he loved her but he couldnot make her trust him.

Tera Yakin Kyon Maine Kiya Nahi, Tujhse Raaha Kyon Juda

Mujh Pe Yeh Zindagi Karti Rahi Sitam, Tune Hi Di Hai Panah

Tera Mera Rishta Puraana

She ran to that place so she could atleast ask for punishment.Her heart was telling her that something bad was going to happen.She went to the hotel but maan was not there.She remembered that time when she told him that his love was just attraction.She regretted.Then she was going to the home when she saw maan on the road.He was walking slowly on the road.It looked like he was walking without soul.She thought that she saw that scene somewhere before.She whispered maan's name and ran to him.Maan looked at her with expressionless face but with pain in eyes.

Aankhen Hai Nam Meri, Saasein Chubhan Meri

Zakham Huwa Pir Haara, Dil Ke Viraane Mein

Mere Phasane Mein, Tu Hi Toh Har Dum Raha

Tera Mera Rishta Purana

Maan saw a truck coming close to geet.His heart told him to save his love.He pushed her away but couldnot save himself and hit by the truck.Geet looked at maan's body covered with blood.She remembered about her nightmare.

Precap:Last part

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Maan alive or died!

Promo:

Chal diye tum ka jab yakee aaya

Zindagi dhoop tum ghana saya

Geet was crying.Pinky was trying to console her while looking at adi who was controlling his own tears.


Please Read the note!

Edited by pickachu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
NOTE:
Sorry for the sooo long and kind of boring update!
The song i have added'Tera mera rishta'.
I love the song and the first stanza is basically for geet.
I think so u all are going to kill me in the last of this part or the next part.Lol!
Actually i needed tissue papers while writing maan's pleading part.
I know that was not that sad but i really got attached to maan's character in my ff.
I hope u guys like the part.
By the way thanxxx for ur wonderful comments.
Actually i was kinda busy.
I could answer only few comments individually but then i believe in equality that's why i have not answered anyone individually.Lol!
Please leave ur comments.
They mean alot to me.
This is the vm on that song.
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T1NLqtFXn6E&feature=player_detailpage[/YOUTUBE]


Love,
Fatima


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
Amazing update::
Urrrgh hate that Rahul for doing this to maan wen he wasn't even at fault
Glad dat geet found out the truth
Last part left me shocked😲
hope maan doesn't die
Cont soon Xx...
Lovely VM & song
Thx 4 the Pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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rES

Aww poor maan...
Can't believe Geet did that...😭
😭😭😭😭
Rahul and sameera are the most evil people i have met...
this FF is brilliant.. 😆😆😆😆😆
i
love the way you write...
you can honestly imagine yourself being there while reading it...
you can feel the emotions and pains yourself while reading it...
i always cry whn maan and geet are crying or when they are in pain...😭😭😭😭😭
Maan saved Geet's life but put his own life at risk...
hope he gets better soon and please dont tell me that you are finishing this FF..

this FF is the best..
it always has everything init..
that is needed...
you actually can relate to the story and i loved it...
xx cant wait for the next part...
👏👏
👏👏👏👏👏
Edited by Nazmaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome part!
i hate rahul :@ how could he???
OMG i hope maans okay!
continue soon x
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
awesome part
but pls maan should n must be alive !!!
his love was true ..loved it !!!! dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb yaar plzzz update soonnn
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awesome update dear
loved it...hate this rahul
hope Maan is alive plz don't let him die
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg maan met an accident...
plz nthg gonna hapen 2 maan

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