Maneet FF - Journey called life (OLD THR 1 - 2011-12) IMP NOTE PG 126 - Page 61

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Posted: 13 years ago
CONGRATS DI 👏

NICE UPDATE 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Lakshmi.. Its been so long never hear from you.
We understand ur responsibilities and priorities had increased...
Hope u r doing good there.. Guess lil princess keeping u bzy..
Do drop by whenever u are free...

Thanks for the wonderful updates...
Loved the story progress...
Looking forward for next part...


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Posted: 13 years ago
simply awesome dear
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amazing updates...

u have divided GHSP into two parts and one story based on one part and another story based on second part...

it is very interesting to read altogether different story from GHSP based on same scenes...

precap----Daadi will come to know of Komal being calling Maan papa and she will assume that Maan has a daughter which she doesn't know or Daadi will come to kow that Geet is mother of a daughter and all her hopes will shatter to make Geet Maan's wife...

waiting for next update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it... welcome back dear and very huge hugs..congratulations lol to ur baby.
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Posted: 13 years ago
CONGRATS FOR THE LIL PRINCES
plz update nxt part soon,if u get any time plzzz.
waiting😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

Congrats dear & hope both of you r fine.

Loved the update.


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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey dearies...I have read all your comments...thanks a lot for your wishes. The little princes doing all fine 🤗.
Here goes part 16...Pls read and comment
PART 16:

You must finish with the storeroom rearrangement before you leave from here...is it clear?

He tells it with an attitude and she smiles seeing him back to the normal form...and that proves he's really not angry on her. He turns around and smiles at himself trying to hide from her.

Geet continues with her storeroom work...Till yesterday, I used to get upset for his bossy attitude...but wonder why I didnt like that attitude missing in him today...Main bhi na kya kya soachrahi thi...She hits her forehead with her right hand and smiles at herself.

Maan gets back to his cabin...Yeh ladki Sach Main Pagal hain...She has a problem when I am angry and even when I am not angry..See what all she was assuming

It was end of office and for the first time, both carried this unusual confusions running into their mind when they reached their respective homes.

At Geet's place...

It was an extended working day for Geet as she had to complete rearranging the stock room and it will be carried on to next day. She was all smiling and in a good mood...Pinky cought her while Geet was lost in all what happened today.

Oye Geet...kya baat hain? I am seeing you smiling like this after a very long time! I guess DD didnt come to office today...hain na?

Who said so? He did came to office today.

Oh then I assume he has stopped scholding you or irritating you...

Oh yaah...but then, I made sure he continues with his usal attitude...Geet closes her eyes...yeh main ne kya bol diya??

I mean, I mean...

Arre Wah Geet...I could see that you are getting very much used to his tough attitude by now...She teases and winks at Geet. That's what our DD does on girls.

Geet continues making a serious face...Ofcourse he has to have a tough attitude...afterall, he owns so many businesses

Yahi Baat jab main us din samjarahithi...tab tho tum nahin maan rahi thi ? (The same thing I was trying to make you understand the other day, you were not listening to me)

Woh Woh...Mujhe neend aa rahi hain...Good Night. Geet tries to escape from Pinky as she herself didnt knew the answer

Geet gets back to her room and takes a big Sigh...Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hain? I used to hate him to the core...then what happened all of a sudden? She paces within her room...Why my heart is restless..some similar feeling that I possessed towards Dev...

And Why am I not able to hear anyone talking against him? Why? She closes her eyes and feels each and every close encounters with Maan...His Eyes...his eyes are really hypnotic. Why am I seeing myself clearly in those eyes?

She comes near the window and looks at the moon...The Moon which symbolises a ray of hope inbetween pitch darkness.

Suddenly, her eyes fall on the calender kept in the side table which has highlighted 25th June...

How can I forget? Its 25th June tomorrow...I have lot of things to do before I leave to office.

At KM:

There's pin drop silence over the dining area. Daadi, Maan, Yash and Annie have taken their respective places on the dining table. Maan remembered the incedents that has been happening with Geet around and a smile touches his lips without acknowledging him

Daadi and Vicky get to look at each other surprisingly as they cought Maan with a slight smile on his face. Maan wasn't aware of it

Kya baat hain bro? Aaj aap bade khush lagrahe hain (What's the matter bro? You seem to be very happy today)

Maan gives a surprising look at him.

Vicky bete...I have noticed some changes in your brother from the time he has taken over Indian Paints...Wonder who the root cause hiding behind this smile.

Vicky and Daadi knew the answer very well...but they want Maan to confess this

What? Am I not suppose to smile? Huh! Maan gets frustated

Daadi holds his hand...eisa baath nahin hain Maan...We want to see you smiling always. You know something, I have been dieng to see this one smile in your face for the last 4 years...and from when I got to see Geet, I could see all my wishes are coming true...I must say she is a true angel sent by God.

Maan finishes with his dinner...

Maan beta, aap ne tho abi tak kuch nahin Kaya!

I am thro with my dinner daadima and he leaves to his room.

Vicky is concerned...

Daadi, did I say something wrong?

Daadi smiles at him...Vicky bete, This behaviour of his invariably acknowledge the fact that what ever we have commented now is true...

What do you mean Daadi?

I mean, he's trying to hide or burry these feelings by avoiding to talk further about it.

What shall we do now? How to find if he is interested in Geet or not?

Arre budhu...ofcourse he is interested in Geet but he is not willing to accept it. He's still hurt with his past.

Its so true, from when I have taken over IP, I have seen lot of changes happening in me...I was mistaking my smile to be an assumption, but I am actually smiling. Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hain? What happened all of a sudden? He paces within his room...Why my heart is restless..some similar feeling that I possessed towards Neha...

No body dare to advise me but why do I end up doing what she says? She closes his eyes and feels each and every close encounters with Geet...Her Eyes...Her eyes are really hypnotic. Why am I seeing myself clearly in those eyes?

He is so lost in his thougt that he missed to read the letter given by Komal's mama. Its still kept in his folder

He moves towards the balcony...to view outside world and relax himself...just then his mobile buzzes with a reminder for tomorrow..

How can I forget? Its 25th June tomorrow...I have lot of things to do before I leave to office.

Next day Morning:

Nandiniji visits KM and meets Daadi and Vicky.

(Author's Note: Nandni is principal of the Kinder Garden School where Komal is studying)

Namasthe Savithriji...How are you?

Nandiniji...Namasthe...Me fine and you?

I am fine...sorry, I couldnt make it for the Pooja...I had some other commitments.

Its OK

I thougt of making a visit to your place and also meet Vicky as its been very long time.

Pranam Aunty...Vicky takes her blessings

Jeethe raho beta...Nandini pats on his cheeks...so, hows your studies going on? When are you going back?

I have completed my course and I will stay back here helping bro with his business...

WOW...that's a great decition.

Maan happens to pass by...

Maan bete...come here...look who is here

Maan walks towards them...Oops Nandiniji...I hope she doesnt discus about Komal

Namasthe and Maan takes her blessings...

Daadima, Nandniji, I have to take your leave now. Its getting late for my office.

Daadi thinks...why is Maan leaving so early today?He also looks a bit tensed

Its ok beta...you carry on.

Hmm..

Maan leaves and they sit down for a usual chat session...

Savithriji, I could see lot of changes in Maan...

Oh yes...we all are happy to see this change in him...and we know the true reason behind it. Daadi and Vicky smile looking at each other thinking of Geet.

Sahi kaha aap ne (You are right)...Komal hain hi itni pyaari..,Koi bhi ujs se pyaar karne lagega (Komal is so lovely...anybody will fall for her.)

Daadi and Vicky look at each other and then look back at Nandini...questioning...KOMAL??😲

Yaah...Komal! Maan didnt tell you about her? How come I know this and you still dont know?

Vicky was about to ask her what she knows...daadi guestures him to keep quite...

Oh...so her name is KOMAl? You see, I knew everything except her name...and gives a fake smile...leaving Vicky confused.

Will take your leave for now Savithriji...please do visit my place this Sunday...I have arranged a kitty party.

Sure...

Nandini leaves from there...leaving two confused souls behind

Daadima...who is this Komal? 😲

As if I know? Daadi is extremely tensed now she is pacing left right and centre and rolling her eyes..

Then why were you behaving like "I Know Every Thing" in front of Nandiniji?😕

Vicky...Try to understand They all think that Maan is very Aagyakaari Pota who follows my principals strictly. But what I heard from Nandniji, there's something that all my kitty friends know and I dont know...If I was proving this to Nandini, then in no time all my kitty friends will know that Maan doesnt respect me...he doesnt share all his important aspects of his daily life with me...tho meri kya izzat rah jaayegi?😕

Daadi drinks one glass of water at one go...Already there are enough confusions in life...Who is this Komal? Why Maan didnt tell me anything about her? That means he is in a secret relationship with this girl? Che chee...Hamen Maan se yeh umeed nahin thi. She takes a sigh before continuing...I guess Maan left early tody just to avoid being around when Nandni is here...I dont see a reason otherwise.

Sach main Daadi...Bro tho ek kadam aage nikle...Agal main Geet aur Bagal main Komal... (Bro has a step ahead...Geet in the left and Komal in the right) Vicky smirks😆

Daadi hits him on his shoulder...Shut up! There's only Geet...and that's final...What has maan thought about me? Do I have any respect or no? Jab poocho shaadi keliya mana karthe hain...aur ab yeh ladki...Kya naam hain uska? KOMAL! I have a doubt about the charector of this girl...why Maan has never spoken about her to us? Need to find out.

Maan forgot that I am his DAADIMA...now its time to needle the banana without hurting it...Its time to hear the wedding bells...I will make sure Geet gets this right of khurana khandan ki badi bahu😈

Precap: 25th June?

Edited by Vaidhumom - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
n give lots of love to little cutie pie
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update lakshmi...

Thanks for the update...

eagerly waiting for the next part

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