Maneet FF - Journey called life (OLD THR 1 - 2011-12) IMP NOTE PG 126 - Page 57

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey...just read the whole ff in a go...
its really awesome..the concept is really good...

just a single que..if geet is widow...den y her name is still ms geet handa n not mrs geet sharma...

eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
first a very big n hearty congrats 4 u n ur baby girl...

its pretty awesome part!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
congrats once again dear 😊
loved the update 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey i just read ur ff in one go
and i really like ur story.👏
looking forward to read more.
plzz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ff
add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Everyone...I have read all your wonderful comments and wishes...It got tears of joy 😭 ...and a biiig thank you to all🤗
Here goes Part 15. Still not sent PMs...Not finding time...SORRY
PART 15:
Bas itni si baat?
(Is that all?) Mama tells me that when you do a mistake you need to say "Sorry" and by doing so, you dont get small...instead, you are respected even more than before.

Maan is kind of convinced. He spends little more time with her and leaves

At IP Office:

Maan gets into the lift...The lift was getting closed when Geet just stoped it and got in hurriedly and almost bumped on him.

A strange restlessness covers them...SIR...

Geet opens her mouth to say Sorry. This word comes till the tip of her tongue and she gulps it...Sir...I had some personal work to be completed for which I had to be out of office for one hour...Since you were late...I had informed Pandeji before leaving...

He's fighting withhimself to tell one word...This is the right time to tell SORRY...Tell...Tell.. But He just answered her with a typical Hmm...and he's immediately out of lift when it stops.

Only Hmm? He should be upset with me for this...not done

Both get back to their respective desks still fighting with themself. Telling a SORRY seemed to be an easy task till the time they got to see each other...

Maan needed an urgent file from Geet...but he didnt call her...as he's unable to face her. He calls Manishshah and requests for the file.

Manishshah comes to Geet's cabin...

Ma'm HHB needs the accounts file...

HHB?

Hot Hot Boss!

What? Huh...She rolls her eyes...Then why HHB ...She rolls her eyes again for accepting what Manishah told her...I mean why sir didnt call me for this?
May be he wanted to get a glimse of me...
and smiles shyly lost in a different world.😍

Geet pats on his shoulder...stop dreaming and take this file before he yells...

Geet follows Manishshah and gets into Maan's cabin after knocking it.

Maan checking the file and Manishshah was drooling over him... Geet Guestures Manishshah to leave.

Maan missed a beat seeing her...Its the right time to tell her sorry...let me try. But again, Geet over took him

Sir...

Yes Geet..

I need to talk to you

I am busy. Lets talk later...He's doing directly opposite to what his mind says to do.

She turns to leave...she's confused with his attitude today...why is he so quite? She again turns back to look at him whilst walking ahead and she happens to hit on the side table

OUCH...she hurt her right feet

Geet...you need to look in the front while walking. He moks at her... She again stamps her right feet and further hurt it...twists her lips and leaves from there making an angry baby face

He notices that and smiles inwardly...Oops...am I smiling?

She gets back to her desk limping slightly...Mokking...I AM BUSY!!! That means I am sitting here without any work? Why is he not allowing me to talk? HUH!😡

But why is he so different today? For the last one week since I have known him, I have always seen him getting angry or showing his bossy attitude...but what happened to him today?

She does not like it and his attitude worries her even more now. She paces within her office cabin

I guess he's still angry with me...But why is he not showing it now? Is he trying to show his anger in a different way by avoiding me?

Tu bi na Geet...Kya zaroorat thi itna bolne ki...Ab teri naukri pakki gayi samjo...Bhugto!😕

Just then her phone rings...

Indian Paints Good Morning!

Good Morning! May I speak with Geet?

Geet here...

Geet bete...Maan's Daadi here

Ma'm...Oh I mean Daadima...how are you?

I am very fine bete...I just called to tell you thanks...

Thanks? Woh kis liye?

Yesterday, Maan walked down to complete rest of the pooja procedures. You had left by then.

Geet almost jumped out of her seat...REALLY?

Haan Beta...We all didnt expect this. You know, when Maan gets upset he gets into shell for a long time and what happened yesterday was a miracle and it all happened because of you.

Daadma...main...She is unable to comment due to her shock.

Geet bete...I have started building new hopes with all that happened yesterday. I owe you a lot due to this.

Daadima...Aap itni badi badi bathen karne lagi...I just had a casual talk with him that's it...she smiles weakly...

What ever...Now I am confident that Maan will get back to his earlier form...

Daadi...I am very happy to know that I was of some help.

Geet checks the time...She has to rush to get Komal now..

I'm sorry Daadi...I have to take your leave...Have some urgent work

Its ok beta...you take care.

Bye Daadi

Bye beta

On one side, she is happy with what Daadi informed her but on the other hand she is totally confused...What's happening?

Is he not angry with me? If not then why this strange behaviour? Maybe he pretend to be normal in front of Daadima.... She paces within her cabin again...I need to find out...is he planning to do all work by himself so that he can sack me? Oh no...What will I do? Komal is going to start with her schooling and now my job is more than important than ever before.

Babaji...please dont give me a new problem...I will be shattered if I had to leave this job.

She leaves to bring Komal from her nursery and all that time she was lost in her thoughts...Komal finishes with her routines and gets to sleep in her usual place in Geet's cabin.

Now, I need to find out what's going on in his mind...he's not allowing me to talk...Its ok, I need to find a way out.

Geet goes to Maan's cabin...He wasn't there. She checks with one of the labours...and found out he's in the store room...And she barges into there...

Maan didnt realise who was there...he just continued thinking its office boy...

Ramlal, I need to rearrange the storeroom...

There's no answer...

Ramlal...he turns around and didnt expect Geet to be there at that moment...

Geet...what are you doing here?

Sir...I need to talk to you...

Cant you see I am busy...will talk later...

he moves towards the door... Geet stops him by closing the door.

SIR..SIR...Please...

Please listen to me once...she pleades with tears in her eyes

Maan is taken back with her tears

Geet...Tumhare aankhon main Aansoo? (Why Tears in your eyes?)

She takes a long sigh before she continues...Sir...whatever I told yesterday it was just because I wanted you to feel light...and moreover, I couldnt see your Daadi's condition yesterday...At this age, she was all aiming for the return of happiness to the family...that's why I took a lead in speaking to you yesterday.

He looks at her in awe...

With what I told yesterday...She sobs continuesly...I didnt mean anything against you...I AM SORRY.

She conjoins both her hands and pleads again...Please dont punish me by sacking me from this job...I am depending on it...PLEASE...I am sorry!

He holds her conjoined hands...and they are lost in each other for a very brief moment...A silence continues as an unknown shiver passes thro them...

Who told you that I am sacking you? Its a news to me!

She looks back at him with a teary eyes...with sobs...

See...This is what I keep telling about you and I am not wrong...you assume something and you stick on to it! He screams

She's now feeling relaxed after finding him to be his normal self...

WOH...WOH...

What WOH WOH?

He screams and she blinks in fear...

Who are you to decide whether I am retaining you or sacking you? Hmm?

SIR...I didnt mean that...

He gives a stare back at her...

I am so used to your unnecessary anger and yelling, and today I found you to be different...like quite quite and kind of avoiding me...making a baby face

He is kind of amazed with what she says straight from heart...

And you sent Manishsha when you needed a file from me...and you are here in this storeroom rearranging things which I am supposed to do it...Tell me why? Won't I assume you are trying to do things on your own as you are going to sack me?

No Geet...Its not that!

Then what is it sir?

He holds on to her shoulder...I wanted to tell you SORRY but I couldnt say it...He closed his eyes with what he just said..

Geet couldnt believe what she just heard

That's the reason I was avoiding you...

SIR...

I am SORRY...

Sir...SORRY for what?

For what ever happened yesterday..

She listens to him quietly...

I mean...I didnt realise what I'm doing and saying...and...

She didnt think twice before taking his hand on hers...and again its a soothing feeling runs thro both of them...

Sir...You need not mention that...

He looks at her surprisingly...

I verywell knew that you were in a disturbed state of mind...and your words didnt carry their actual meaning...Please dont feel sorry...

He too takes a long breath of relaxation.

And Sir...Daadi called me today to thank me...

Maan was again surprised with this...

I could see she was so happy as she found this small happiness after a very long time. Try to relive your life so that Daadi can live her rest of her life peacefully.

He's once again lost in her words...but prefers not to show it...All he could comment is hmm!

Again HMM? Geet nods her head

Aur Kuch? with an attitude
Yes Sir..I need to get back to my cabin lot of work pending...

She turns to leave...

Where are you going now? Did I ask you to leave?

She again looks back to him as she is not able to understand

You must finish with the storeroom rearrangement before you leave from here...is it clear?

He tells it with an attitude and she smiles seeing him back to the normal form...and that proves he's really not angry on her. He turns around and smiles at himself trying to hide from her.

Precap: Oops...Daadi knows about Komal

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Posted: 13 years ago


i am so happy i am first in comments
thanks for ur awesome update
back to update
its really really fabulous part
both r trying to say sorry
lolzzz geet think maan sacking her job
and wow maan give her lots of work
precap is nice
DM knowing about komal
but how
please update soon
love u
seher


Edited by love4all - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updates dear...I love this story and I am glad u restarted it
didn't know u had started wriitng again. Will check ther thread too
one request - u are a fab writer. I saw u r note whoch said u will try to complete both your fics soon...please don't close them just to complete...we will wait even if u are busy because we love both stories
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear why are you not sending me PM's iam already added in your PM list 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it

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