Maaneet FF - Baarish. Link to new thread Pg 151 - Page 37

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Posted: 13 years ago
really nice part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Read all parts from 9 in a go... got your Pm after along time...
Keep sending me Pms for all your updates dear.. i like your stories.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome update dear🤗

Loved it very much
waiting 4 next nd thanx 4 PM👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

for ur comments n likes
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Edited by rsroopali - 13 years ago
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Part 15

Rajeev-"Geet itne sarre naam kyun lee rahi hai sidhe sidhe bolna tere boyfriend arahaii"

Maan who was silently seeing this converstation was shocked whn Rajeev told that Geet's boyfriend was coming n here he though that Rajeev was narrow minded.

Geet-"yesss Dad my boyfriend Abhinav is cominggg"

Maan was jealous that Geet was going alone to receive her so called Boyfriend.

As Geet walked near the car park & waited for the Driver to come n start the car instead of scrubbing the pathway.

But the Driver was in a confused state seeing Maan n Geet both glare at him as he was busy scrubbing as per Maan's orders.

Then decided that he will follow Geet's order n started washing his hands n walking towards the car.

As he was nearing where Maan was scrubbing soo hard in his anger that he even didn't see the Driver legs n the poor Driver slipped...

Maan-"Aree Chandu [tonya ur ff chandu ] sorry sorry meine thumhee dekha nahii par tum yese kaise bhina dekhe chal rahe the"

N gave an Evil Smirk to Chandu that this will happen if u dnt follow MSK's orders.

Rajeev-"Aree Chandu mujhe patha hai ye sab tumhare bahane haii kaam se bhag ne kee aur dekho iss Young Man ko subhase kaam kar raha hai"

Maan as if shying-"Aree Uncle mein kaam nahi karunga tho kaun kareega n janee dijiyena Chandu ko sach mein zor se laggi hai iss ko doctor ke paas lejaa ...Nakul"

Geet-"Dad mujhe late hora haiii n ash mera intazaar kar rahi hogi abb mein jaa rahii huu khud drive karke"

Maan-"Aree Chandu,tu mujhe aaj subah railway station ke paas kisi ladki ka ke baree mein tuu kuch bol raha tha naaa"

Chandu confused n then seeing Maan's angry face-"Haan Maan bhai bhuhot bada accident hua tha kuch ladkee joo ladki drive kar rahi thi usko ched rahee thee aur uski car out of control hogayi n ladkii abhi thak critical hai"

Rajeev hearing this was shocked-"Geet tum nahi jaa rahii hoo n Young Man tum hiii Railway Station jaakee Guests ko leeke aavoo"

Maan[st]-"Aree iss bhudhe ko koi aur kaam nahi hai kyaa hamesha mera plan ulta kar mujhe Young Man bol bol ke kaamwala bana diya hai

Par mein bhi Maan Singh Khurana huu dekho kese mein Geet ko saath mein lekar jatha hu"

Geet-"Dad its okkk mein khud chali javoogiii aur Ash ko bhi pick karna haii"

Maan-"Uncle ek kaam karthe hai mein aur Geet dono Railway Station chalee jathe haii"

Rajeev-"Haan Young Man yahii karoo"

Geet-"Par Dad..."

Maan-"Chaloo Geet we are already getting late n Ash bhi wait kar rahi hogina"

Geet making a sad face sits in the car.

Precap-Maan running on the railway tracks

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N this update is specially for jasminerahul n Hinal as this is her fav scene in the movie

Edited by rsroopali - 13 years ago
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Part 16

Geet-"Par Dad….."

Maan-"Chaloo Geet we are already getting late n Ash bhi wait kar rahi hogina"

Geet making a sad face sits in the car.

As Maan started the car n was out of Handa Mansion Geet started glaring angrily at Maan n Maan was just making a cute baby face looking at Devdas n as Geet took Devdas in her lap.

Maan-"Yeh mera Devdas haiii tum kyun lerrahi hooo" making a sad face as if his fav toy is taken frm him.

Geet-"Nahii Devdas mera bhi friend haii na" she asked making a cute face to Devdas.

Maan-"Lekin friends banne ke liye tho hand shake karna padtha haii aur tum ne mere Devdas see hand shake nahi kiyaa"

Geet-"Pheli baath yeh tumara Devdas nahi haii yeh hum sab ka Devdas haii n hand shake tho mein karna bhool hii gayi thiii" n then she took Devdas arms n shook itt.

Geet-"Maan tumne jaan bhujkar kyun Chandu ko giraya"

Maan-"Sach bolu yaa Jhot"

Geet-"Sachhh bollooo"

Maan-"Kyun kii mein tumare saath kuch time spend karna chatha tha after all you are to-be Mrs.Maan Singh Khurana soon"

Geet-"Just Shut Up Maan"

Maan-"Dekha Devdas bhalayii kaa tho zamaana nahi raha sach bolu tho bhi problem aur jhot bolo tho bhii"

N then the rest of the journey went on with Maan irritating Geet with his flirting talks.

As they reached the Railway Station

Devdas-"Maan iss ladkii ke jamele mee maat paad"

Maan-"Devdas tu chup kar mein Geet ke kilaf kuch nahi sun saktha"

Geet-"Yeh tum kisse baath kar rahee hoo"

Maan-"Kuch nahi"

Devdas-"Maan tere liye Geet ka pyar humari dosti se zyada haiii kyaaa???????"

Maan got angry-"Haan haiii"

Devdas-"Jaa mein tumse baath nahi karongaa"

Maan angrily-"Jaa mat baath kar jaa maar ja" n left him on the bench n went near the TC with Geet to ask abt the arrival of the train.

The TC told them that due to land slide the train is delayed by 5 hours.

Then Maan n Geet came to the bench where Maan had left Devdas n saw that he was not there n Maan started searching Devdas.

Then Maan saw Devdas sitting on the Railway track n a Train coming on that same track.

Maan just jumped on the track n started running towards the train.

The train n Maan were just some distance away from Devdas.

Geet saw this n just shouted-"Maaannn……"

Precap-Wt happened next ?????

Is Devdas saved or not???

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Edited by rsroopali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thx a lot 4 updating it.I'vent seen d movie,so im reading it curiously.Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing updates
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm

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