ANKAHI...{LRL-RN} #2 last Ud wd EPI n PG 100(21/11 - Page 34

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Posted: 13 years ago


Its a superb part...

Raj and Naina's romance was sweet... honeymoon part was good...

So naaz told everything... This was all Raj's plan i must say was brilliant... Good her sister is safe with huda's mother...

Waiting for u to cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ahemz...hello!! πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I admit main late hu...lekin aa to gayi...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†..actually iss fic ka koi pending part nahi tha mera...to socha...at least isse clear hi rakhu...waise bhi tumhari speed se asaani se taal milaya jaa sakta hai...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Anyways...coming to the part...Pehle Rajveer and Naina ki romance ki baat karte hai...😳...awesum tha bilkul. Always had this smile on my face..😊😊...Honeymoon wali baat and fork war...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...gosh...tum sach me fork ko kaafi footage deti ho...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...anyways...I loved it all...end me kiss bhi tha...πŸ˜³πŸ˜†...and the dialogues were superb!! So a very gr8 job!! πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘πŸ‘

Now coming to the 6 flashbacks...πŸ˜†...I admit...mujhe concentrate karne me pehle pehle thodi problem hui...but tumhari khasiyat hai ki tum kaafi achhese manage karti ho sab...so it was f9. Aur padhne me bahut maza bhi aya!!

Finally we got to knw a lot...Nur zinda hai ye jaan ke bahut khushi hui...Huda itna achha mujhe kabhi nahi laga!! Upar se Amar Jee...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...Aalekh sahi bola...ek taraf izzat dusri taraf hug...Huda ki chandi thi...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

But Rajveer is of course very hurt becoz of Naaz......lekin wo usse maaf bhi kar dega...hai na?😊 I liked his interaction wid Khan...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...I'd w8 for this particular flashback to end...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

And yeah...shuru me Gunny n Naaz wala scene bhi badhiya thi...as u might knw...I like this couple a lot too...πŸ˜ƒ

So thanks for this awesum blossom update!! Sorry to hear abt ur section change though...I knw how it feels among such 'gud for everything' ppl..🀒...but thats the way it is...lyf hamesha fair nahi hoti na...khas kar hum jaise masoom aur nek-dil logo ke liye!!πŸ˜³πŸ˜†

Now coming to LRL jokes...😳...oye hoye!!! Ye to alag hi kisam ki smartness hai...jiyo mere Raj!! 😳😳...Waise Naina bhav khaa rahi hai to main ready hu jaane ke liye...always & forever!!πŸ˜³πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ (Haan abhi jaake ye example bhi de do Naina ko...zarur haan kahegi πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰)

Achha chalo...abhi stopping my bakbak...u keep updating soon!! I might see you much later though!! 😊 Take care till then...😊

Sumi. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Baap re kya karti hai tu?
I mean fb be fb. Mean Flashback pe flashback.
Itne fb degi to hum bhi ek din history ban jaayenge.
Chal maaf kiya koi baat nahi.
Coming to the update, mujhe kitne umeed thi na ki kuch hoga i mean mai ye nahi keh rahi hoon ki kuch hua nahi, hua to bahut aur filhal k liye itna kaafi tha kyoun RN jis jagah pe the is se jyada shayad dikhana sahi nahi tha.
That was sweet and slow. Raj k andar passion bhi tha aur love bhi but vo itna to samajhta hi nahi hai ki achanak se sab kuch nahi thopna nahi chahta tha vo, ye Naina k liye bhi asaan nahi hota.
The best thing in this update was ki Noor safe hai bhale hi vo apne Amar jee k ghar par hai. Maje ki baat hai ki kisi ko yaad bhi nahi tha ki Huda ka naam Amardeep Huda hai.
To finally tune Huda k liye bhi ladki bhi dhoondh li na theek kiya kitne din bechara akele rehta vaise bhi? Ye bhi accha hua ki Naaz ne sab kuch bata diya Raj aur baaki k logon ko.
Yusuf jaise log kaise apne swarth k liye Naaz k bhai jaise ladko ko bus gumraah karte rehte hain. Pehle us ki vajah se Naaz k bhai aur abbu ki death hue aur ab vo log Naaz k bhi peeche pad gaye the aur Raj ko kuch bhi nahi pata tha but ab sab samajh gaya hai to us ko bhi Naaz ki condition samajh aa rahi hai.
Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

kya baat hai sherni 1 mahine ke wait ke baad aisa update milega ye nahi pata tha...he he he...yeh apun ka style hai...matlab danda khane ka style hai yaar...par hamesha main danda khane se bach jati hun...πŸ˜†confused na πŸ˜• πŸ˜• koi baat nahi abhi confusion clear kar deti hunπŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ kehna ka matlab tha bohot achcha update tha shayad 1 mahine gayab rehne ki penalty chukaai hai tumneπŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† haan...yehi keh sakti ho...aur update lamaba bhi tha...nahi...πŸ˜†lekin ab ye mat smajh na ki ab 1 mahine tak gayab rahogi aur sabko chup karwaane ke liye iss type ka update kar dogi aisa karogi to sade tamaatar aur dande khaogiπŸ˜† πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ arey main itni bhi buri nahi hun yaar...wo toh kaam me phash gayi thi...warna main aise kaam thode hi na karti hun...πŸ˜†han tum aise updates har week ya 15 din me karogi to chalegaπŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ task kafi tough ho raha hai maam...πŸ˜†naaz se start karti hun uski story seriously mai ro rahi thi yaar😭 😭 😭 kaise uski poori family destroy ho gayi , kis tarah se yusuf ne use majboor kiya naina per spying karne ke liye😑 😑 😑 thankgod gunny understand the situation of naaz warna muje laga tha ki naina per blank fire usne kiya sunke hi wo usper bhadak jaata ab main thoda typical chizain likhna pasand nahi karti...isi liye experiment karti rehti hun...!!! tabhi maine naaz-gunny ka scene aise likha...πŸ˜‰achcha hua priya tumne naaz ko bacha liya nahi to kya hota uska πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†kuch nahi hota...maine use positive charachter diya tha toh use bacha hi leti...par fic ke shuruwat me mere readers ne achhi khasi aarti utari thi Naaz ki...πŸ˜† but ab major ka kya wo kya abhi naraaz hain naaz seπŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• ab yeh sab tumhe toh next part me hi pata chal sakta hai...hai na...πŸ˜‰

kya baat hai huda aur namuna kitne match hote hain dono ek dusre se tabhi to ek hi din me do do ladkiyon ne importance de di uskoπŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† kitni value badh gayi hai uskiπŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† ab bichare ki life me toh kuch ho na...LRL me bhi uss ka kuch nahi ho paya tha...!!! phir main toh SANTH type ki INSHAN hun...toh maine socha ki kyoun na Huda ko thoda value de hi di jaye...πŸ˜†waise major dimaag kaafi tez chalta hai apni cabin me baithe baithe aur wo bhi itni jaldi sara ka sara plan setup kar liya...impressedπŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ ek baat...maine hamesha rajeev ke upar hi fic likhe hain...aur mere her fic me Raj ke paas Dhashu dimag hota hai...he he he...πŸ˜†and now raj and naina kya kahu unke liye...loss of words u knowπŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ kya ladki hai ye bhi honeymoon karte karte khud hi apne sawaal me phans gayiπŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† major ne bhi kya sahi jagah uski baaton phansaa diya tha apni wife ko ...how intelligent of him naπŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ kaha na...mere fic me heroine Gadhi ho sakti hai...par Raj...NEVER...πŸ˜†
waise rn scenes ke liye main spechless hun isliye zaada nahi likha bas itna hi ki they were just cute and wonderful scenesπŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ thank you...aur kuch kehna bhi nahi...kyoun ke waise bhi wo scene kuch jyada hi khincha tha maine...πŸ˜†ab madam aap please isko jaldi se continue karen phir se 1 mahina na lagaayn update karne ke liyeπŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† arey nahi...update toh masa-allha ready hai...bas yahan pe reply ka kaam chal raha hai aur wahan pe drafting ka kaam...dono khatam hote hi...update post kar dungi...πŸ˜ƒ
bbbyyyeee and takecare😊😊
shreya😊

Thanksss Shreya...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
Helooo dear !!!!

Sooo sorrry for being late...ab yeh matt kehna ki main aayi toh sahi...πŸ˜›πŸ˜†

i loved the ' format ' of this update sooo very much...!

aur sabse jyada pasand aaya woh tune jo starting mein "black n white " likha na woh πŸ˜›... kasamse...meri hassi nikal aayi uss line par...πŸ˜† I hope u take this in good spirit...😊

and the star punch of the update according to me was Aalekh's line..."Saale ki value achanak badh gayi..." πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

but sahi mein...yeh flashback aur present waala concept bada effective laga...

good that Naaz came to know ki noor bhaag gayi hai... n Huda ne bata bhi diya ki woh uske ghar hai...aur toh aur video conferencing bhi kara di 'AMAR JEE' ne...πŸ˜›

All the RN scenes were just superrrb !!! and the song suited the scene perfectly !!!

Ab jaldise update kar de yaar !!!πŸ˜ƒ



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Priya Hiieee

Update was just brilliantπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ see my trust was not misplaced.😊😊.
I clicked the like button b4 the update coz I knew u write nothing less than fantastic..πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ aur galiyaan to baad mein bhi likh sakte hain ..hai naπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† he he he...haan galiyan toh baad me bhi padd sakti hain...Thank you suhana...
anyways Naaz revealed everything to Raj and he was really hurt that she has hideen so much from him..he trusted her completely.
But watever has Naaz gone through is a reality in Kashmir.so many people r dying or becoming terrorist just beacuse few people from outside poison their minds and make them their living robots who would do anything for them😑😑😑 bass...usi chiz ko dikhane ki halki si koshish ki thi maine...
But atleast Noor is fine and safe with Huda's mummyji..uska naam kya rakha hai UpmaπŸ˜²πŸ˜²πŸ˜† yeh bhi koi naam haiπŸ˜†πŸ˜† but Huda being Huda can do anything. naam kyoun rakha hai...iss ka bhi jawab hai uss ke paas...
but he was indeed lucky that day..do do ladkiyaan usko kitna importance de rahi thi.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Alekh seemed to b jealous of himπŸ˜†πŸ˜† arey nahi alekh jealous nahi hai...bass huda ko itna bhav mil raha hai dekh kar thoda irrtate hai bass...
raj and Naina's scenes were just awsomeπŸ‘πŸ‘ bechari Naina ne honeymoon kya bola woh to phans hi gayi..raj ne usko embarrass karne mein koi kasar nahin chodiπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜³ ..honeymoon mein kya hota hai poochh poochh kar Naina ko to ek dum hi chup karwa diya Raj ne.😳😳 naina ke liye achha hai na...age se raj ko kuch bhi bolne se pahle 100 baar sochegi...
Noodles r my favourite too.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ I hope I cud have a chance to eat them with him😍 he he he...ameen...
anyways their romantic moments were beautifully written.πŸ‘ Raj and Naina have waited long enough for this happiness.😊 aur dekh lo...DJ'S ne nahi maine unn ke bich setting karwayi...he he eh...
Pls continue soon
Bye

Thanksss Suhana...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanksss Rakhi...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you n Love you Guys...πŸ€—
maine toh tai kiya tha ke...usi thread me hi Ankahi ko cont karungi...πŸ˜ƒ
wo toh aap sab ki meherbani thi jo maine naya thread start kiya...n aaj 50 pages bhi ho gaye...πŸ˜›
ab daro mat...main iss ka 3rd thread starat nahi karungi...isi thread me Ankahi ko THE END karne ki koshish karungi... PAKKA...πŸ˜†
Love you
Priya...πŸ€—
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ivre

Aj to tumne dil khush kar dia Priya ...aur tumhara cmnt dekh mera dil bhi garden garden ho gaya...

Itna lamba UD! waah kabhi kabhi aisi buri herkat kar hi deti hun main...tum sab ko pakane ke liye..he he he...
Its nice and relaxing to read you. Always. Thank you...
I think of all KMA fics I have read, urs is the best one. U have taken care of preserving the original Raj really well. Love u for that. Love you too yaar...tum sab ne mujh par trust kiya...n main jitna kar pati utna karne ki koshish ki bhi...mujhe pata hai ke kuch kuch scenes me thode changes hone chahiye the...par mujhe jab jo achha laga wo add karti gayi...aur tum sab ke pyar ne mujhe aur bhi bigad diya...πŸ˜›
great work Thank you...πŸ˜ƒaur kabhi kabhi darshan bhi de diya karo maate...sirf yahin par nahi...apne fics me bhi...Plz...
S

Thanksss Sur...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness


Thank you n Love you Guys...πŸ€—
maine toh tai kiya tha ke...usi thread me hi Ankahi ko cont karungi...πŸ˜ƒ
wo toh aap sab ki meherbani thi jo maine naya thread start kiya...n aaj 50 pages bhi ho gaye...πŸ˜›
ab daro mat...main iss ka 3rd thread starat nahi karungi...isi thread me Ankahi ko THE END karne ki koshish karungi... PAKKA...πŸ˜†
Love you
Priya...πŸ€—



First...Congratulations for the 50 pages...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Second...don't make such silly promises...u never know...one fine morning u come to this thread to update only to find it full again with 150 pages n u have to open a new thread right on the spot...πŸ˜‰πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£...so chup chap update karo n stop thinking of ending the story by murdering it😑🀣🀣🀣

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