FF -300 DAYS WITH MANEET updated jul 30 - Page 18

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Posted: 14 years ago
awww lovely update... gud to c maan comfortable with all of them..
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome yaar!
But thats too short!

Yeh dil maange more! Update soon!
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superb update
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CHAPTER -13
Pia walked to garden hearing some sound . When she entered ross petals fell on her she saw abhay standing before her with his usual cute smile. when she reached near him he took a ring from his pocket , went on his knees.

ABHAY : Miss.Pia Dobriyal will u allow me to make ur every moment beautiful and colorful will u give me the honour of marrying u?
Pia was out of the world this is wat she always expected for. Her eyes were filled with happy tears.
PIA : sure
Abhay slipped the ring in her fingers. Pia closed her eyes insisting further closeness.But Abhay was conscious.as All the others were watching the scene from far not disturbing the love birds. There was love in the air.Maan caught geet's hand and kissed it. He held her close as if that was his only aim. geet wasn't feeling wierd at all . She would have done the same if maan was late to do it. She was by now used to his love and was genuinely enjoying.
Once when the couple were back from their romantic world all others entered the scene wishing Pia and Abhay.After which they cut the cake and had few cake throwing games. later everyone went back to their respective rooms.
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ABHIYA's ROOM
Pia was resting her head on abhay's shoulder watching her ring.
ABHAY : u like it.
PIA: i ll love anything that comes from u.
ABHAY : then u should love this as well
saying that he kissed her.

( this is the extend where abhiya's story could travel as this is MG FF)

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MANEET's ROOM
maan was sleeping peacefully geet was watching him . He has changed or may be she has. But whoever it was the result was that their relationship was changing. It is positive now. He was caring for her. Its not that he didn't before but it was new now. he was genuine in his love and affection.

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LATER THAT DAY

A small party was arranged for Pia's b'day . Generally they like to celebrate among themselves but now they invited all those whom they know in Dehradun as they were leaving the place in a week or two. Though everyone loved working together all had their own family business to look after as well so they decided to shift the business to Delhi.
After heavy planning finally girls got free time for their G-talks. Nupur , Pia and Geet were sitting in the bolcany munching some snacks.
pia was still blushing seeing the ring.

GEET : u r so lucky...Abhay loves u so much.
PIA : i know
NUPUR : it has been nearly 6 years still he is crazy abt u.
GEET : only few are lucky to have true love like pia...
NUPUR ; and u
nupur said seeing geet. geet wasn't sure how to react.
GEET : sorry...
NUPUR : come on geet don't tell me that maan has not expressed his love at all... dear his love is evident in his eyes.
GEET : wat r u saying.?
PIA : i know that he had GF in college but now he loves u a lot.
GEET : is that possible for him to love me now?
Pia and Nupur looked at her confused.
GEET : i mean he had many gf in past and how can he now love me truley?
NUPUR : u silly it was all just a mere infactuation he wasn't a casinova type and all, was he?
Geet nodded no. Maan had gf only one at a time . it doesn't mean that he was good but he was not bad as well.
PIA : see geet everyone will have a past .u know abhay was with Misha during his school days and then they broke up as nothing was good between them. it doesn't mean
that abhay can never be sincere to anyone in the rest of his life . u urself said that he loves me a lot.
GEET : but...i m confused.
" coz u r not ready to accept"
They all turned and saw the owner of the voice was Armaan.
GEET : accept wat?
Armaan walked near them took a chips packet and setteled in the chair.
ARMAAN : when u accept him as ur frd why can't u accept him as ur love.
GEET : of course i love him.
ARMAAN : wat is love without trust...
GEET : but...i...
ARMAAN : i ll tell u something , u trust him u want to accept him but u r scared to be rejected...
GEET : wat rubbish.!!!
ARMAAN : i know u since childhood . u always have the fear of failure even before accepting the challange. u don't allow maan in your life coz u fear wat would happen if he leaves.
Geet didn't expect something like this from Armaan . Though it was the truth she didn't want to accept it. Sensing the tensed atmosphere Nupur decided to get everyone out of that mood. And she was successful.

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AT PARTY
Everyone were dressed informally . most of the guests were friends than business associates . so the party was happening and fun.
There was one friend of them named Ram who was used to conduct fun games among gatherings so he has offered to entertain guests

RAM : Ladies and Gentlemen Bon Soir. to add some more fun to the party i have very interesting idea . Hope u all don't mind joining me, do u?.
EVERYONE : NO
RAM : perfect. this is basically a couple game.so plz arrange urself with ur partner.
Abhay and pia were the first couple and followed by others. Geet didn't refuse when maan offered her to join him. She thought it would be some dance or that sort. There were only few single ppl including Armaa and nupur.

RAM : sry single dudes better luck next time and single babez feel free to ask my number later.
all the guests laughed and were excited.
RAM : this game is really simple i ll ask u a question if ur answer is no u can stay in the game if it is yes u should leave the game.
COUPLES : YES
RAM : ok then my first qus Have u ever hidden ur ex's msg from ur BF or GF?
There was few noise here and there and few couples walked away.
RAM : Have u ever checked anyother boy while being with ur own BF and the vice versa?
A few others walked out.
RAM : so sad...ok my next ques Have u ever thought that ur BF or GF is ugly?
fortunately no one walked out.
RAM : impressive. Have u ever regretted ur present relationship?
Contrast to the previous ques many walked away this time.

Later after a two more ques only 3 couples remainded including Maneet and abhiya.

RAM : i m really proud of u guys that u have survived all the ques. so as a reward i ll ask an easy one this time.The qus goes to the boys . Two girls come before u one offers u love and the other offers u s** which one will u choose?
Everyone roared that was easy no man will dare to choose the other one over love infront of his GF.
RAM : relax ppl we ll hear from them.
The third coupl's answer was love the choice was obvious.
ABHAY : i would choose love anytime.
He said proudly looking at Pia .She blushed.
The mike was passed to maan . everyone expected him to choose love as well even geet. But it is MSK always with diff ans.

MAAN : i would say the girls that i already have a beautiful wife so i neither want their love nor s**.
The whole crowd was dumbstruck with his ans. All the girls looked their boyfriends with furious eyes as they have never thought something like that. Geet looked at maan with disbelief . maan looked her with love and held her close to him. for the first time ever geet put her hand around him and placed her head on his shoulders. The whole crowd was looking at the couple with envy . The girls were jealous of geet for having such a lovely husband .

(BUDDIES...let me confess that the last part of this chapter is inspired by a telugu movie "ORANGE" . those who have seen the movie pls forgive me for copying the last ques from the movie and for naming the host as Ram)

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abinash079 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome and mind blowing part
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part...

loved the way they were trying to make geet understand...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh great part
loved it
do con. soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update dear

and well said by maan

loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
its nice...

n I didnt watch Orange movie... so i dont know this but its gud

n one request dear

please dont use the green color which u used for armaan... its hard to read... its glaring...u use some dull color rather than such bright color...

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