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Hey Lena,

Superb update dear. Read it 4 times already & don't know how many time will read again. 😆 Liked how u laid out Maaneet's thoughts as they copiously depicted the situation from both's POV.

Maan did hard work to keep Geet save from her guilty conscience of falling in love with her legal sibling and in the end come to know that all was in vain.

Maan is right. Ms. Noone is not that saint as she is presenting herself to be. Geet's view of her laughter made me think, it might be eerie.

LOLz, that was funny when Maan was punishing her to keep the pillow between them & Geet trying to put on the make up & Maan's interruption was entertaining.

It was thoughtful when Maan cancelled the press conference because he believe that Geet will not be able to face the bluntly & gratingly thrown question about their relation. From Geet's POV, sappy movie's sappy character calling Geet his beloved. 😈🤣

Geet & her father's conversation was written well. She is rare creature who is hard to find. She forgave her father so that she could be free of the burdens of past & live peacefully. It seems that with passing time, she will forgive "mother" also.

U ended it beautifully. Hope U always keep writing the wonderful stories & we get them to read.

standing ovation for lena

Beautiful!!