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nice part..dadi is just too good..
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loved the update...
wow dadi tricked maan in helping with geet...
but when is dadi gonna know that she is deaf...
hope soon she will get to know pl cont soon...
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dadi n geets interaction was really good

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I just love this kind of story.. very nice.. so good pls post next part...😊
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THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT
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Part 8

Savithri devi walked towards maan's room and saw him busy working on his laptop with a serious face.She walked inside and stood before maan crossing her arms. Maan saw his daadi and again looked into laptop saying.."dadi kuch kaam hey?".Savithri devi sighed and took laptop from maan.

maan: daadi..yeh aap kya kar rahe hey..mujhe kaam hey...

savithri devi: haan hum jaanthe hey ki aapko kaam hey...lekin yeh kaam khana khane ke baad bhi karsakthe hey na...

maan took a long breath...and said..:daadi mujhe bhook nahi hey..."

savithri devi: maan...hume kuch nahi sunna...aap arahe hey..neeche khana khane keliye...

having said these words savithri devi gave his laptop back to maan and left the room...with no choice left maan sighed and came down stairs for dinner.Just then he received a message from sameera...

"iam waiting outside the mansion for you"

maan ignored it and sat near dining table for dinner...savithri devi served him...again he recieved a message...

"maan..iam not going to leave from here until you come"

maan kept his mobile aside and continued his dinner...when his mobile again gave message alert...savithri devi looked at maan and asked..."koi problem hey maan"
maan shook his head saying no...and switched off his mobile without reading the message...

savithri devi: maan..kal se mein geet se paintings banwana shuru kardethi hu...

maan: daadi..aap ko jo karna hey woh kijiye...bas ek bath ..woh ladki mere saamne aur mere kamre ke aas paas nahi aana chahiye...uss ladki ke saath aap kya karwathe ho..woh aapki marzi..mera kaam tha uss ladki ko ghar lana..woh meine kiya...aur isse zyadha mujhse kuch bhi expect math kijiye...

maan spatted out in anger...

savithri devi: maan...ithni gussa...yeh teek nahi hey maan...aisa bhi kya kiya uss ladki ne...tumhare saath..jo tum aise badak rahe ho uss per...

maan remained silent hitting fork on his plate...

savithri devi: mein ne socha ki aap work ki tension se naraz hey..lekin mujhe ab lagraha hey ki...aapko uss ladki se koi problem..hey...boliye aisa bhi kya kiya uss ladki ney aapke saath...

maan: daadima...aap uuss ladki ko nahi jaanthe hey...she is full of attitude...mujhe..maan singh khurana ke saamne woh attitude dikha rahi hey...

savithri devi laughed...

savithri devi: bas ithni si baath...

maan: daadi ma aap has rahe hey?

savithri devi: maan...hume uss ladki mein koi attitude nahi dikha...

maan: teek hey daadima...agar aapko aisa lagthi hey..tho mein kya karsaktha...bas mere saamne woh ladki dubaara nahi aana chahiye...iska thoda dhyan rakhiyega

having said these words he stood from the dining place and left to his room in anger...savithri devi shook his head and sighed not knowing how to control his grandson's anger...

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after taking food...geet felt a bit sleepy...she kept all the plates aside and lied on the bed to sleep...whole day incidents flashed before her...when she remebered about the incident of the drivers chasing her...she opened her eyes and sat...she took a long breath and tried to calm herself...then her looks got accidentally fixed on the watch cum calender on the table...when she looked at the date...an unknown pain filled her heart...tears rolled down her eyes...she opened her bag and took out a small key chain with ganesh ...she looked at it...and said with teary eyes..."happy birthday munna"..she kissed the key chain and kept it back inside her bag...

geet: bas...yaha pe achcha se paintings banaonga..uske baad operation keliye saara paisa miljayega...

a smile came upon her face when she said those words...she thanked god for helping her that day from all odds...and slept peacefully hoping for a nice tomorrow...

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maan went to his room and lied on his bed thinking about his whole day incidents...sameera came to his mind...he switched on his phone...again he received a message from her

u will come or should i die

maan initially thought to ignore ...but changed his mind and sent a reply..."iam not going to come...whether to live or die...its ur decision... don't ever try to threaten me"

sameera felt very happy when she saw a message from maan..but when she actually read the message she was shocked...she lost her temper and came inside khurana mansion...savithri devi who was at the hall way looked at sameera in surprise...sameera gave an embarassiing smile not knowing what reason she has to say when she was asked about her arrival to mansion ...at that night time...

savithri devi: sameera..aap ithni raath ko yaha pe?

sameera gave weird expressions...

sameera: daadima...namsathe...woh mujhe..kuch kaam tha maan se...isliye...

savithri devi : achcha...aap baitiye..hum unhe bhula dethi hey...

sameera: mein khudh jaaongi...maan ke room mein...

savithri devi shot an angry look at sameera..and it was sufficient for sameera to stop and sit on the couch quietly...savithri devi then informed suraj to call maan...

sameera: mein kaha aake phas gayi...ab maan se teek se baath bhi nahi kar paongi...gusse mein aake mein khud apne aapko museebath mein dal dhiya...

savithri devi sat beside sameera...sameera fet uncomfortable in her presence and started sweating profusely..savithri devi got confused...

savithri devi: beta..kya hua..aap ithni ghabrayi hui se kyu lagrahi hey?

sameera: kuch nahi daadima...

just then maan came down stairs looking at sameera...sameera smiled and came near him to hug...but stopped in the middle looking at savithri devi...savithri devi excused herself and went inside her room...sameera sighed in relief and immediately hugged maan...saying..."iam sorry..iam sorry"...maan didnot responded to her hug...she felt humiliated...and removed her hands from maan...

sameera: maan..please i need to talk to you...

maan remained silent looking away from sameera...

sameera: maan please...just for 2 minutes...

maan: sameera...tumne bahuth tamasha karchuki ho...waise bhi aaj mera mood teek nahi hey..isliye mujhe aur gussa math dilao..chup chap apna ghar chale jao...

sameera: maan..please..iam sorry...bas 2 min hum bath karenge...

maan lost his senses in anger...he pulled sameera out of the mansion and dragged her holding her arm to the garden near the main gate...

maan: kya baath karna hey..

he spat in anger...

sameera gulped his saliva down her throat looking at his red eyes filled with anger...

sameera: iam sorry...

maan: sorry..mein tumhare liye..tumhare call keliye...aaj pura din intezzar kiya...har ek min bas teri hi baare mein yaad kar raha tha...pagal ki tarah phone ki tarah dekh raha tha...tumhre call keliye..tumne kya kiya...ek baar..ek call karne ka zaroori bhi nahi samja..aur upar se mujhe practical banne keliye kaha...aur mujhe manae keliye..yeh sab cheap tricks play karna shuru kiya...kyu maaf karu mein tujhko..tumhe achche se patha hey ki mein jhoot se kithna nafrath kartha hu...aur yeh jaanthe hue bhi tumne mujhse jhoot kaha...woh bhi ithna ghatiya jhoot ..chi...

sameera: ithna choti galathi keliye..ithna gussa...

maan: mein aisa hi hoon...agar tumhe mere saath rehna pasand nahi hey..tho chale jao...i really dont care...

sameera lost her temper...

sameera: yes...u r right...tumhare jaise insaan se koi bhi ladki kabhi bhi pyaar nahi karsakthi...agar tumhare paas paisa nahi hotha..tho koi bhi ladki tujhe pyaar karne ka dhoor...nazar utake dhekna bhi nahi chahthi...

maan's anger reached maximum level...

maan: aur tum ithni din kya kar rahi thi mujhse...

sameera: wahi...jo ek samajdhar ladki karthi hey..tumhe "use"

maan clenched his fist in anger...

sameera: tum..tumhare gussa..tumhare authoritative behavior...i hate it...agar yahi tumhari pyaar hey...mujhe aisa pyaar nahi chahiye...and iam fine without that...

maan: sameera...mere gussa bahar aane se pehle yaha se chale jao..warna patha nahi mein kya karoonga...

sameera: iam not going to stay here for a second also even if u beg...me to stay..

sameera spat out in anger and walked outside leaving angry maan behind...

to be continued...



Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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lovely part...👏.maan is too much angry ...this sameera😡🤢😡
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awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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