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Posted: 14 years ago
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~ENIGMA~
PART 43

MY NEW FF CHIMERA

pls do read & comment :)





Geet "are! Ai kaisy bath hui! How can you just force in people's house?"
Maan "mane kab force kia... Tumnehi toh invite kia!"
Geet "sir, ab juth math boliye! Mane kab apko ghar ane ko kha?" she demands a answer... But by the time maan could answer.. They already reached home. Maan pressed the bell... Geet stood behind him with arm folded. Defiantly not looking forward to this cooking season. The door opens atlas... Shila... There same teddy beat night dress... Four of them stood there like a incredible four. Mouth open in shock.
Geet "why are you looking at us like that!"
Shila "I- oh... Emm... Ehh... Why are you here?"
Geet "my house! What do you mean why I am here!"
Shila "I-mean why he is here!" she points at maan, with a sad face. Shila could feel the burning heat of anger. She shivered. Not exactly sure why she have blurb that out. This is her boss.
Shila "I mean I thought you -2- we..." her voice disappeared by seeing maans glare. All three kids ran in...

Rajji "vicky jiju! Chupo! Cupo! Tumhari badi big DD ne aya!"
Vicky "ha! Ha! Mujce pata hi!" he started to spine round in the room in panic to look for a place to hide...
Rik "under the bed! Under the bed!" he shouts out.
Rajji "chop! He will here!" rajji flaps her hand up & down to keep the voice low.

In the living room, geet did not like the odd silence! "umm! Where is everyone? Where are the 2 monkeys?" geet looks round worriedly. Maan observes geets every gesture, her worry, her love, a motherly worry! He founded very difficult to understand how a 18 years old girl could take so much responsibility! ... She is so different..
Geet "Ris! Ruk! Rajji!" she shouts... & within matter of few second all three ran in. Stood in the living room in a line... "hello Dii..." geet found this rather odd! Well behaved. She gives shila a look, who gives out a uncomfortable smile. Shila stood at the corner. Bit shaking, if he anyhow knows vicky is here! Uff! God knows what will happen!
Maan "have you taken drug!" he asks shila.. She nodes rapidly... "then why you behaving like you just seen a ghost!"
Shila "well you are to us!" she whispers under her breath..
Maan "what?"
Shila "nothing! I am going to sleep geet." she ran for her life. Nearly tripping on one of the sofa. Maan was not the only one who found this rather odd, geet starts to think there are something fissy going on!

Maan "ok!"
Geet "ok, let's go we will make dinner.. As your shila di on a CRAPY DIET!"
Shila shouts across from other room "IT'S good. I need to loose 5 kilo!"
Maan "that's why I hate models!" he murmers.
Sibling starts to play worriedly.. While geet walks in to the kitchen... Maan quickly takes his top coat off, wearing his White shirt he flows geet...
Geet "why are you flowing me! I still have not invited you!"
Maan "for your kind information it's my flat!"
Geet "yes so!" she smiles. Geet slams all the book on the table... Looking through one page after another... Thinking what to cook...
Maan "pasta!"
Geet "have i asked for your help?"
Maan "indian?" she gives another glare...
Maan "chines!" geet slams shuts the book in irritation. Not liking anything. What exactly is he trying to do! "are you helping! Or is that your habit of ordering!" she snaps.
Maan "I was asking to be honest!" he walks to other side, whispering each word very carefully... Geet could already feel the shiver of him coming close. His broad chest against her back. Those Sudective sweet breath. It seems to drive her insane... "how about normal Indian!" geet looks down where her hand laid on the table. Maan slowly slides his hand on the top...
Maan "may I?" he asked, it was more teasing then naughty. Another sigh smile crept up on geets face... "you take the maida!" he wad barely looking at anything... His eyes fixed on her... He poured the maida on a bowl then added a jug full of water... Maans eyes became completely lost in her. A shiver went down geets body... Her Mouth already became dry with his heat. She could not explain how much this feeling worth to her. How much this feeling making her week. She closed her eyes as maans lips touched the nape of her neck. Something defiantly different taking place between them... Something that neither could explain... "maan!" her normal wispear of his name came out... There hand startted to play in the puddle in the bowl. It was no where dough! Or ever will... His hand starts to slide up. Geet closed her eyes shut. This was defiantly wrong, now she was rethinking About her thought... They should have went out for the dinner... There meditation was broken by a bang shut noise. They jumped. Maan moving far way as possible. Geet quickly opens her eyes running to the living room, flowed by maan... Neither missed the chance of vicky trying to run out in there family teddy bear nightdress!
Maan "vicky!" he looks at him in shock! Specially if he was thinking of staying the night here!
Geet "where dis you get my family teddy bear set?" she asked annoyingly. Completely missing the point of vicky was planning to stay the night over!
Maan "vickyyy!" he stood by the kitchen door with arm crossed his chest. Extremely angry glare. Sibling looked at them once then back to there business! Shila looking at geet. Begging her to take him way!
vicky "I was about to leave!" he makes a face!
Maan "in your night dress? & that two teddy! That's just disgrace to khurana!" all 4 sibling along with Shila looks at maan in disbelieve. And shouts out "excuse me!"
Geet "I hope I did here that wrong!"
Maan "no! You have hard that right! Disgrace! Actually I should say disgrace to the cooking!"




geet mouths fell right open with a shock... "how dare you call my cooking disgrace? You! Y-you.. Dust danav!" she points her finger at him. Maan twisted it, lowing it down... "acca! So tell me can you cook without looking at the recipy book?"
Geet "what are you taking me as a robot! Like you!"
Maan "I am not a robot?"
Geet "acca! Look at your self, after office! Still wearing work cloths!
Maan "like you gave me chance to change!"
Geet "dekho ap hamko iljam math do!"
Maan "ku na du?" he removes her finger again from the tip of his nose... Then suddenly both jumped with the thud noise of the door.
Shila "keep arguing who have stopped you!" maan gives her a glare and walks in to the kitchen while geet walks towards her sibling!
Rajji "I think you are walking the wrong way!"
Geet "tu chup kar!"
Rajji "just saying! You don't have to shout!"
Geet "tu chup karegi!" ... "geeettt..." maan shouts...




next- at last a kiss

hay you all... thanks for all the love & support..

pls pls pls do pres the like... & pls do comment it motivates me allot

xxx

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
Awesome... Looking forward to next part 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
poor vicky, that was an awesome update...and alluring precap. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
Hilarious ...I loved the way Vicky tried to peep out ...
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Maan is Man na Maan Mai tera Mehmaan LMAO ..Very nicely written... how confuse Shela was about the entire situation 🤣 Vicky's night suit was too good..
continue soon😆
Edited by Dilsay - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
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lovely update xxx

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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
Awesome update !!
Kitchen scene was just wow!!!
Cant wait for the kiss !!!!
Updat soon ...
Luv this ff :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
Amazing update
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will comment in detail later


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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
amazing waiting for next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
loved the update...
loving the effect maan has on geet well v all know wat effects geet has on him...
bechara vicky phasa and that too in teddy night dress...
oh eagerly waiting for the next update...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part
loved the kitchen scene
plz continue soon

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