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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: loving_girl

Superb...👏
ohhh...maan is planing honeymoon...😆
Ratii agla update goa trip hona chahiye plsss...


thank u soo much ...defo will try to update trip
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon...

sorry 4 d late comment ... was out of town ...

i dont want her to call maan as bava ... i some how dont like that word ... being a hyderabadi i hear it too often n i hate it ...


hey ...i was just kidding geet will not call maan bava don't worry
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aziza_ahmed

rati tats a great update...

geet oda atthaiya vida avanga maama nallavara??? no rite???
so avan property kaga geet ahh mariage pannanum naenaichan ahh???
BAVA???????ennaku ithu pidikale dear...plz ava avana per solii kupidatum...
thank god she dint marry tat moron...
goa tats acoll places
rocking update dear..great going...


hey...thank u...kadai la yaaru nallavanga yaaru kettavanga nu enake teriyadu...so inda madiri difficult ques kekadenga plzzz...lol
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtykhurana

hey i just read ur all update in one go...

and i must say all r simply fabolous...

i just loved each nd evry update...

awesome love story... loving it...

i just love geet of ur story.. she is so so so sweet..

and i loved name cady...

plz PM me whnevr u update..

keep writing..

lookin forward for nxt update..

continue soon



THANK U sooomuch
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sunaina23

😊😊 hey too good...please add me to ur buddy list..n fast ga update cheyu...waiting..


... thank u...i ve added u to buddy list
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Posted: 14 years ago

-divya-, thahu, dpurva, 01leothelion, sehzadisomia, sheetalvasa, cutemishti, cukish, kabslocks, Tammykhurana, dh_riti, maanmania, poongs123, loving_girl, mansijani21, thendral_111, amalu123, Ash1991, azee11, priya.shilpa, star_777, ChillwidMG, MSgayatri, paponecon, Srabon_Dhara, cue1, ritzy09, lil.mizz.smexii, mishtykhurana, sarkh26, mona1992, kahkashansakina, gangesegb, soni4eva, am_sweet_pari, abinash079, aziza_ahmed, t_areeb, anshimanshi, anuandavi, XXXYYYZZZ, sonali_N, maaneetsangel, zahra15, todayzstar, -dia-, simi91, swetha10, bhanu_rekhag, Shalve, -Nilam-, Dreamy_Mystique,

THANK U ALL SO MUCH ...
(SRY IF ANYONE'S NAME IS MISSED OUT COZ THIS IS THE LIST I COPIED FROM LIKE BOX)

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Posted: 14 years ago
CHAPTER-23
There was three days left for sameera's engagement . maan insisted to stay in hyderabad as he was sure that Geet's aunt and Yash would have played dirty tricks in business and so he wanted to clear all that. He didn't want geet to face any problem because of them. maneet were in office almost whole day geet hated office but still she accompanied maan . The staffs of Handa Industries were having tough time as maan was making their life hell with all types of ques. Geet felt bad for those poor souls in office who has never been under such a Boss but still she didn't want to interfere in his works coz she knows maan is the Best when it comes to business.

MAAN : wat the hell !! do u call this a proper maintained file ? tumse koi kaam teek se ho sakta hai (courtesy :GHSP...my fav dialogue)

Maan was storming at poor manager who was struggling to meet maan's requirements. the manager looked at geet for help. She walked near maan and placed her hands on his.

GEET : Maan shaant hojaiye.they are trying their best...toda aur time deejiye.

Maan's temper was lowering geet signalled the manager to go out. Then she hugged maan .

GEET : aap itne tension kyun lete ho?...aap toda aaram kijiye kaam apne aap hojayega...
MAAN : nahi geet these people are irresponsible...sab ke sab ke sab yash ke chamche hai...

Geet was still hugging him caressing his back.

MAAN : geet ek baat poochoon?
GEET : ummm...
MAAN : muje lakta hi ki we should change all the staffs...they don't seem trustworthy...
GEET : iss mein poochne waali baat kya hai aap ko jo teek lage woh kariye...

Geet lifted her face to see him.

GEET : cadu aap dobara aisa mat poochiye ab ye sab mera nahi aap ka responsibility hai...waise toh daada ji ko toh pehale se patata ki main yeh sab handle nahi kar sakti hoon issliye woh saare zimidari apne daamaad par chod ke gaye hai...

( frds u must have understood by now but still i would like to clear that geet's daada ji has written all his property in the name of geet's husband as he knew geet easily trusts everyone and so could be easily cheated that is why yash tried to marry her...i know toda filmy hai but chalega na?)

Geet was not in the mood to go to office so maan promised her that he will join her soon as he had impt meeting that couldn't be post ponded . geet just roaming aroun the house supervising the servents.A pair of hands closed her eyes she easily guessed who it was.

GEET : aap ko humare yaad aagayi kya?

Geet removed his hand and turned to face him.

GEET : muje laga ki tum boolgayi that geet even exists
DEV : acha ji jo galti aap karte ho uska inzam hum par lagaate ho

they both busted into laughter.

DEV : kya hai yaar aaj kal toh tum muje booligayi ho...tab se bro aaye tabse tum mujse baat bhi nahi karte
GEET : aise nahi hai dev...
DEV : toh phir kaisa hai...
GEET : acha tum hi batao ki muje kya karna hai...
DEV : Hyderabad goomhe bahut din hagaye...wat say?
GEET : teek hai ...i ll inform maan...
DEV : geet tum bhi na perfect wife material ho...

Both geet and dev had great time recollecting all their old memories. After lots of fun they returned and maan returned from office at the same time . They were all happy .

MAAN : dev daadi kaisi hai?
DEV : she is fine bro...aap ke aur geet ke baare mein poocha maine kuch bahana banadi...its high time tat u should reveal ur marriage to her...
MAAN : i know dev jaise hum dono goa se waapas aayengey...main daadi se baat karloonga.
dev nodded.

MAAN : waise dev tum achanak yahan kaise?
DEV : kya karen bro kuch aisa kaam aagaya jo mere alawa koi nahi karsakta

maan looked questioningly. Dev went near geet grabbed her hand and tied friendship band.

DEV : Happy friendship day

He handed a gift to her. It was since the first year they met dev would never forget to wish geet on friendship day or give her a gift. geet was very happy.

GEET : muje laga ki tum boolgaye hoge.
DEV : aise kabi hosakta hai kya?

Geet and Dev hugged eachother .maan was happy to see them. Friendship was the one beautiful thing that he has never experienced in his life. so he was happy seeing his shona having such a wonderful friend.

It was the day for maneet to go to goa coz sameera's engagement was the next day. maan came back from office all exhausted.

MAAN : tumne apna packing karli?

Geet nodded eating an apple.

MAAN : acha main ab packing karleta hoon.

maan searched for his things but he didn't find.

GEET : maine kaha na ...maine humara packing karli

maan was never dependent on anyone nor he never wanted anyone's help in doing his things but now he felt very happy when geet was helping him . there was some spl feeling in being dependent on her for few things.


( frds i know its a bit small it was just a frdship day update coz i ve something else planned for this sunday... i ll updat tmr provided the comments cross 7 pgs and likes over 50 )

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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome update dear continue soon 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww sooo cuteee!
cont soon!
thanks for the pm!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

vry lovly update dear..

i just love cadu nd shona...

sounds so so sweet and special

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