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Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

wow..supreb update.

love Mr n Mrs..Khurana..

cant wait for the nxt update

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Ayesha

@notfadedaway

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

AHH! I love maan and geet attitude soo so mucH :D ahh!

omg! Mr and Mrs Khurana. I m sure Maan LOVED IT :P

DEv seems urgh! :( I hope he does not harm Geet! :( how he is talking to her...seems like..he is gonna do something! :( but Maan is there :DD

ahh! love how he put his hand on her waist! <33 I need some hot scenes like those! :P haha!

UPDATESOON :D I miss jeene ke ishare..but I m happpy you are updating all of them! :)

Maan is slowly DEF falling for her ;) haha. I loveee jai and meera :)) and also sid! haha!

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jenny

@ajenn

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Desigirl144

Oh my God! how embarassing! I meant to add an A at Sid's wife... shoot! its actually Ameera.. hehe.. sooory!

Ooh okie u got my doubt cleared. I tot Jai's wife is meera den when sudd Maan mentioned Sid's wife as Meera as well.. I got really confuse as i tot wouldnt it be more confusing to have two meera in a same story. I even tot as Meera might be playing some trick. U see me FBI brain works pretty fast 😆

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-eiya-

@-eiya-

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

wow nw "Mr & Mrs Khurana" ah...awww i m loving it...nd that dev 🤬...errr hate him...felt like giving him a hard blow...😡

do continue soon...thanks for the pm...

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ninavi

@ninavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

awesome as usual

loved it

cont sooon

thnx for d PM

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613528

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

This is a great OS, I love all your pieces because they are so unique and different. The witty dialogues are great and I love the sarcastic interaction between Maan and Geet. You made NT a waitress LMAO! But I do feel sorry for her, she gets treated like crap. I don't know why but I keep picturing Dev as Rudra pratap sigh from Kitni Mohabbat hai o_o I would love to read more, great job, you are a fabulous writer.

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome part yaar...
maaneet scenes in geet flat n geet n jai convo n Mr & Mrs😳 khurana meeting with dev all r fabulous...great job...looking fwd...

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Durga

@mrk-1

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

awsome yaar...loved it ... i guess that lady is NT

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MsMovielover

@MsMovielover

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

ohh i totally love it...
adoring mr & mrs khurana 😆...
i think its nt in their cause maybe she is pregnant 😕
cant wait for more

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Amazing part::
Loved maan & geets sarcy answers to each other
Awww maan says he loves fighting wiv each other
So maaneet are both attracted to each other
Oooh geet was so happy that she was being Mrs khurana
Urrrgh that dev is so disgusting,,,love how geet is a smooth lier,,,I fink the girl crying is naintara
Cont soon Xx...
Tux 4 the PM