ff-mg-pyaar ya shaadi!!!#1-pt 63- see new thread - Page 41

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TeamMcSwarek thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww sweet part!
cont soon
thanks for the pm!
mayurmaaneet thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
now who is this lady.. let me guess geet? lol.. awwnn thats soo sweet.. geet gave him a kiss.. cont sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the updates...
usually maan gets lots of nick names but in this maan is naming our geet diff names which i am enjoying...
lets c how they r gonna stay in touch...
wondering wat gift maan wud purchase for her...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 38

Lady: hello sir. I think u r searching for something. Can i help u?

Maan turned towards the lady. The lady is standing on the other side of counter. she is a sales girl there.


(@mayurmaaneet dear u expected geet na...but oops...she is a sales girl...he he😉...)

Maan: ha...yes...i am thinking of giving a gift to my friend but cant find a proper one.

Lady: sir is ur friend she or he?

Maan: girl.

Lady: girl?..u mean she is small.

Maan: no no...she almost completed her graduation.

Lady: sir if u dont mind can i say something.

Maan: yes.

Lady: sir i saw u taking that bracelet before...that will be the perfect gift y dont u give her that?

Maan: ahh...i thought the same...but she...she will not accept...she doent like such things i think...she dont have interest on these things she is so innocent...beautiful...she always smiles with her heart...so pure...childish...cute...non stop baathe...hmmm

Maan smiled thinking about geet...lost in her thoughts.

Lady smiled and turned around and disappeared in to the back room and came back after few minutes with a big teddy in her hand.


Lady: sir i m sure she will take this and cannot say no to this gift.

Maan: but teddy????...she is not a kid.

Lady: not her mind sir...but by ur words i can say...her heart is still a kid.

Maan bought the teddy and made it packed. He went to the cab placed the teddy in the back seat and sat beside it. He asked the driver to drive back to pinky's house.

The cab stopped in front of pinky's house and maan got down leaving the teddy in the car.

Maan(st): i will bring geet to the car and show her the teddy...it will be like surprise...than carrying the teddy all the way to her house.

Maan turned to face and house and opened the frount gate and entered. As soon as he entered in he saw geet sitting on the steps infront of the door with her hands placed on her knees and cupping her face in both of her palms and looking at the ground lost in thoughts.



maan went neared her and placed his hand on her shoulder. She came out of the thoughts.

Maan: geet what are u doing here?...i mean outside.

Geet: waiting for u maan.

Maan: waiting!!!

Geet: u said na u will come in 5 mins so.

Maan: i said na to go inside then y are u sitting on the steps.

Geet: i cant go inside maan.



Edited by teju2292 - 14 years ago
preethia thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
nice one so he got a teddy...
has pinky changed her house or she has gone for work or something...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful update. 👏 👍🏼 👏
Loved it. ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
So maan selected perfect gift for childish geet. Eagerly waiting 4 next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
NICE PART DEAR A TEDDY BEAR FOR GEET HA HA LOL DO CONTINUE SOON
504887 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updts
ohh so finally journey ended
geet kissed maan yippee
maan got a teddy 4 her so cute
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...I loved the gift dear...so cute😛...
why geet sitting on the stairs out of the house? is pinky not in the house?
please continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gosh they are SOOO cuteee!
hehehe update soon xD
thanks for the double update
and thanks for the pm too xD

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