M&G FF- You and I ? ch 5 pg 15 updt 28/07/2011 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks everyone for yr lovely comments ...thank you so much


@Soapy- Glad u didnt wait for the PM ...else i wud have never got yr comment🤣



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Posted: 14 years ago
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could you add me to your pm list please ???? .This is just wow...
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Chapter 3a


It was a brand new day and Geet much to his relief was in better shape ...but the happenings of last evening still bothered him and he was determined to find out the cause ,He decided to investigate in his own way once he was at work


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Maan had just finished the call with his mum and he was even more confused than before cause nothing from his conversation cud throw even the slightest on what happened at the party that made her feel all upset ..to that extent .He was still thinking about the conversation trying hard to dig out anything suspicious when his cell fone buzzed and much to his astonishment it was a call from home


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The doctor left and Maan continued to stare at her sleeping frame while the docs words resonated in his ears "Mr Khurana apparently she fainted bec of extreme weakness ...mujhe lagta hai inhone kal se kuch bhi nahin khaya ..." Why had she not eaten ,what had gone wrong ...had she found out about his past ...no it cudnt be cause no one except his mum knows about it and she wud never tell ...then what cud be so serious and damaging ...his thought broken by her sudden movement and eventually waking up
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As Maan asked the cook to bring some food and juice for her ,Geet kept looking at him wide eyed almost in disbelief ..he was here ...really he had left work for her ..did he care that much ...did she matter to him ..the questions not leaving her ...but she had to put them aside as her food arrived .

As she began to eat, Maan sat right opposite to where she was and started to observe her .She could feel his haw eyes on her ...and those eyes left her once they were satisfies that she had eaten fully and properly .Maan was about to leave the room when her words stopped him


Geet -I am Sorry meri wajah se aapko takleef hui ,u had to sip work ..aapko nahin aana chahiye tha kaka was here na

Maan was baffled at her words ...what did she think of him ..was he some beast ...'Geet U shud be taking care of yrself and u shud be sorry for not having done that ..I am not going to ask why u didnt eat ...but from now on dont skip food for nething,ok

She nodded in affirmation and Said 'But I am Sorry'

Maan- U need'nt be biwi ke nakhre uthana to husband ka farz hi hota hai ...yeh to waise bhi tumhara pehla nakhra tha'...saying that he left the room ...he didnt intend to say that but words just flowed ...and the reaction on her face made him feel gud ...infact vvvgud



Short Update ...but its better than no update ...3b will be up this weekend ...hope u like this rushed part ..do leave yr words 😳

Edited by rdfan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome FF...loved it!!
Plz cont soon and pm when you do!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey, read ur FF...it's engaging...do PM me ur updates...
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Chapter 3b


She kept staring wide eyed in the direction where he stood and said those words 'Biwi ke nakhre uthana to husband ka farz hi hota hai '...had he actually said that or was it just her absolute wild imagination she wondered ...she had feared his anger but what she got was his genuine concern mixed with some mischief ...and that twinkle in his eye was something not to be missed .She had heard a lot about Maan from Brij ...how he was a complete fun loving prankster with a golden heart but she had never witnessed that side of his cause earlier she was too young and indifferent to notice and later he wasnt the Maan ...Brij had told her abt.

She snuggled into her duvet with a relaxed smile on her face ...after all the fainting was worth it ...what she cudnt do in a month the fainting did in a day ..and he managed to bowl her over ...not that she wasnt already bowled ...well there is a good in everything that happens she thought.
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Even though he was relaxed ...he still cudnt concentrate on his work ...her wide eyed look was a continuous distraction ...and he cudnt help but smile ...he did shock her out of her wits ...well the accomplishment wasnt much of a surprise because right thru his uni he was known for his sharp wit and charm and he was happy that even though Sameera took away everything from him...leaving just a mere skeleton behind ...guess somethings never leave ...they just remain hidden.

Shaking away the thought he decided to check on Geet and probably head to sleep himself .

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The loud buzzing of his cell phone woke him up but before he cud get into action he froze ...the sight before him was beautiful enchanting and baffling ...there she was all snuggled upto him hugging him tight with her head calmly resting on his broad chest...a few strands of hair covering her face ...how ,when did this happen ...his arm was there protectively arnd her and he cud tell she was a little warm ...may be that was the reason .he glanced at the clock to see it was 10 am ...holy christ he had overslept and how no wonder Adi was calling him ...he had never overslept in his entire life and today he had ...he was figuring out a way to move out without disturbing her when she woke up ,the horror and shock on her face was evident along with the slight blush as she immediately looked the other way and quickly made her way out .


It was a rush rush affair ...he got ready quickly ,called up Adi made a lame excuse ...and dashed to work

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Geet-Kaka he left without eating breakfast...aap ne kyun jaane diya

Kaka- hahaha like he wud listen to me na

Geet- Mujhe hi ...meri hi kaunsa sunte hain ...

Kaka- tumhari sunte ? Tum kuch keh bhi paati ho usse ...maine to dekha nahin sirf haan ji,sorry hi karti rehti ho ...bigaad rakha hai uska dimaag ..

Geet- kaka...
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He must b angry ...and why wont he be , what must he be thinking ...ki zara sa mujhse baat kya karli main to chipak ke hi so gayi ...how did this happen ...what the hell is wrong with me ...no wonder he didnt eat ..hey bhagwan

The entire day was hard to go by for Geet as she prepared herself to apologize to him once again ...she knew she was asking for trouble ...but then she didnt have a choice


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The entire day he felt at a certain ease with himself and the entire world arnd him for once ...the extra hrs of sleep had done wonders ...was it the hrs or was it her ...cause he overslept bec of her ...whateverr be the reason ..he had never slept so soundly since ages ...and he had never felt so light.

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He was back home before time and was working in his study ...when her sniffling caught his attention and he looked up to see her standing right across his desk ,crying ,sniffling ...unknowingly his heart sank ...now what had happened .

Geet-Aap mujhse naraz hain, isliye breakfast bhi nahin kiya ,mujhe nahin pata raat mein main kaise ...maine kuch jaan ke nahin kiya ...I am sorry very sorry ...main doosre room mein chali jaooingi agar aap bolenge to ...I am sorry ...and tears flowed

He walked upto her involuntarily and wiped away her tears with the back of his palm...and said 'I am not angry...why wud i be ...main breakfast isliye nahin kara cause i was already late for work ...aur agar tumhein doubt that to fone kar leti

Geet still sniffling- Aap pukka mujhse naraz nahin hai

He wanted to laugh at her innocence he actually did but stopped himself and said in all earnestness ' When I see tears in yr eyes it like reiterates to me that this is what i have given u and nothing else '.

She quickly wiped away the remaining tears and said - 'yeh aapki wajah se nahin hain ...ye meri khud ki galti hain '

Geet-Aap ne kuch nahin khayaa ...main khaana lagati hoon aajayega...she left giving him a huge smile ...that unknowingly melted his already melting heart ...

How ever much he was trying to disregard her affect ...but the truth was it was starting to show in his very being ...



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So thats it for this part ...let me know what u guys think about it..let me know😳...Sorry no Promo ...but all i can say thodi thodi masti thoda thoda pyar 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful FF!! read all the parts its amazing!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: niddzz

loved the update...it was absolutely awesome...loved every bit of it...!!!

geet is so innocent...aww...they slept cuddled up...!!!!
geet - kaka bonding is so sweet...!!!!
oops...sameera aunty was mentioned...she made him what he is today...!!
cant wait to read more...update soon...!!!
me not gettin pm...😭😭



Nidzz🤗...Sowie abt the pm ...I have not been able to sent out any so you are not the only one 😃...But I Promise i shall send u one from now on right when i update...and thanx so much for liking it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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LOVELY FF😊


PLZ ADD ME IN PM LIST
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Posted: 14 years ago
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like your story sounds good... plz update it as soon as possible thank u

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