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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#641

whn i was reading the part about maan n armaan's ride...my body got the chills and i felt like crying so much.

u r an amazing writer.

though the past is very sad but maan is sharing it with geet and that's awesome. secondly piyu isn't maan's biological daughter n yet he is so parental towards her. can't imagine how he wud b with his n geet's kid . awww i'm just dying happy here. i'm writing this sentence from my maaneet's paradise.

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#642

Excellent update dear...thanx for the long one 🤗 ...
eagerly waiting to know the next...

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Escapist

@Escapist

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Posted: 13 years ago

#643

Minal,

I read replies by some readers and I found one thing in common..the people who read felt like crying but with me none happened...I mean throughout from the start till the very end there was not even moisture in my eyes and to be frank I so connected to Maan's profile and the dark thunderous night...with the rains slashing the wallowing trees...ermm why am I writing my ex-FB status :S

But surprisingly I found this part to be calm and accepting things one..and you accept things with time...knowing Maan's past settles a lot of unsettled air and the ruffle that surrounded...what remains now is Geet..the beginning and the end of this very story...its somewhat all tangible and messy from a distance but if you near it you realize its so void and empty just like the dark abyss where you just dunno where to head...and maybe it is at this time that emotions do not die completely yet they are only let out in the moments when you feel you'll be drowned and broken without repair once again and its then that you either cry or open up to someone...and that someone is close..close in experience or in that feel...it could even be to a stranger you could feel close :)

Well one more thing that I noticed was some even felt he is depressed...I don't think so he is..he is just lonely and has shut himself off...its not that people din try but sometimes it doesn't help only the one who has felt it somewhere can help you out with it and also you can't open up to all, can you? And for me there is a big difference in being depressed and shutting oneself off...at least with this case it is.

I'm in love with this unconventional yet touching story...is it really a story no it is not! Emotions are true for someone or the other !!!!

Nicely crafted and beautifully portrayed !
Waiting for the journey ahead!

Cheers,
Fatima

Edited by Escapist - 13 years ago

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Bahaar

@Morning Star

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Posted: 13 years ago

#644

such is the depth level of true friendship when u give up everything for them. Such are friends where they care and put their friends first and themselves after. lovely update and continue soon for i enjoy reading your writing.

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crazydream

@crazydream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#645

Fabulous...Fabulous...Fabulous...Fabulous...Fabulous...Fabulous...

wow...

superb...

awesome update...

you gave us such a long update... thank you..

luved it...

keep writing

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#646

HEY I JUST READ THIS FF IN ONE GO AND MUST SAY YOU WRITE AMAZINGLY WELL

THE STORY, THE WAY YOU HAVE SHOWN TWO BROKEN SOULS COMING TOGETHER, THE WORDS YOU HAVE USED IS JUST OUT OF THE WORLD

FABULOUS STORY AND CHARACTERISATION

PLEASSE PM WHEN YOU UPDATE

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hamini_yash

@hamini_yash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#647

amazing update . you put up his emotions and pain very well. Hope Geet brings back old maan.

Update soon

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Shalini

@shalini01

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#648

wow piyu lost her parents and maan adopted her, what a hugh loss for them all. emotional update but great as usual. thanks for the PM.

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known

@mitzi11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#649

oh that was emotional past maan heard
poor maan still the guilt eating him even though it wasn't his
fault
but sam was selfish person & truly didn't love maan with her
all heart
i'm sure maaneet i'll heal one another
aww so piyu is amy & riz daughter maan his amazing friend
to adopt her
craving more
thnx dear
bless yu

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mandymore

@mandymore

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#650

Amazing prt,so piyu is his frnds daughter
hes livng in guilt of killng his buddy which was an accidnt,gud to see him opening to geet
maan too suffered a lot in his past,hope maan n geet can soothe n heal eachothrs wound.luvd it
glad to see u bak.thnxs 4 pm

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