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Posted: 14 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: ridhz21

Nice update
but small part 😔...want more update
loved it
cont soon



WILL UPDATE 1 MORE PART TODAY...HOPEING YA BIG UPDATE HUIN😳😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
Nice update
yar plz do large update. Its too short
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93

nice update👏

waiting for more

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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
thanks to all...4 giving such sweet comment and will update 1 more and hopefully big part this time😊
Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
can't wait 4 maneet's second meeting!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

can't wait 4 maneet's second meeting!

continue soon!



thanks buddy...yup will update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97

PART -10

(YIPEE..I HAV COMPLETED 10 PART..THANXX 4 SUPPORT)

SCENCE ' GEET'S CAR

Geet thought-tu pagal ho gayi hain'tu kaise bhul gayi ki aj rashmi ke colleage gana hain..voh tho mujhe kacha kha jaya gi'babaji bachana!!!!

Geet-driver jaldi chalo!!!

Diver fastened the speed'and her car moved towards the colleage

SCENCE- MAAN'S CAR

Maan thought-ab esna kya panga kiya'aj tho tum nahi bacho ga dev!!!kabse dadi tumha bacha rahi hain!!!

Maan-driver jaldi chalo!!!

SCENCE ' PARKING LOT

Both geet and maan car reached the colleage

Geet's car was first and then maan's car

Both car stop at the parking lot

Maan came out of the car and removed his goggles

All the girls were drooling over him

Then geet came out of the car

She was seeing in the purse

Maan moved towards geet side and did not notice her!!!

Again same thing happened

Both crashed each other

Geet-ahh!!excuse me

Maan-excuse me!!!

Geet and maan look to each other's eyes

Geet thought-same eyes!!how beautiful!!

Maan thought- same eyes!!beautiful!!!

Both snapped out of there thought

Maan ' tum

Geet- tum yahan bhi aya gaya'mera picha karta kata ufff

Maan- miss tum janti nahi ho tum kisse baat kar rahi ho!!

Geet-ek baat batao??

Maan- kya hain??

Geet-tumha koi aur dialogue nahi ata jab dekho.. "tum janta nahi tum kisse baat kar rahi ho"in over acting style and stress to the word

And she continued 'arre mr mujhe nahi janna tum kaun ho!!!mein kya karuin gi janke'batao!!

Maan was super fulstrated

Maan-chup bilkul chup!!!

Geet-jaise tumhare kahana se mein..chup ho gauin gi!!!

Maan- miss kya tum ek min ka liye chup ho sakti huin'ki yeh torn radio bas chal ki rahata hain

Geet angry voice-tumne mujhe torn radio kaha!!!

Maan 'hain kahan!!suniye nahi deta kya!!!

Geet-hain suna !!!dhust danav

Maan-kya tumne kuch dhust danav kaha

Geet-hain kahan!!!suniye nahi deta kya!!!hahaha

Maan-oh god!!!kaise pagal larki hain\

Geet-chup bikul chup!!

Maan- koi mujhese esa baat nahi karta!!!

Geet-kyun ki voh koi mein nahi huin!!

Maan-tum apna apko kahi ki princess samjheti huin!!

Geet-samjhe na ki kya jarurat meinn tho huin hiprincess

Maan- kahan?? Apne sapno mein!!!

Geet-nahi tumhare sapno mein!!!

Maan lost in the words

Geet-kyun!!!tumhe laga mein ya kahun gi!!hahaha then tumha galat phami ho gayi hain!!!

Maan-miss torn radio agar apki bakwass ho gayi ho thomein kuch kaam se aga tha yahan!!!

Geet- hain mujhe pata hain 'job ke liya aya hoga!!!

Maan-ji nahi

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Part 11- no precap

Keep wondering!!!

HOPE U LIKE IT

DO COMMENT

SRY FOR MISTAKE

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
nice...
LOL!...their second meeting was also a disaster!😆...to hide their feelings they are fighting with each other!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99

wow that was superb nd brilliant 👏

continue soon


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Posted: 14 years ago
no precap wondering what can be next...

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