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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome upd...
wondering who iz d girl...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice story dr, loved it
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update. annie aa gayi. plz plz plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part. was the girl is annie
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb ... awesome ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
i think its his sister anee...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Oh ur late

And what make in this world………………………….for mr msk forbeing late

The girl fumed.

The air hostress………..looking at the girl…………………….who istalking to his dream man so rudely

Maan:please im sorry.im stuck in some work…………….he blushed remembering the moments…………………………….

For every mistake there needs a punishment…

Ur going to fetch me.my favourite sprots car…………………………..with in 1 hr……………………….

See u

Another one.im driving home in ur useless.car.

With that she grab the keys and ran towards the car.

Maan put his hand on hair.and called adi…………………..

As she reached home………she bumped with pari………………which dropped her bunny..

Are u ok sweetyu.

Yes im but who are u

Im anee……………………………

Im pari.

Just then geet saw…………….

She came to pari….beta tum teek hona.chot nahii aye.

So sorry jee.woh bachee hay…………………………………

Pari sorry bolo beta.

No its ok.my mistake.i didn't see u……

Just then maan enter……………

And she caught his hand.so where is my gift.

It is out side.

He said with a smile.

Geet wondered and how she is mingling with maan sir…………

Maan caught the expression in geet face.

Anee……………………….this is geet.

And geet this is anee my sweet devil sister

She gave angry glare………and he corrected.i mean darling sister

Im a devil.for u mr maan singh khurana and ur skills won't work here

Im anvesha singh khurana.

And then he lifted pari….

And im pari singh handa………………….

Geet smiled.where rohan enter.

Pari.kaha hotum itne late hogayee.achee bachee jaldi soote hay na………….phir subha utane ke liye maasi ko tang karthe hoio.

Aur maasi kuch nahii bolti………….

Bhai aap bilkul saduu……hoo.anee smiled….

Yes sweetheart……….ur right.bhais are always khadus and sadoos………..

He said pointing towards maan.

And ther e is no sports car.

Sports car…….rohan eyes widened……………………

Geet turned…

And said with her sweet voice……

Rohan pari chalo…………………………………..aunty I mean didi ko good night bolo.

And also gave kisses to maan and…………………..anee……………………..

He took the kiss and looked a thte geet.

Geet in verge of running……………….

And she left anee and greeted with smile……………..

Toh yeh hay who wajaa………………jo mera bahi ko apnea nee ke khabar nahoii.

Lekin anee tuje….iss sab ke baaremein kabar kaise………………..

Who Vicky

Suddenly she realized that she spilled the beans.

Nahii ke humko apke khabar nahii

Lagtha hay dadibhi naa……….ek baat bhi…………………apne dile mein nahii laghte hay………………….

Muje daadi se baat karne hay

Lekin issse pehle……

Ek baar geet se miloo.

Nahii kaafi raat ho chuki hayu

And then………………………….

Suddenly he is working with laptop……………………….

And suddenly he heard two screams………………………….

He ran towards to find

Geet and anee screaming loud.

And he switch on the lights

Geet:sorry im scared of dark…………………..

Anee:I too scared of dark.

Light chale gayee……….pari aur rohan…..jaag jayenge.toh ……………………..royenge isliye.doond ne ayii thio.

Who lights chale gayee.na.isdliye//////////////

They both suddenly listened to a laughter.

Tney both find…………………….maan stood there smiling at both…. Seeing how they scared of dark.

Geet got angry……………………….

Where anee stamped foot

What is there funny mr maan singh khurana.

Maan looked at geet,which is looking very much cute in anger.

He just wanted…………kiss that cheeks and nose which is red…………………………..

She wanted to leave…………………………

Anee stamped her foot to the floor and gone back to the room…………………………………

He ran behind her

After 1 hr of persuading her…………finally after……………………some comfortable deal….(in his language)……for one diamond set and one………………………….platinumone………………………….her anger vanished…….

Oh god one down.

What about second.

You cannot persuade her with gifts.as she is one only gift for u from god.and coming to diamonds and platinum.all will be pale infron t of her beauty…….

Now what u will do.mr maan singh khurana tomakur misthy.smile……………………………………..

Kaaise manougi…….usee……………

Precap:manoo geet mission………………………….

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
waiting for maan manaofy geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

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