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Uthra

@Viji79

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+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#391

Oh you ought to become a story and screenplay writer. I visualized each and every scene and was blown away.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#392

Maan's a paedophile aaaggghhh! Just kidding, I really wanted to say that! LOL

Awesome part, I can't wait for them to finally meet!

You're description of Maan is really sexy ☺️ and I loved your style of writing.

I can't wait to read more :]

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Silence

@SecretKhabri420

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+ 9

Posted: 14 years ago

#393

@Nadia: 😭 Please update soon, u ended this part in wrong time, I was waiting eagerly for Maaneet's meeting, this is unfair 😭

U always like to torture us by ending parts in wrong timing 😭

Edited by temorocks - 14 years ago

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Pallavi

@QueenbeePallavi

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#394

not done..ye kya baat hui bhala???? 😲we wanted the update to iska matlab ye thodi hua ki you give us this filler like a lollipop and say jao baccho jake maze lo..huh... 🤔Nadz I am gussa...and on top of it NO MAANEET here!!!... 😔next time make it a proper good lovey dovey full of maaneet part okies!!! huh... keep it up...still not satisfied remember...

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Maaneet4eve

@Maaneet4eve

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#395

Update was very good... I was almost getting shivers when I picturised Maan in his hot avataar...

But it is very that you left us on a cliff hanger... we wanted to know how the sparks would fly😉

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#396

awesome, beautiful update.
loved it.
continue soon.

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soraya

@priya86

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#397

superb.i love your story.you rock as usual nadia didi❤️

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579908

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Posted: 14 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva
Awesome updates
loved them all loadz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx

thanks so much... glad you liked it 😃

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579908

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Posted: 14 years ago

#399

Originally posted by: cue1
Obviously someone needs to be at home...and who else other than Geet lol
I like how you used Damon and Elena from Vampire Diaries...big fan me! :-)
BTW if you dont mind can you but the ages of the characters up?? and if Maan is returning after 30 years...how old is he exactly??
:O
Other than that AMAZING update as always!!!

Exactly...😆 i couldn't think of a reason for Geet to stay home, so i took a quirky route out 🤣 I Loveee Vampire Diaries esp Damon Salvatore 😍
yep, i have now added the ages in the character pics section... Maan is 32 yrs old
so he is 10 years older than Geet 😉😆

Thanks a lot for liking 🤗