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puth

@puth

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#291

HAWT update☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
what is Sasha planning????????

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#292

OMG OMG OMG

with so much passion running

heat burning

you have to mention that Shasha

it seems that the title is just on the verge of justification

I give you a standing ovation for such a remarkable work

Shruti

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Esha

@esha143

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#293

Hot n romantic yet beautiful n sensual...I liked how Maan hesitated more than Geet at each step thinking he'll hurt her...at this point I'll hate it if they'll get separated due to any MU's Sasha is trying to create...but lets see what she has actually planned..??I just hope they'll come out of that together...

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#294

You left me spell-bound!! It was beautifully written! Poetic in fact!!

The way the souls coalesced, the bodies were far left behind.

Very very poetic, very lyrical!

I am not in a state to say much more than this. Seriously! Splendidly written!!

But my heart does constrict thinking of what Tomorrow awaits for them. Shasha seems to have planned something really trust-shattering. Just hope Maan has seen more than enough trust in Geet's eyes to secure this bond forever.

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#295

beautifully written. hope sashas plan fails

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lively-piia

@lively-piia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#296

nice update...maan is so mch in lv wid her he is afraid that he'll hurt her...

wat other prove does he need of his lv...😊😊😊😊😊😊

too smoky update..😳😳😳😳😳😳

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#297

awesome hot n romantic part

i want shasha to fail in her plan

cant wait for more
cont ASAP

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vrsharma

@vrsharma

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#298

I hope Sasha plan will fail (what ever it may be). i don't wan't maaneet to get separate

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saanjh rathore

@saanjh11

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#299

wow yaar me still unable to breathe .

read it twice !!! hot to handle plus sooo beautiful together ,urgency yet caring different feeling all mingled making me speechless ,

you touched every desire n emotion too well dear and that too with great choice of words kuch kuch dikhta hai kuch kuch chupa hua hai 😉making everything ecstasy

geet's submission and maan's hesitation haila ek dum rapchik type making me fall for them again n again okkk whole credit goes to u an if i will write i❤️u toh galat ho jayega na 😆 so me telling u this other way round 😉

ok few ques.

itni jankaari kaha se mili??😉

kisi ne kaha tha that i am unable to write this hot,passionate,intense stuff hmmm who was she??

sumone blaming me of bachche bigad rahe hai ye lo is their chance for me🤣ya all is already done ???

geet ka first time tha ...maan ...?????????😉

me bowled over dear ,bestest thing amongst all was ur writing tactics 👏😃

⭐️⭐️⭐️ x nth time for ur choice of words that made it so different and fantabalous

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#300

Oh My... my...what a hott...passionate update...honestly speaking i dont have words...it was awesome...loved it. What else should i say m falling short of words.