FF-Book 2:A TWISTED LOVE-Update 10 sept pg 145

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#701

Originally posted by: kuttu
Felt really bad for Maithli in this story. The dialogue between Maithli and Abhay that was quite moving. Wonder how Sid feels now heaaring that the woman he is willing to change himself still loves his brother and can never replace him. In that way Sid's behaviour is quite understandable. Abhay may have gone thorough hell but in the end he is getting what he wants peace within himself some oneto love something to look forward too in this story. But Maithli and Sid are where they were years ago. Things don'e seem to have changed for them. Then Kabir is really lost to Tara so there too it looks like Trouble. And now who is the visitor I hope its Jai or Sid or is it Arjun. God then Misha is going to go ballistic.

... Maithali to Abhay. Pia to Abhay. Abhay to Pia and finally Sid to MAithali.

U are correct about Maithalia and Sid being stuck where they were centuries ago. Can they move on i hopw so? Maithali is human now so her feelings can change but can her love for Abhay ever die? That is the question. The mystery guest will be revealed in the next update

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#702

Originally posted by: shivanirajput
that was a gr8 update👏
u sometimes really make me speechless with ur writing skills
tara kabir epi sounds very interesting why doesn't tara telling kabir the truth❓
abhay has beaten up sid thats exactly what he deserves
now sid will protect pia but has sid really changed or is it just a drama
i hope pia will be fine when she goes to live with maithali
now i m really waiting to see the little one coming in this world i wonder how he/she will be
thanks for the pm will be waiting eagerly for the next update

Tara is stuckk in a rut. Abhay was just behaving on instict. Betrayal is a bitter pill to swallow but for Abhay losing Pia is a no no and he'll bend anyone to save Pia. Destroy whatever is in his path. While Sid just wants commitment from Maithali.

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peeehu

@MRS.SSO

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#703

awesum part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sooo sweeet offf maithalia although i feeel sorrry for her

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#704

Nice update! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊

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sunita satardekar

@sunu123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#705

HEY AYESHA😃AWESOME UPDATE DEAR👏👏👏...FIGHT WAS AWESOME YAAR...NOW SID WILL PROTECT PIA NOW THAT IS AWESOME YAAR...I JST WANT TO KNOW HOW WILL SID BEHAVE WITH PIA...CURIOUS ABT BABI-DEWAR RISHTA...WHY CANT TARA TELL TRUTH TO KABIR YAAR...
HOPE KI VO LOG SUPERIOR NAHI HO...
PLZ UPDATE SOON
HAV A NICE DAY
LUV U
SUNITA

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DASTAK..

@DASTAK..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#706

superb..
fab...
rocking...
beautiful...
wonderful...
loved the upd...😊
cont soon...

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#707

Hey Ayesha,

Finished reading all the updates for ur FF in less than 10 days 😃 WHOA 😊👏 This is the best FF ever yaar on Abhiya. I loved it totally. Right from your portrayal of werewolves, hunters, Dobriyals etc etc. I am speechless. Damn good. Loved ur version of Maithali. It was awesomely portrayed 👏 The storyline is too good. I also loved Tara who was a surprise package. Nice to see Abhay had a companion like Tara for a friend 😳 Abhiya? Should I say anything at all? 😳😍 I had a fab time reading ur FF and thanks for writing it. So waiting for Abhiya baby now 😊 Off to catch up with ur other FFs now 😊 Trust me, this is tons better than what was ever shown in the show itself. Damn good 👏 U definitely are a ⭐️ when it comes to FF.

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#708

:::Precap 62:::Raksha Bandhan:::

Chand had arrived with the elders at his place reluctantly. They wanted to asses if their current situation was compromised. A human wasn't supposed to get pregnat forget about this they were frowned upon. Marriage to a human was against the vampire law. Any threats to their clan was terminated and Abhay broke both rules. Chand would not let Haseena or Abhay pay the hefty price for giving into human weakness. It was a good job Haseena had done some spring cleaning shifting every trace of Pia out of their home. Chand had hoped Pia and his grand child were safe for the time being.

Haseena kept her own mind shielded away from their superiors not to give away Pia's location-Chand (Welcomes her husband) Your just in time . I was about to open the vintage blood out of the cellor. Please take a seat. I'll go make myself scarce and bring out the glass's.

Zeus roared-Enough of this fake pleasantries Haseena. Where is your son?

Haseena huskily looks directly back at their eyes-Abhay is detained with a few classmates. He'll be home later. Not sure when his phone is switched off.

Zeus angered flares his power blast-Use your telepathy or has living with the humans made U reliant on technology. Demand him to come here now.

Chand gave a nod to Haseena-Do as the master asks of U my darling. Abhay will come.

Zeus ordered-And ask him to get his human bride. I want to see the girl for myself.

Haseena shuddered a little closing her eyes-As U ask my lord-(Abhay they are here son. We can't run. Do something fast son. They want Pia.) Done!

Abhay returned the telepathic news back-(The White Witch was called for her service by Rosa. They were coming up with a Plan A and a Plan B. They will get their Pia just not the one they were hoping for.)

Haseena lied-Abhay's coming today. Just has a few loose ends to tie up first.

The White Witch was at Pia's place shileding Pia and so was Arjun. Anhay had given Maithali a little insight to his own issues at home with the superiors and Sid had decided to play along with Abhay's plan. Maithali was very persuasive with her emotional black mail on him.