FF-Book 2:A TWISTED LOVE-Update 10 sept pg 145

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Ramona

@PristineSoul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#371

Aysha.. Fantastic update. I enjoyed Sid & Maithili.. Ooohh.. I miss them in the show.. U've really done a good job.

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 14 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: shivanirajput
hey cool update u r really awesome
the way abhay is looking after pia is really very touching

kabir tara are also cute😳

i just hope abhay will soon develop some feelings for his baby and piya will be fine

by the way this fanfiction is going great.ur way of writing has really raised my excitement for the coming part .i just request u to give this ff more of ur precious time so that we will be able to read more frequent updates

moreover i whole heartedly thank u for the pm and please accept my apology for my late reply

actually my computer wasnt working. from next time i will try to reply as soon as possible

👏👏 for ur gr8 work

I try to dedicate as much time and effort on all four of my FF's. This FF has been my number one where all the readers and myself are totally engrossed into it but to make it as good as i can i have to take time ut and write a story graph and picture it in my head so i use the time i have on the other FF's as i know which direction to take them in. Jisha FF is next it will be a good one. Pia and Misha recouperating in hospital. You're welcome on the PM. BTW i appreciate U taking your time to read my FF and responding back with feedback.

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 14 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: RB81
hei aysha,
wonderful update..
so jay,neel saw wat tara showed to kabir..will they do any harm?
sid is all set to help metz..
does metz know that pia is pregnant?
do continue soon..
very eager to know whether the curse will be broken n abhiya will be safe r not..

Jay and Neel are harmless😆😉For now anyway. They are just making sure they have their main girl in their possession. They feel Maithali's love for Abhay has blindsighted her into being lenient with both Abhay and Pia rather than taking them in by force.

Mets doesn't know Pia is pregnant this should be an interesting turn of events. How will she react? No woman can bear her man with another woman and also bear a child with them is another matter

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 14 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: kuttu
Sid ready to help his long time love Maithli without any clause or condition that would be a first. And will they come to know of Pias pregnancy that would have Sid altogether riled up. And then this Neel and Jay why are they snooping around sooo much. I thought their interest was only in Pia and breaking the curse. And Maithli seems like Sid still loves to try his luck with her and she seems to to be in revovakbly in Love with Abhay for the first time felt sorry for her. Well loved the part were Kabir was shown as a mature person and he giving advice to Abhay our poor hero now he has to accept advices even from his competitor. Wondering when the whole thing is going to be out in the open and everyone can get on with their lives now everyone seems to be trying to find what the other one is doing. Waiting for that big event.
Bye

Sid will move mount Everest if he had to for Maithali. She is his only weakness. His only flaw. Its weird how both brothers can be so different in looks and in approach but they both have this dead heart that ACHES. They both Love with a passion enough to scare any normal human away. Like Abhay with Pia and formerly Maithali although he still has a soft corner for her in his hear. Then theres Sid who knows Maithali is in love with his brother but still loves her irregardless of how she feels. Nothing fazes him. So in this respect the Raichand brothers are alike in their devorion to the one they love. Only thing is Abhay would never harm anyone to get his love and Sid would kill anyone to get his. Maithali has loved ABHAY with a pure HEART. To her ABHAY is her light, her soul and her everything which is why for his happiness she let her love go. Its what U do when U are so in love with this one person. U give everything U have

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VRITIKA

@karantakiar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#375

superb ns awsm part.
plz cnt soon.
luv u
vritika

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

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Posted: 14 years ago

#376

awsum dr... nyc part loved it... contenue soon n thanx 4 pm...

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Aiyesha

@Cutiee_Ashh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#377

WOW i am lovingg this 😃,,,ive jus caught up from the start!! 😃 Plsss PM wen u next update!! 😃 Cantt Wait!! 😃

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 14 years ago

#378

:::Precap 56:::Stolen:::

Arnab sat both his daughters Misha and Panchi down with Madhoo for his serious chat. He knew now was the perfect moment he had to reveal the whole truth. Pia's pregnancy had forced his hand. It wouldn't be long now just under 5 or 6 months time there would be a baby to contend with. He needed both his daughters to understand the extremities of the situation. Pia needed all of her family now more than ever. He was determined to have them get on.

Madhoo brushed her husbands hands with hers for moral support-Girls we have a little confession to make. I am hoping U girls are mature enough to handle this like adults.
Panchi sat down in the living room sofa holding Misha's hand-This sounds a little heavy Mom. Is there something wrong? With U or Dad? Did we do something wrong?
Arnab's eyes flitted from Misha to Panchi. He disclosed-I didn't know about this until this past two weeks but the news is confirmed. I have the DNA reports. U girls have another sister.
Misha laughed uncontrollably-Pull the other one Dad. What are U saying?
Arnab's eyes held Misha's-Exactly what U heard. I did something reckless in the past. I am ashamed of my actions and for having put your mother through the ringer but i can't undo the past. I had an affair with Sugandh and have a love child Pia Jaiswal is your half sister. I wanted this news to come from me than a stranger. It took a lot of convincing from my part for Pia to accept me in her life and i guess the baby...
Misha's smile disappeared followed by a set of hurt anguish at the shattered image of the Hero worshipping Misha used to have for her Father. The one man she trusted with all her heart-Pia Jaiswal. U mean Pia Raichand is my half sister. Are U crazy? U have ruined everything. U can't be my father. U are a cheater. A phony. I hate U. I hate U (Runs hitting her fathers chest sobbing uncontrollaby) Pia's what? (Realization hitting Misha) Baby?????
Arnab's voice filled with emotion shakily finished-Its the reason Pia accepted me in her life. She's having a baby with Abhay. I know U girls are hurting. I know its too soon to ask for forgiveness and i know i don't deserve it. All i ask no beg from U girls is not to treat Pia any differently. She has been all alone her whole life. Now she has family. If U can find it in your hearts then please welcome her in. She is family. Pia didn't ask for any of this. If it was up to her all of this would still be a secret. I need U girls to be there for her.
Misha wiped her tears away-U don't ever touch me. U are poison. Oh Pia will get whats coming to her. Pretending to be my friend while she worms her way into this family. I'll never forgive either of U. Never. (Misha storms out of the mansion)
Panchi is dumbfounded-I don't know what to say Dad. I really don't. How could U keep this from us? And U Mom. Both of U have stolen our respect and trust in U. U have shattered it.

Misha runs to the Raichands in search of her so called best friend. Her so called long lost sister. Misha had every right to be p****d off at her sister. The fake had infiltrated their home and expected a free ride into their lives. Never. This baby news had to be a lie. Pia was milking this. Misha was going to give Pia a peace of her mind and show her nobody messes with Misha. Nobody.

Edited by matwamango - 14 years ago