When U Say Nothing At All, MN, Pt 7 Pg27 19Jun

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

part 2 was fab!
k.. so mayu has movd 2 B'lore n nups still in xcel!
both of spoke 4 50 mins on phone...by god... 😲
i'm soo luving dis!!
cant wait 4 d next updates...runs 2 catch dem up..
luv ya di..

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

part 3..
BhesT FHrienDs... MN r still Best frnds even after d play.. dey dint confess still... n r very sure of samrat...so typical MN
just fantastic update di...
luvd it!!

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#163

part 4... just awesum...
now nupur only unknowingly... askd him 2 help... 4 how 2 make sum1 confess...😆
Devdas II😆
gosh .. divya... u r really a gem of a writer!!!
luv ya di🤗

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

gosh... wt ws dat...
MN ... playin along... flirting!!!😲 😆
divya di... wt an fantabulous update..👏👏..i'm sooo luving dis ff!!!😳
😳

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

part 6... freakingly awesum...
mayu's eternal ladai.. of dil n dimaag... 😆
shilpa aunty's tricks.. 2 make him go mumbai!
omg ... now mayu gonna surprise nups...
i just cant wait 4 d next update!
continue soon di...
luv ya n miss ya loads di...🤗

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#166

yaar im in love with this update...thy way u have describe there thoughts is amzing...

if by chance i would have missed it ..tu kiya hota...pm pls ...

whn will ths sadu sharma realize thngs need to b said...atleast once...unsaid love is sacry ...dam scary

n thn SA..i love her ...i just love her

waiting for the surprise...

n im lost in bth of ur song her ab mjhy raat din...there rim jhim giray sawan

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#167

Seriously girl, you nailed Mayank and Nupur's personality. It is wonderful. Especially when you are writing from their point of view. You even got Mayank's mom, Shilpa, correctly described. I throughly enjoyed that aspect of it.

Just a suggestion, I recommend putting quotes around dialogues in order to cause less confusion to the readers. :D

Take care.

-Nikki

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mayur_eternal

@mayur_eternal

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#168

Nice update Divya..😊

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#169

You know what they say about laziness - its not nice! 😆 But since I don't like nice, i don't mind the delay in the PM.😆 Or do i? 😡 Okay, I am not nice, but I do mind the delay. Please get someone to PM for you. 🤣 (No, i am not gonna tell you to give up your laziness, I need company 🤣 )

Man! How could I have not read this earlier? Like seriously? Like even if i had exams and then i was celebrating exam-over-day for three days thereafter? I SHOULD'VE read this you know? 😲

This is just sooo AMAZING!! The whole thing, just wonderful. I love how this flows, like the images it forms in my head, all making it much too easier to imagine. Seriously, this update was a treat to read.

And i was so happy to read Shilpa's point of view. You understand the characters, period. Reading from you makes me so very happy. And reading real MN makes me all dreamy like. And reading Mayank-in-love makes me want to dive in a cheesy sappy sauce and just throw heart shaped balloons in air! (Get the image? Yes? Good. )

L O V E D it! Update soon. And please PM!! I have so many PMs to answer that i don't even check the forum. 😕 And i don't wanna be late. 😃

Love,

You-Know-Who (over rated now? 😆 I still like it!! )

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#170

Awesome update di
Simply rocking
u r superb

u portrayed our magical mayur brilliantly...
loved d whole update
waiting for next part

Note: sorry for short comment ... i m busy with my exam...

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