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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update.
loved it.
aww now after long time geet some time for herself and want to look good.
romance is in air for maaneet.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

hi shruti

i was angry with u for not updating your all old ff's but after reading all the parts today in one go...
i wish u to 😉complete this first ... loved it
starting some of the parts made me 😭 that devil rano😡 she got what she deserve...AIDS DEATH ... GOOD
maan... he suffer a lot but finally his love lady is in his arms👏
anjali and julie the real true friends😊... loved them from the bottom of my heart...
and finally a standing ovation👏 ffor my sweet shruti...
waiting for maaneets movement now...
Edited by maansee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update👏👏... what yar anjali you should have guard the doors of their cabins so that no one else enter the cabins and let them carry on na!!!! 😉😉😃😆 that was sooo romantic ...expecting more romance in upcoming updates😳😳😍
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee

hi shruti

i was angry with u for not updating your all old ff's but after reading all the parts today in one go...
i wish u to 😉complete this first ... loved it
starting some of the parts made me 😭 that devil rano😡 she got what she deserve...AIDS DEATH ... GOOD
maan... he suffer a lot but finally his love lady is in his arms👏
anjali and julie the real true friends😊... loved them from the bottom of my heart...
and finally a standing ovation👏 ffor my sweet shruti...
waiting for maaneets movement now...

thank you Maansee
I was waiting for your comment since long
I hoped you noticed it :)😊
but silly me🤪
have you read Gimmick 😍
hope you liked it also😊
as for BACK 2 US 😊
it will end in 2 days as many parts it takes to complete it😉
will start MOMIAAF and finish it like these two😃
then will go on for WCBTB and then T&L😃
I will complete all these 3 ffs in 3 months staring from 15th june
may be I will pm once😭 in 3-4 parts
will though not end FHIAS and continue at a slower pace with it😳
and once I finish the 3 ffs
I'll start a new one is fast forward style sometime around october😊
this is my agenda
looking forward for your co-operation😍
Shruti
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hahhahaa...poor Maan...sali ruined his moment 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977

thank you Maansee
I was aiting for your comment since long
I hoped you noticed it :)
but silly me
have you read Gimmick
hope you liked it also
as for BACK 2 US
it will end in 2 days as many parts it takes to complete it
will start MOMIAAF and finish it like these two
then will go on for WCBTB and then T&L
I will complete all these 3 ffs in 3 months staring from 15th june
may be I will pm once in 3-4 parts
will though not end FHIAS and continue at a slower pace with it
and once I finish the 3 ffs
I'll start a new one is fast forward style sometime around october
this is my agenda
looking forward for your co-operation
Shruti

YES I ALREADY READ GIMMICK AND LIKE THAT TOO A DIFFERENT STORY OF MAANEET IN THE GLAMOUR WORLD... AS OUR GC AND DD ARE ...
WAITING FOR ALL THE REST FF TO BE UPDATED...
Edited by maansee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

love is in the air...

desires are running uncontrolled,
the long seperation has left them parched,
this proximity is now food for their soul!
joined together as toddlers,
became lovers as they grew up;
people doubt their love even when together,
their love broke all distances' barriers!
The unending wait was painful,
not being close was torture;
now when they are with each other,
they dream of a happy future!
The love is heavenly
it can survive all freny;
so,as the time flows,
The love only grows!!!
Started writing a comment, ended up wrting a poem...this ff/ss has really made me crazy di..
love
Swati
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome jus awesome. I started reading ur story... Totally mad with ur story:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww hot hot upd...
lov it...
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 32

She left in haste… both embarrassed by their uncontrolled desire… Anjali giggled and took the drawing and left before Geet came in, to let her compose herself… both stole glances from the glass barrier between them… Geet amused then gave it a thought that till yesterday the glass was covered with a chart paper on his side… where did that go… the intercom buzzed… she automatically picked it, yes Mr. MSK's secretary here how can I help you?... by looking at me… Maan… yes and about that chart paper I had it off last evening… oh, why? … so as to drink your beauty with my eyes, so as to savor your curves with my … enough Maan, sorry sir, you have a meeting in 30 mins, the details are on your right hand side and … Geet sach kaha hain kisi ne Mehaboob bade Zalim hote hain… Maan, my family is coming in the afternoon today… I know… so I will have to tale a half day off and … and … kal mujhe ladke waale dekhne aa rahe hain… achcha… that's why sir I will have to take a day off… look Ms. Handa you can take a half day tomorrow if you want but no full day leave… sir… no full day… Maan… kyo Khadus boss hoan na main… wo to aap ho… kya… Khadus… wahan aake batou kitna khadus hoan main… waise aap khadus ka matlab jaante hain… tum batao… iska matlab hain… hain… kissable handsome adoring dearest understanding sweetheart… oh so I guess every girl or even man employees who call me Khadus mean this… no (anger on her face)… itni jealous, kahan to tum mujhe Sameera ke saath… that was past and a MU ab agar aapne kisi ki taraf aankh uttha ke bhi dekh a tu use ladki ko to mian kuch nahin kahongi par aapki aankhen likaal ke use de doongi…. Kyaaa?... haan, now go to your meting and she hanged

1:00 pm KC

She left for her house in a autorickshaw… hi Anjali, Geet gone… yes Maan Sir… how, did she take that scooterate… no, she'll first take a bus then metro and finally rickshaw… WHAT??? And he fled asking which bus route she'll go for…. She was standing on the stop looking at her watch now and then, he parked his car nearby and went to the stop … he stopped there and stood watching her… she was panicking… when the bus came the line rushed to it… one by one people stepped in it… she would be the next and as she stepped forward she felt a pull and it was who else but arrogant MSK… she looked at him… Maan meri bus … and the bus went away… she stomped her feet and he jerked her free, she rubbed her arm that he was tightly holding, he looked at her and suddenly leaned down and picked her up … Maan every one is looking let me down… all those years back you always cribbed to come in my arms all the time saying Godhi lelo… Maan we were kids then… and now… we are grown ups… yes grownups…

All the time he paced towards the car , opened the door and made her sit on the passengers seat… she sighed and shrugged… he came in and started the car… Maan lift dena tha to bol dete aise lift kar ke lift dene ki kya zaroorat thi, it was so embarrassing… oh now I am embarrassing you, bolo I insult you… mera matlab wo nahin tha… to tumahara matlab kyat ha… yeh tumhe subha se kya ho gaya hain…. Aur tumhe, kya hua hain, subha se koi mauka nahin choda argue karne ka… (she suddenly turned pale) … Geet kya hua, I am sorry Geet agar maine kuch galat… no, Maan you are not wrong, its me stupid I thought I can argue with you its my right but thank you for showing my position… Geet (she lifted her hand to stop him) I will obey you also as all my life I have been obeying others… Geet I did not mean that… what ever you meant I understood well (she looked out of the window)…

Rest of the drive went in silence… once there she stepped out of the car and thanked him with an air of aloofness, and went to open the lock… he followed her…once inside he bolted the door and hugged her from back…

Geet I am sorry I was just kidding tumhara hi t haq hain mujh par, ek tumhi to ho jo meri ho sirf meri, aur jiska main hoan…. She turned back and hugged him… (Maan tu kyo bhool jata hain she is still confused and insecure man tread the path lightly or you will loose everything)…

Geet … um… ek permission… kya… can I taste you … no(she nodded)… yeh yes hain ya no….she bend her head down… yes hain… she blushed… he lifted her chin and kissed her moist eyes, then traced his lips on her cheek to her chin to her neck to her collar bone to her cleavage, mean while his hands unzipping her kurti … she moaned… he slipped her sleeve and kissed her scar slowly moving to her other shoulder via her back, he traced kisses in the shape of a garland hanging till her waist (imagine girls letz see how far your imagination can go) she had lost it she was no where near control

She opened his buttons and traced a garland similarly on him

He than cupped her face and kissed a bindi on her forehead and then traced kisses on her maang, again going back to her tracinga mangalsutra… she was moaning with desire his eyes were emitting hunger and passion

They broke off on the buzzing of her cell … Geet said he horrified with what they might have done if and hugged her tightly she placed her cheek on his chest and said 21st dec tak wait karma zaroori hain…he laughed and said don't you want to complete your graduation… no… think about it, what will our kids say… what will they say… they will be ashamed to say that their mother is not even a graduate… Maan aap bahut khraab ho… wo to main hoan

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