Sindoor Tere Naam Ka- Ek Pyara Sa Rishta - Page 29

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Thanks everyone. Ok, I had like noo ideas for this part..so i just thought of anything from the top of my head!! hehe, hope the parts not too bring though 😕

Scene 53

Nih shocked to see Suraj

She quickly sits at the table behind them

Rudra does the same

Nih thinking to herself "What Suraj is doing here"

Both Rudra/nih listen in to their conversations

Suraj talks about their other plans failing

At this point nih thinking "what plans"

Rahul (Angrily) ab hum kya karenge?? All our plans have failed halfway!! Ved ka miscarriage tho successful tha lekin yeh Dhruv ko bhi Abhi hi Simla jaana tha!!
He basically explains the entire incident! How stealthily he had to get Ved to drink that juice. How much work he did!!

Suraj (bugged) ab un sab bathon ko choro!! Tumne kitna mehnath (hard work) kiya usse muje koi fark nahi partha!!! (rahul looks a bit shocked) Ved aur Dhruv ko alag karne kehliye mere pas ek aur idea hai!!

Rahul (loud) Suraj ab aur idea se faida kya!!! DhruVed tho abhi yahan hai nahi na??

Suraj (angry) Shut up!! Tum bolte bahut ho aur karte kam!!! Tum muje nahi jaante, jo mein kehta hoon voh kar ke rehtha hoon...aur Ved meri ho kar hi rahegi! Yeh mera vaada hai!! Uske badli chaiye usko vidwa kyon na hona pare!!

Nih shocked!!!!!

Suraj explains to rahul their next plan

Suraj - dekho, maine doctor se bhi is baremein baath kar liya. Jaab dhruved apne so called "honeymoon" se vapas ayenge tho Ved phir se doctor ke pas apna pregnancy report check karvane ayegi na??

Rahul nods

"tho meine doc se ek deal rakha hai, jab Ved apni report pick karne jayengi tho doc ko usse yeh kehna hoga ki voh kabhi ma nahi ban sakthi hai!!! Aur phir aage aage dekhna hota hai kya!!"

Rahul - lekin hum un dono ko itni Jaldi wahan se kaise bulayenge

Suraj (gives an evil smile) uske liye bhi mere pas ek plan hai!!!!!

Nih ticked at this point....Rudras shocked

Nih (thinking to herself) itna sab kuch hogaya aur muje pata bhi nahi chala

Nih angry

She finally slams the menu on the table and stands in front of rahul/Surajs table

Both guys look stunned when they see her..They quickly stand

Nih furious

Rudra looks just as infuriated as he stands next to nih

Everythings quiet for a min but then you hear a loud slap that echoes throughout the caf

Suraj looks shocked!!

Nih (furious) SURAJ tum itne ghir sakthe ho maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha!!! Tum apne aap ko samajthe kya ho?? Aur Tumhe kya lagtha hai, tumne Vedika ke saath jo kuch bhi kiya kya uske baad bhi voh Tumhe maaf kardegi!! (points her finger at him) Arre shukar hai ki uss din Dhruv samay pe akar Ved ko bacha liya varna uski zindagi barbaad hojati!!!!! Tum jaisa gatiya insaan se koi bhi Rishta rakhne se acha hai ki (suraj interrupts)

Suraj (angry) BAS KARO!! Tum hoti kaun ho mujse yeh sab kehne kehliye!!! Aur rahi baath Vedika ki tho bethar yahi hoga ki tum usko uske haal par chor do!! Ved kudh thay kar sakthi hai ki usko kya chaiye!!

Rudra (enraged) SURAJ JUST SHUT UP!! (holds his collars) Agar tumne ek shabd bhi aur kaha na tho mein Tumhe police ke hawale kar doonga!! Tumne tho saare hadhon ko paar kar di. Ab agar tumne kuch bhi aur ki tho mujse bura aur koi nahi hoga!! SAMJE TUM!! (Pushes him as he lets go of his collar)

Nih (points to rahul) Aur mera shaq tum par sahi tha!! Vedika aur Dhruv tum par vishwas kar ke shayed apne zindagi ki sabse badi galathi ki!! Jis thali se kaathe ho ussi thali pe var karte ho tum!! Tum Dono (points to both) Insaan nahi hewaan ho hewaan!!

Rudra/nih leave the caf as suraj and rahul stand there with disgusted looks on their faces. Suraj angrier than he was before!

Back at the Raizada house

Nih and Rudra room. They're sitting on the bed thinking. Both are frustrated.

Nih (quietly) Rudra, do you think humhe DhruVed ko yeh sab bathadena chaiye??

Rudra (looks at nih) nahi, voh dono tho iss mahaul se chutkara paane kehliye shimla gayen aur iss waqt unne yeh sab batha kar humhe unne pareshaan nahi karna chaiye! Ab sirf kuch hi din ki baath hai phir voh vapas Mumbai laut jayenge!

Nih nods

While in shimla. DhruVed are umaware of anything around them and are enjoying their time together. Both are walking around a bazaar. Ved looking at all the cute trinkets while Dhruv goes and looks at the bracelets. He finds a 24 karat gold bracelet with with ruby . He buys it. Then comes back joins Ved. Both walk down the sections of street looking at all the vendors.
Afterwords they drive by the Kali mandir, they decide to pay visit while they're there and walk up. Both fold their hands and pray. After a bit the pandit walks over and gives them the prasad.

Pandit (smiles) tum dono ki jodi bilkul ram-sita ki jodi dikthi hai!!

DhruVed smile

Pandit (looks at a book then looks up at both) tum bahut hi kismat wale ho, ek bahut badi musibath aane se pehle tal gaya!!

DhruVed pay respects to him and leave. Both walk back to their car.

Ved (curious) Dhruv, I wonder voh pandit kaun musibath ki baath kar raha tha!!

Dhruv (smiles) jaan its obvious, voh uss salesman ka musibath ki baath kar raha tha!!

Ved laughs!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks Everyone!! 😛 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part!!!! please continue sooon
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Posted: 19 years ago
awww tht wz amazin...hw cute...i luvd da way u ended it...dhruv's soo cute...plz continue soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks everyone!!! Heres the next part!! hope you like it 😛

Scene 54

The next morning

The Raizadas are eating breakfast. Everyones there but Rahul!

Viren (happily) arre, rahul kahan hai??

Rudra and nih share a look.

Kavita (notices them) tum dono ek dusre ko aise kya dekh rahe ho??? Rahul kahan hai??

Rudra-Nih are silent. Everyone keeps asking.

Rudra-nih finally break the news about rahul and suraj to everyone.

All are surprised!! No one can believe it.

Kavita (loud) yeh tum dono kya keh rahe ho????

Rudra and nih narrate the entire event to the family!!

There all shocked and sad.

Kavita (depressed) rahul tumne aisa kyon kiya?? Maine Tumhe apne bete jaisa mana aur tumne...(Rudra hugs kavita and consoles her)

While back in shimla, Dhruvs in the bathroom and Ved in their room packing all their stuff!! They're leaving tomorrow!

Dhruv comes out and sees Ved packing. He walks up behind her and hugs her!

Dhruv (hugs her tight and he leans and kisses her cheek) Jaan, abhi packing kyon kar rahi ho??

Ved (cont folding clothes) Dhruv, humhe kal Mumbai lautna hai!

Dhruv (turns sulky as he turns Ved around to face him) zaroori hai kal ghar vapas jaana?? Cant we stay a little longer!

Ved (smiles as she puts her arms around his neck) haan!! Agar hum aur din rukhenge tho sab kya sochenge?? Aur waise bhi mujhe sab ki bahut yaad arahi hai (turns sad)

Dhruv (holds her chin as he smiles) tho teekh hai par kyon na hum sab ko ek surprise deh?

Ved (looks at him) surprise?? Kaisa surprise??

Dhruv (places his hands on her shoulder) instead of leaving tomorrow why don't we leave today??

Ved (happy) haan!! that's a great idea!! We've already done all the sightseeing and shopping that we needed to!!(hugs him)

Dhruv smiles as he hugs her back.
Afterwards he gets the phone and makes calls while Ved quickly finishes the packing.

Back in Mumbai.

Nih sitting alone on the livig room. Shes in deep thought. Rudra walks over and sees her. He goes over and sits next to her.

Rudra(softly) nih!

Nih(comes out of her thoughts) huh??

Rudra (places his arms around her shoulders) kya soch rahi ho??

Nih (looks at him) mein DhruVed ke baremein soch rahi hoon. Un dono par kya beethegi jab unhe rahul ka sachayi patha chalega! Ved ne rahul pe kitna vishwas ki.

Rudra (holds nih) nih, Tumhe fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi. DhruVed chote bache tho nahi. Voh halath ka saamna karna jaante hai!! (hugs nih) Don't worry, everything will be fine

Nih hugs Rudra. Both share a cute moment!!

Later on. Everyones in a good mood! They all have had dinner and are realaxin in the living room.

Tara's talking about her chem teacher whose got a lisp. She imitates him making everyone laugh!

Rudra (laughs) tara, tum sab college parne jaate ho ya teachers ka mazak urane!!

tara (laughs) bhaiya, obviously mazak urane jaati hooN!!

nih laughs

all are having fun When suddenly the doorbell rings. Titli mami goes and opens it.

Shes shocked!!!

Its rahul! He walks right into the house.

Everyone sees him and stands up!!

They're all surprised

Nih walks upto him

Nih (angry) tum yahan kya kar rahe ho???

Rahul (looks sad) mein aap sab se maafi mangne aaya hoon!!

Nih (laughs sarcastically) maafi aur Tumhe!!!

Rahul (looks at everyone) haan mein...

Rudra (intervenes) humhe tumhare koi bhi baath nahi sunni! Tumne hamare saath jo kuch bhi kiya uske bawajooth hum Tumhe dekhna thak nahi chathe!!

Rahul (breaks down)mein samaj saktha hoon aur haan yeh sach hai ki maine suraj ka saath diya!! Maine hi Ved aur Dhruv ko alag karne keliye na jaane kya kuch nahi kiya lekin mera yakeen mano, maine yeh sab suraj ke baathon mein aa kar ki!!

Kavita (angry) bas!!! Shayed DhruVed tumhare bathon pe vishwas kar le lekin tum humse yeh umeedh mat karna!!!

Rudra (walks up to him) maine tumse kaha tha na ki agar tum iss ghar ke taraf moor kar dehke bhi tho mein Tumhe police ke hawale kar doonga aur(looks up towards the door shocked)

Everyone looks at Rudra who suddenly turned silent and is looking towards the door

Everyone turns to face the entrance

All are shocked

Dhruv and Ved are standing at the door with their bags!

DhruVed look at everyone

They all look shocked!

Scene ends on everyones shocked faces



Edited by moderngirl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part!plz continue soon 😛 👏 👏
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great job...continue soon!!! cant wait to read what will happen next
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Posted: 19 years ago
WICKED UPDATE KRITIKA....IT WZ AWESOME... I'll laugh if u make it out that both dhruvedika neva herd nefin...lyk dey do in da actual dramas...lol...wiked update plz continue soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

WICKED UPDATE KRITIKA....IT WZ AWESOME... I'll laugh if u make it out that both dhruvedika neva herd nefin...lyk dey do in da actual dramas...lol...wiked update plz continue soon 😃

Thanks yuvi!!

Well you know me..a complete wanna be of "thick headed producers"😆😆😆

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