MG SS- A Bond Beyond Words-Note:Page 91 - Page 51

Created

Last reply

Replies

602

Views

85.3k

Users

77

Likes

1.5k

Frequent Posters

---nishu--- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
nice
but inshort short se kaam nahi chalege
we want long
lalitha.. thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
both updates r awesome
cont soon
thanks 4 pm
maankigeet4ever thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
mweee...

so i am finally here...see...i was hoping to see a poem since the 'no poem ban' was lifted after i made that promise...but no worries...maybe Maan will write a beautiful poem for geet to confess his feelings 😳..gud idea ?😉...that's the next step since the munda knows that he loves geet...like yayyy...
i wonder how geet will react to the distance...hopefully she realizes that she loves him too...would that be awesome ? 😉😃..okay..i am giving too many suggestions today 😆...
loved this update...it was major for their estory to cont...
con't wait for the next one 😃
Edited by maankigeet4ever - 13 years ago
mitzi11 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago


preethia thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
wow...
happy finally maan realized his feelings for her...
waiting for geet to realize it soon...
pl cont soon
sweet scorpio thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
superb!
glad to see that maan realized his love for geet!
continue soon!
zaara2212 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Swati sorry for the late response...

loved both the updates...😊

wow Maan babu in love 😳
princess163 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
Hello peeps!
I am back much earlier than usual😛
Here is part 15, but i am not at all happy with the number of comments and likes😭
please leave me your feedback, or I won't feel like updating!
I have a test this saturday, and another on the 28th
so, I don't think there will be any updates before that, but your comments might just make me squeeze time out for this, so, choose the date😉
Unedited, not formatted!
Part 15

The next morning brought with it a new day and Maan woke up with a smile on his face and a name on his lips. "Geet!"

"I need to see you today, feel you around me, look into your eyes, try to read them'.", he said to himself as he threw off the covers and made his way to the washroom to get ready.

Geet was waiting anxiously in the fire exit of the hospital. It had become her and Maan's secret place ever since the day they had shared those unspoken words here that day when she needed someone by her side, and he had been there, in the true sense. They would either meet here, or at the place they first got to know each other (the college terrace), when they were not with the gang, when they just wanted to be with each other.

They would sit together, more often than not, in silence, just being there. Words were never needed between them. Today, as she had called to enquire about his plans since they hadn't met yesterday, he had said he wanted to meet her. He said he wanted to tell her something and there was something in his voice that she couldn't identify with.

As she was lost in her thoughts contemplating what it was, she didn't realize that he had joined her and was now sitting by her side. He looked at her, lost in her thoughts and didn't want to disturb her. For a few moments, he was just gazing at her, drinking in her sight, memorizing her face, as if it wasn't engraved in his mind forever. When he realized that she was nowhere close to noticing his presence, he tapped her shoulder lightly, causing her to let out a slight shriek, which subsided as she saw him there.

As she looked at him, he was lost again in her eyes, and hence decided to come to the point straight away to keep his attention on what he had to say.

Maan, "Geet! Where are you lost? I have been sitting by your side since the past 5 minutes, but you don't even seem to take notice", he said faking mock hurt, earning a slight chuckle from her.

Geet, "Shut up Maan! Tell me, what was it that you wanted to tell me!", she asked impatiently.

Maan, "My boss was really happy with my work at the Kapoor's. He is willing to give me more important responsibilities now!" he said.

Geet's eyes lit up, as she said happily, "Congratulations! I knew you will do it. You deserve it and much more", she said holding his hand.

Maan, "he has given me a new project!" he added.

"Really? That's brilliant! This one must be more important right?" she asked excitedly.

"Yes! Its one of the most prestigious 5-star hotels'.in Chail", he added the last bit slowly, looking for her reaction.

She had been happy, but with the last bit of news, her smile faltered a bit, but not wanting to show it, she quickly put it back, thinking that he wouldn't notice and said, "that's'.thats great! So, when are you supposed to go? And, '.how'how long is the project going to be?" she asked trying to keep the anxiousness out of her voice.

But, however hard she might try, how could Maan fail to notice his Mishti's subtle emotions, the sadness in her eyes, the little mist that she was trying hard to hide, the edge in her voice that she masked as enthusiasm. He saw it all, and his belief was strengthened. Maybe this separation was a blessing in disguise. Maybe this is what was needed, he thought to himself.

"Yes, I have to leave in 10 days, for maybe a week or a bit more." he replied.

Her face fell. ONE WEEK? How was she supposed to stay without him for a week?

Wait!

What did she just think? How could she stay without him? Has she gone crazy. Ofcourse she can very well stay without him. Its not as if she has been living with him all through her life. It was just a matter of 7 days, and then it was a big project. She should be happy for him'.he is her'.friend!

Friend?

Yes, just FRIEND!

She quickly congratulated him, wished him all the luck, chatted for a while, and left.

He understood what turmoil would be going on within her. He knew she needed time'time to think through it all. He would gladly wait.

Meanwhile, Geet reached home, all confused, but once again was successful in suppressing the annoying voice in her head and convinced herself that she was happy for him.

Maan informed the others in the group too, and all of them were very happy with his success and congratulated him for it. Next day, they were discussing him in college and all of them were praising him. Though Geet tried hard, she was not happy. Ofcourse she was happy for him, but something was buging her.

Maan became busy finishing off his other pending work here and hence couldn't meet her that often. Geet was lost and she didn't know why. There annual departmental trip was going around the same days and all of her friends were going obviously. She had no interest in whatsoever was being planned and had no intention of going either.

But, Pari, mayank, and Nupur weren't going to leave her easily. They threatened, begged, pleaded with her. They even asked her father and Brij Veerji, thereby closing all ways of her refusing to come. In end, she had to give in'..though she didn't want to. It didn't make a difference to her where she stayed. They were going in 12 days and Maan wouldn't be there anyways. Yes, she was missing him badly and she had accepted this. She might as well go out of Delhi if that made her friends happy. She absent-mindedly sat through, as her friends did all the planning and looking at her disinterested state, they even packed her bags for her.

It was the 10th day, and Maan was leaving the next day. Geet was restless. He came to meet her, but the gagd was there, so she could hardly speak to him. All of them gave him their best wishes and bade him good bye. Geet did the same half-heartedly.

That night she couldn't sleep. She kept questioning herself the reason for her restlessness, but refused to believe the answer that she got.

Next day, early morning Maan left. He called her when he reached there to inform her of his safe arrival, but couldn't really talk much because the initial two days were the most important. He was supposed to get everything working, and set on a good pace so that they could finish their work in time.(taki who wapas bhaag sake!😛😆😉)

Geet was sad. He was busy, she knew, but still, couldn't he make time to call her a couple of times a day? Okay, maybe that was asking for too much, but come-on! A half-an-hour long call toh was deserved na,she cribbed to her Babaji!

Itna kaam kar rahe hain to kha kahan rahe honge! Haye babaji, patani apna khayal bhi rakha hoga ki nahin, she blabbered to herself, not realizing when hoga had become honge! 😳

Two days had passed and he hadn't called. He would just text her in the morning wishing her good morning and say that he was busy. That's not fair, she thought to herself.

It was time for her to leave for her own college trip with her friends, and she was being dragged to college by pari and Nupur. Their's was a four-days, three nights trip and by the time she would come back, it would be time for Maan to be back as well!

She finally gave in to her friends demands thinking that atleast she will be able to distract her mind from his thoughts! (oh really?😆😉)

They settled on their seats in the bus ready for a long journey. They had to travel all night and reach Shimla next day around 9am.She was looking forward to passing those 4 days somehow and meeting him as soon as possible.

Precap: landslide in Chail!😲

Do HIT THE LIKE TAB and COMMENT!

Love

Swati

Edited by princess163 - 13 years ago
muskanp thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 13 years ago

can u believe i am first ...

yeppyy..
love;y part .. i loved the way maan read her silent pain.. that was put beautifully
hain.. 4 days.. i don't know how long for us😭😭😭😭
may be he will join them😉
forgot to mention..loved their secret hid out😆😆😆
very cutely romantic
😲😲😲😲😲
yeh kya precap tha
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
mishtikhurana thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
NICE UPDATE...GOOD 32 KNOW THAT BOTH REALIZE THEY R IN LOVE...DONO TARAF AAG BARABER HAI ... SEPARATION IS DIFFICULT, KILLING & PAINFUL BUT IT STRENGTHEN THE LOVE ALSO...BUT AFTER READING PRECAP LOOKS LIKE SEPARATION IS LONG ALSO...WHEN WHOLE GANG WILL HEARD THE NEWS WHOLE GAND WILL GOTO CHAIL 2 FIND OUR HERO...STILL CHAIL NOT 2 FAR FROM SHIMLA

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: MidnightLibrary

9 months ago

Rishtey the Bond of marriage (new chapter) Rishtey the Bond of marriage (new chapter)

Chapter : Melodious Encounter https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/52348

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz

7 months ago

In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2) In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2)

Siggi by Sandhya (@sevenstreaks) (P.S this was my pitching picture to the production houses - which Sandy had done for me a couple of years...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

9 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1007 page no 21 Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1007 page no 21

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

3 years ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #13 updated episode 971 page 155

Welcome you all to the new thread of RANVEER'S UNSAID FEELINGS #13 Keep Travelling in the world of ISHVEER LOVE Warm Regards sakshi ❤️ Index...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

8 months ago

PreRish FF ~ Purity Of Souls (ch 6 - page 5)

[NOCOPY] P U R I T Y O F S O U L S T E A S E R "bungle ke piche teri beri ke niche aha re aha....kanta laga!!!" The song was too loud in the...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".