OK , this comment's pretty late and you already know what I think of the update 😊.
I loved it for all its simplicity and simutaneous complexity . I think its always fun to see or read about A and N falling for each other . That gradual attraction that they feel and yet don't accept and if one does end up accepting it in a roundabout way (in this case it is N) , it never really goes anywhere and yet puts them on the right road .
And what's refreshing about this take is that its N who is realizing the attraction first . I think that makes it a lot more fun and romantic (though not in the usual sense of the word ) , because she is the softer one , the more innocent one
So , now we are at a crucial juncture and Mitzi put your idea hat on and come up with more parts . All it can get on from now is "better"
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