FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 - Page 25

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Posted: 14 years ago
Interesting . I dint know what four states of love meant to be honest.
One full update without a single dialouge wow only u can do it.
Please tell me more about naini and abhi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey I love the way you portray all the characters! I feel sorry for Naina and Rishab but they need to forgive and forget I know easily said then done! As for Maan and Geet WOW I love the way they are so confident with each other and with their love they know how the other is feeling even without words that's what u call love! SO sorry for such a long comment! But I loved the update it was FAB
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Posted: 14 years ago
Four states of being in Love ...Simply amazing!!!

loved it ...Beautifully narrated!!!

wonderful!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
My MCATs are over!!!!! YAY!!!!! Time for the catch up game!!! I hope I can finish by today...I can't wait to see what's in store for me!!!!

Thanks for the PM and YAY 3 more parts...go H!!!! And good luck with everything!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 72: Catch and release: I wonder who's catching who!? LOL!!!

Dadima seems to be playing cupid I see, but poor Geet and all the not so needed drama!

Even miffed was a small word and perhaps there was no word that could deliver the strength of the wrath that now brewed inside her, she thought to herself. –Loved this….captures geet's state of mind perfectly! OMG! I haven't typed in over 2 weeks and now it feels kind of weird…I'm super slow!!! POOR ME! BOO!

HA! Rabid wife….lovely job!

the tugs by the wrist and firm holds by her waist, all signs of textbook sexual harassment outside the home was too much to resist when it translated into unruly foreplay with her- Such a cute line…and the contrast of his words…so romantic in a weird way!

Maan is such a devil and so naughty…he wants her in his lap…hahahahaha! Perfection!!! And stubborn Geet is so funny to read this…I can just picture this now!

Awesome…romance on hi godh…..so chweet!!!! So he manages to break the stubborn Geet…how awesome that this silence game doesn't last that long between them..of course you control it, but I'm glad you finished it up in no time…It's depressing to see a distant Maneet!

Such a playfully chapter….loved it! And Maan thought he was gonna get some…he's up against another force altogether!!!!

Her catch and release trick had delivered a perfect punch to an unyielding Maan. Ouch!-Stunner!!! I guess geet does get the final say! So the game is tied now…let's see what happens next!!!

Fantastic update…so glad I can finally read it all!!! Truly…exactly what I needed!!! Thanks babe!

Edited by sweet coco - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Four states was really an beautiful update without dialogues. Everyone are connected in this.
Glad to know Rishabh is planning to bring Naina back to his life. He need to do his best to show get her back. Am sure she aint going to give a easy game.
Feeling sorry for Niana. She must have been deeply broken and hurt from her past.Its easy forgive then forget.
Geet manage to convey her real intention to Maan. She is always longing for his attention without barries.
Glad that Maan is willing to be more open towards his love. He is willing to chance himself just for Geet. It would be really good to see him so. They are more understandin for each other's need...



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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome part...
their silent conversation and understanding of each others insecurities was incredible...
some maneet romance was refreshing...
really loved the part and also the way geet made him realise that sometimes words could do some good...

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...
loved rishabh's realization...
naini's plight...
geets insecurity
and maan's reterospect...
all the four different forms of love beautifully portrayed...
really looking for a rishabh naini convo...
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 73: Lions and lambs: Wheneve I see the word LAMB….I think Silence of the lambs and Hello Clarice…don't ask why! ;)

So glad naini adores Maneet…liking her character!!! So drama queen…thank GOD! Never really liked Annie…so this character is way better!

Dadima for the save…stuff she has to deal with….Maneet can be so childish at times!!!

this was Maan and that was his job; to ogle her to his heart's content every time she made an appearance-awww….this made my heart go hmmm! So lovingly written!!!!!!!!

Awww!!! Such cute moments….hot chocolate is back!

only they knew they still did things to make the other into a ticking time bomb-Couldn't have summed up better even if I tried!

"Geet main tumse bahuth pyar karta hoon...sorry...Aaj se main tumse kuch chupavoonga nahin...abhi mujhe ek kiss de do aur...Arhm!" – I wanna gush…so chweet! This is why I just love Maan…kitna sona munda hai!!! Poor dadima…reading her puttar's love notes….yikes!!!! (giggle giggle)!

Okay so at least the war is calming down…finally finding some solace….hot cocoa solves everything!!! HA!!!!

And so she raised her head and held on to both his cheeks to awaken him. Lowering her lips into his, she breathed her dream into form.- The perfect ending….it ends with such a cute and happy ending!!!! Loved it!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 74: Word power: YAY!! The power of words…let's see what it brings!!

No man wanted to fall short of their wife's expectations and particularly when it was Geet's husband, the adamant, imaginative, demanding and yet every bit vulnerable inside, Maan. – I love how he described…so true and so nicely done!!!

How naughty…he's checkinh her out while she's dressing…so cute!!! And quite sexy Mr MSK!!! I'm so excited about his little surprise...wonder where he's gonna take her…hopefully somewhere epic!

The romance is so wonderful to read…I love the teasing and the masti!!!

shower him with any physical mercy-your way with words are just so magical….hell I've give to him if she doesn't….(winky face)!

FINALLY! He opens up on his and Naini's past and relastionship….love his cape story…so cute!!!

WHOA!!! Stop the brakes….what a past….this chick is pretty dark and twisty herself….she eloped at 18….that's way too much rebelling!

The way you described Maan's pain was fantastic….seriosuly amazingly written! It was so hard to read…so amazing job.

His word power had conjured up the image of his past for her; clear and vivid the picture was but the moral was yet to be read.

As the silence stretched on... their journey continued.- I'll tell you why I love this so much b/c the man of few words spoke his heart out…the biggest burden on his sould lifted…the power of words!!! I love how you always find the most perfect titles!!!

Well done love…truly a magnus opus!

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