FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 - Page 15

haha i love geet!!!! Can't wait to see what happens next xxx

Hey People...
I just want to call out to the way Maan and Geet came together. They never dated period. There was no time spent together to even compare and contrast on the changes that marriage has brought about in Maan.
Maan and Geet met at a time, when she was separating from a life that was soon to become her past. And then another instance of personal trauma (in form of assault) in her life brought them more closer.
Of course, she ran away from him at his first proposal, thinking getting together would be a rebound. Ultimately she had to give in with the wise words of Daadi and from the scheming of Daadi and Meera.

They get married soon after that without a period of getting to know each other. And after that is when their true time together as a couple has started. Even with that they had so many testing times ranging from Geet's ear ailment to the divorce filing date to Naini coming back home.

So there is no baseline to be compared for either Maan or Geet. Neither knows the other. All of it is to show up now.
Hope this helps to treat this married couple different from others you have seen and let me know your thoughts as well.

People, I have a few fillers and would like to know if you have a few scenes you want me to write for NY times. Do let me know and its going to be first come first serve basis. Please PM me the scene instead of posting here.

Cheers
Hasini

Originally posted by: Ramhari

My bad Haasini
I misinterpreted
need to rush now
will come back and edit my comments.

No please dont. I love it when I get to hear your thoughts. Another reader pointed out that even though Maan has been a man of few words, everyone got to read him through the monologues. But then off late there has been less and less updates from his POV. I agree to it and I will try and put up some updates from his perspective. Hope that will help to get into his head. Really, don't change your comments.

Hasini

R! In hope to get some response to my post, since you are in mood to respond!😉

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I agree with Ramhari... where there is a difference between Maan before and after marriage! We have got to know Maan and Geet only through their monologues and not through their conversations! In the past Maan's monologue gave us look into his mind and heart, for which is currently missing! Oh! How I wish you would write more on Maan's monologue! :)

<part 85> At the beginning of the update, I felt sorry for Geet, but as I progressed towards the end ... Oh! I felt so so so sorry for Maan! poor guy, does he even know what his wife is capable off. <lol> If anyone should give Maan a lesson on seduction, it should only be Geet <high & dry!>. I feel as though Geet is about to tell a <secret!> to Maan cause to me secrets seduces everyone!

<filler> I would like to see Maan and Geet visit a winery... and have them jump into a grape barrel.. wet, wild and sexy! 😳 will PM you the glory details.:)

Originally posted by: night13

R! In hope to get some response to my post, since you are in mood to respond!😉

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I agree with Ramhari... where there is a difference between Maan before and after marriage! We have got to know Maan and Geet only through their monologues and not through their conversations! In the past Maan's monologue gave us look into his mind and heart, for which is currently missing! Oh! How I wish you would write more on Maan's monologue! :)

<part 85> At the beginning of the update, I felt sorry for Geet, but as I progressed towards the end ... Oh! I felt so so so sorry for Maan! poor guy, does he even know what his wife is capable off. <lol> If anyone should give Maan a lesson on seduction, it should only be Geet <high & dry!>. I feel as though Geet is about to tell a <secret!> to Maan cause to me secrets seduces everyone!

<filler> I would like to see Maan and Geet visit a winery... and have them jump into a grape barrel.. wet, wild and sexy! 😳 will PM you the glory details.:)

I'm sorry really that I'm unable to respond to all posts night. But I hope to get more regular at it.

As I mentioned I'm going to try and be conscious while writing to get more of Maan's perspective in. I do believe you know how it is, when you are in a flow and writing the update. The thoughts meander and settles where it feels connected. I agree I have been out of touch with Maan. Hopefully, he talks to me more today...LOL

Thanks for your comment and the scene selection. I will wait for the PM until then.
Its strange, but there is so much similarity in the next update's opening lines and your comment. Indeed there is a lesson to be learnt by Maan, but not sure if we are thinking along the same lines here. Let's just wait and watch.

Hasini

uff..finally i finished reading NY times at one go...i just loved it...loved ur writing...touching each nd every emotions...tooo gud...plzzz add me to ur pm list...