Love story with a strange twist:Maaneet FF Climax - Page 55

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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG dev is such a sweet heart...i return all my blame n curse on him...
he is really a nice person n save maaneet life...
fabulous dear...i loved it...looking fwd...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the update!!
Muskaan was sooo selfish!!
Hate her!!..
continue soon...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update!
love it...
I just hope Geet accepts Maan and is able to overcome this...
they suffered all 4 the selfishness of muskaan...
poor dev...
so, dev killed muskaan,rahul n shakti...
update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice...

my doubt was correct...it was dev...but he wanted to get rid of that scheming girl...who for her own selfish motive...used every1...

continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh gosh Dev, poor guy...
Muskaan is so evil 😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi...read parts 16 to 18 now. Dev killed Muskaan...what a twist. Lovely updates n tahnks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Friends..tho i've written the end down its not the end actually.Next time onwards i will b posting another version of this ff.It'll not have any murder mystery...I'll b continuing this story from part 13 in a different way ie from the previous day of Geet's wedding...What if Muskaan had'nt tried 2 kill Geet?

Love story with a strange twist Part 19

According to the court,Dev should be imprisoned for 12 years.His family is shattered.
After some months...

Maan is really lonely.He looks at the glass window which is full of water vapour.He feels that there is Geet on the other side.She is looking at him.

He can't believe his eyes.
She is not seen clearly because of the water vapour.
M:Geet!
He wipes the water vapour.
Geet wipes the water vapour from the other side.

His face blossoms.She smiles.

M:Geet!Come back..i miss you.
G:I will come back soon.Maan?you miss Dev.Right?

Maan nods his head.
G:Don't be upset.After some years he will be back.Right?You visit him.It will give you some peace of mind.He will also be relieved.
M:Yes?
Suddenly Geet disappears.He realizes that it was only his imagination.
Maan's mom Karthi comes.
K:Maan!There is a happy news.Geet is out of coma.
Maan is surprised:Really mom?
K:Yes,the doctor says it's a miracle.
Maan is really happy.
He rushes to the hospital.
He goes near Geet.Geet's eyes are wet.
G:Maan!
Maan sits near her and caresses her arms.
M:You know Geet..today morning i dreamt of you.You had promised me that you will come back to me.You kept your promise.You have returned to me.I'm so happy.
G:Maan..i heard certain things...is it true?
Maan keeps silent as he does'nt have the courage to tell the truth.
Geet cries:That means what i heard is true.
Maan is upset.
M:Dev killed them as they don't deserve to live in this world.
G:But Muskaan...
M:She tried to destroy you Geet..she wanted to finish us.Won't you forgive Dev?
Geet cries.
M:Dev is innocent.The circumstance forced him to do so.To save us only he did that.
Anand:Yes Geet..though Muskaan is my daughter i support Dev.If he had'nt done that you both would not have united.You both would have been killed by her.
M:Do you hate Dev?
G:No..how can i hate him?He is our saviour.
Maan is relieved.
G:But i'm just sad about Muskaan.
A:It will take some time for her to digest it.
Geet does'nt say anything.

After some days...
Maan and Geet visit Dev.Dev can't believe his eyes.He is really excited.
D:Geet!Maan..i told you..Geet will recover and you both will unite.
Maan smiles.
Dev notices sadness in Geet's face.
D:Geet...you may be angry with me.Because even though Muskaan tried to kill you you can never hate her.You are that good.You can only hate me..her killer.But i can only request you to give me pardon.
Maan becomes upset.
Geet becomes emotional.
G:No need of requesting me.I have forgiven you..
Dev is relieved.Maan is happy.
D:Don't delay..you both should get married soon.
Maan smiles.
G:You are Maan's elder brother.So we have come here to take your blessings to start our married life.
Dev is really happy.
D:I'm so happy..i'm lucky to bless you both.What more is needed?I bless you both.Wish you a happy married life.God bless you.
They smile.

Wedding...
Geet looks gorgeous as a bride.She sits near Maan and looks at him emotionally.

She thinks:God twisted our love story only to unite us.God knows who is made for whom.Everything happens for good.
Maan ties mangalsuthra around Geet's neck and fills her forehead with vermillion.

The end {I'll b writing another version of luv story with a strange twist.i'll post it day after 2morrow}
Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful end!!!

loved it ...awesome!!!

Hope U ll come up soon with an another one.
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG
IT ENDED?!?!?!?!

WHEN!!!!
WILLL EDIT LATER:

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