'and then she said it'~2 |AR| *Chapters: 8-12*

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

Totally unexpected...I can't believe I have missed so much...

Just the fact that Ridhima is married has created a lot of questions in my mind...Though m confused by her behavior in the end, I loved it...Hope u reveal her past soon...

This fic is getting highly addictive...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

Dammit! How do you ALWAYS manage to write AWESOME!? No seriously, tell me... how do you do it? Aapka raaz kya hai? 😃

Somehow, the airport scene quiet passionate. The intimate hug startled me too.. I din't see that coming. All I could conclude from that hug was that Riddhima does need Armaan at the moment. Why? I have no idea! Armaan's reaction is quiet natural.. You don't expect a guy to smile and pull you into a hug instantly, right? He takes time to process it all.. then to think about it all.. and when he gets over it, Armaan can finally begin to listen and understand Riddhima. But I'm sure the distance between them will do its magic!!..

The mental turmoil is very well portrayed. He tries to stay away from her, but can't. He's hurt, but can't hurt her! Its beautiful how he tries to make sure she's fine inspite of being miserable himself. I can just imagine the two of them it creates a hell lot of chemistry b/w the two. Its so deep and intense... all with just few words and a hug! Man, you're an awesome writer!

I loved the whole RM thing too... Rahul's reaction was sweet!!.. <3 Also, I love the Armaan-Rahul friendship you have portrayed her. Both understand each other so well, its simply beautiful... great job. 👏

Can't wait for the next update. I wonder if you are going to fast forward the whole thing till Armaan comes back again or will you show the whole thing... will it be Armaan's realization of LOVE?

Also if Riddhima is married, where is her husband? I want to know the whole story... its intriguing...

Great update! Update the next part soon...

Take care!

-Deby

PS: "I'm used to being rejected" That kinda broke my heart. Felt really really bad for Riddhima :( But I'm sure Armaan won't reject her the second time, since he always does that :D... This is going to make a great... great love story! :)

Edited by jeflkjfkljfkj - 14 years ago

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jasmine ansari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

nice and sad ending.
Hope both realize their love very soon.
T.c.
Thanx 4 d pm.

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ritu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Sush this is first time i wanna bang my head. God every one insisting him to talk to her atleast once nd he is not listening any one . I know how helpless he might be at that time but this won't let him live in peace . His mind 'd keep drifting back ,unless he will find answers of his unsaid question .
This hug was something broke inside me . I really wanna her to feel peace nd warmth which only he can provide to her . plz Sush draw me out from this wizard . please update soon.😕

thanks for pm.
love
ritu

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Priyanka

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Posted: 14 years ago

#135

Hey Sushmita!

🥳Congrats On your second thread🥳

Hope to see many more threads from you girly!

You Have NO idea how much I love your writing, literally every words hits a string in my heart. Its definately the simplicty of your words and the way you mirror their thoughts and eject their emotions that leaves me in absoulate awe every single time. Sometimes I feel like I am reading a novel actually not sometimes, i feel like that everytime I read your work! Its absoulately mindblowing.

Coming to the part, it was soo realistic and everything was just perfect. Armaan's emotion were depicted beautifully and his actions were totally understandable and justified. Feeling sort of heartbroken knowing he rejected her - well he didnt but you know what I mean. heeh I know he will come around and re-evaluate his feelings and answer before or if he says the worrds No. I love how He cant stopping thinking about her! and she actually came to the airport, her words and action suprised me, its got me thinking maybe she does feel and possibly loves Armaan?- hope so!

Can I just say I love Rahul! he is sooo very cute and adorable and love the way he acts around muskaan, he reminds of a very shy lolve struck Romeo type and I love that! hehe RM's lovestory is also cute love their reactions when Armaan was teasing them! hehe and Rahul's reaction when Padma farewelled him! hehe

Love your work! Please keep updating fast (Like these past few days hehe I was literally shocked by the past few updates- i was like she updated- again? hehe) Update sooon!