A Mistake Of Our Life - Mayur SS.. updt pg36 - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part i think mayank dad will stop them
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part.
after the long time.
if possible count soon...

who is in coma ???

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey i read all part of ur ff and theu all r amazing so plzz next time whenever u update pm me plzzz

plzzz mujhe pm jarur karna and send me frnd req so that i can add u in my buddy list
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i thing u r not interested too count this ff...
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Hey its nt lyk dat m nt interestd bt
Me khud onlyn aane k liye taras rahi hu,
I hv mre 7 ffs. N m damn busy in ma stdy n finals r on ma head.
M also a reader so i knw kaisa feel hota hai jab writer updt nai deta. I wl updt as soon as ma final get over. Sry.
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice FF
loved it a lot
plz do cont. it and add me to ur pm list

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part 10

"mom ye sab mere wajase ho raha haii papa ko
hurt bhi meine hu kiya haii par ab nahi karunga
aur Nupur aur apne baby ko mein sambhal
lunga..." he said with broken voice...
Shilpa ran to her room...n Ravi saw her in tears
he stood up frm sofa...

"Mayank ghar chhod kar jaa raha haii plzz usse
rok lo..." She pleaded... n both came out of room
n saw Mayank was helding Nupur's hand in one
hand on other he carried bag...


"Mayank... kaha jaa rahe ho tum???" Mayank's dad asked

angrily to him.. hearing this Mayank stopped...

"bass jaa raha hu papa ... sirf itna kehna chahta hu ki

aaj ke baad aap kabhi meri wajase hurt nahi honge... na

hi kisi ko muje apna beta ya laadla kehne me sharam

aayegii..." Mayank replied with broken voice... seeing

this his everyone felt so bad...


"ye sab karne se pehle ek baar bhi socha hai iska

anjaam kya hoga...??? Mayank tum bachpan se galti pe

galti kiye jaa rahe ho na kabhi meine tumhe daanta haii

na kabhi kuch kaha haiii...har baar meine socha ki aaj

nahi to kall tum samjo ge par nahi mein galat tha...

tumne galti ki aur iski wajase aaj hum sab is mod par

haii... aur ab ek aur galti... ek aur galti ghar chhod

kar jaane ki... jaao chale jaao... par ek baar bhi

socha haii ki tum jaao ge kaha???? tumhaara chhodo

tumhe apni biwi ka bhi khayal nahi haii ki uski is

haalat mein kaise rakhoge...meine hamesha socha ki

tum apni galti ko samjo ge aur usse sudhar ne ki

koshish karoge... kya kaha tha tumne ki ye shaadi karke

tum apni galti sudhar raheho... aur ab ghar chhod kar

jaa rahe ho aise sudharoge apni galti...ek aur galti...

agar apne baareme nahi socha na sahi apni biwi ke

bareme na socha na sahi par apne is bacche ke baareme

to soch lete jo abhi tak is duniya mein aaya bhi nahi

haiii...kabhi socha hai agar usse kuch ho gaya to..."
he waas about to continue his lecture but suddenly

realised that he lost his track... he came here to

shout on his idiot son.. bt nw he was talking about his

child n wife...

"kya papa bolo na chup kyu ho gaye,... agar is bacche

ko kuch ho jaata to kya hota..??aapko kya fark padta

haii...bolo agar ye baccha marr gaya to..." before

Mayank could complite his sentense... his dad

shouted...


"Mayankkk"
his dad shouted n his mom scared n socked... as she had

never seen his father this much angry...Nupur too

scared seeing this sight...


"aap plzzz shant ho jaaiye..." Mayank's mom shilpa nw

couldnt remain silent...

"chup ho jaau..?? haa?? chup ho jaau??? ye sun kar bhi

ki mera beta kya bol raha haiii?? ek baap ho kar muje

pata haii ki beta kya hota haiii aur isne kitni aasani

se bol diya...muje kya fark padta haii haa... kya fark

padta haiii... agar muje fark nahi padega to kisse fark

padega Mayank???"

"papa agar itna hi fark padta haii to aap apne is bete

ki is galti ko maaf kyu nahi kar dete????" as soon as

Mayank said this his dad reallised dat he poured out

his all emotions...he should be angry with him... bt

nt in dat case in which he had to lost his son...


"tum.. Mayank tum ye ghar chhod kar nahi jaaoge.. samje

tum..." he ordered to Mayank n turned towards Nupur

n pointed fingure At her...

"aur tum dhyan se sunno... Mayank ki biwi ho naa... aur

uske bacche ki maa... to iske bacche ko agar kuch bhi

hua to mein tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karunga samji tum...

meri khandan ka pehla baccha haii ye agar iss bacche ko

jara si bhi aanch aayi to mujse bura koi nahi hoga

samji tummm" he barked n left from there...


"mom ye dad..." Mayank left the sentense n his mother

understood ...


"tum jante ho Mayank ki tumhaare dad tumse bahut pyaar

karte haiii... aur iss bacche ko bhi... meine unki

aakho mein dekha hai mehsoos kiya haii... ki wo bhi

tumhaare bacche ke aane ka intazar kar rahe haii.. uske

sath khelne ka intazar kar rahe haii... par wo usse

bhi nahi bhul paa rahe haiii jo tumne kiya haii...

sayad unhe thoda time lagega tumhe maaf karne mein...

itna pyaar karte haii to thoda waqt lagta haii

Mayank... aur aaj jo tum galti karne wale the uske liye

mein tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karti,..."

"m sry mom bt i really felt hurt when dad said ..."


"to iska ye matlab nahi ki tum ghar chhod kar chale

jaao... atleast Nupur ke baareme to sochte.. aur dekh

kitni pareshan haii wo..."shilpa said Mayank n both

looked at Nupur who was standing silently having tears

in her eyes...

"Nupur..." he went near her... n became worried...

"room mein jaao tum dono..." shilpa said n left frm

there...


"Mayank and Nupur went to their room n Mayank placed

bags near bed.. n made Nupur sit on bed...


"ye sab sayad meri wajase hua haii sayad agar uss din

mein bhi tumhaare sath sharab nahi peeti to na mein

hosh khoti aur na hi mein wo karti jo uss raat hua

tha... aur iss galti ki wajase aaj tumhaare dad..."
she sobbed...

"Nupur plzzz rona bandh karo plzz... jo bhi hua tha

wo humne jaanke to nahi kiya tha,,,sayad wo humari

kismat mein likha tha... kyunki agar hume pata hota ki

aisa kuch hone wala haii to hum thodi na sharab pee kar

nasha karte... par jo hua wo humari kismat mein likha

haii... aur usse ek galti ki nazar se dekh kar kahi na

kahi hum apne bacche ko bhi ek galti maan rahe haii...

aur mein nahi chahta ki duniya bhi usse ek galti hi

maane... wo humara baccha hai Nupur humara...socho

agar wo bada ho kar khud ko galti maane laga to.."

"nahi Mayank aisa nahi hoga na...???" Nupur quickly

said..


"nahi aisa kabhi nahi hoga... aur na mein kabhi aisa

hone dunga...maanta hu papa abhi naraz haii par fir

bhi unko humare bacche se jyada pyaar haii... aaj ke

baad muje pura wishwas ho gaya haii ki papa bhi hume

jaldi hi maaf kar denge aur waise hi pyaar karenge

jaise pehle karte the.. so ab no worry ohkk..."
Mayank said while wiping her tears...

"Nupur jyada stress matt lo.. aur rest karo ok... mein

ye sab wapas rakh deta hu..." Nupur layed down n

Mayank started to unpack bags...


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after dat day Mayank's dad didnt said anything ... bt

just kept distence from Mayank and Nupur... n dat

hurts Mayank more... Nupur have seen so much pain in

Mayank's eyes... he was craving for his father's

love...n his dad too wanted dat bt a barrier name Sneha

was still there...

yes.. after dat day Mayank'dad started to dream about

his child... n think about to forgive Mayank and

Nupur ... but one day Sneha came...

flash backs...


Sneha came to Shergill mansion...

"papa kaise ho aap???" Mayank'dad was in his room

reading sum files...his dad lift his head n saw her...

"are Sneha beta..."

"sry uncle... ab to papa kehne ka hakk to sayad kisi

aur ko mill gaya haii..."Sneha said bitterly...


"aisa kuch bhi nahi haiii maana ki tum meri bahu nahi

bann paayi par aaj bhi tum meri beti hi ho..."
Mayank's dad tried to pecify ...


"nahi uncle juthe sapne nahi dekhne nahi chahiye bahut

dard hota haii jab sapne toot jate haii... aur usse bhi

jyada taklif hoti haii jab aap kisi ko apni jaan se bhi

pyaar karte ho aur wo hi kisi aur ladki ke liye aapko

hamesha hamesha ke liye chhod kar chala jaaye... wo

saare sapne ek pal mein tod jaaye jo usne dikhaye the

aur wo saare sapne kisi aur ke saath jee raha

ho...nafrat hoti haii khud se uncle ki kyu apne pyaar

ko kisi aur ke sath nahi dekh sakti mein bahut takleef

hoti haii... nafrat karne lagi hu khud ko aur uss ladki

ko jisne ek hi pal me mera pyaar mujse cheen liya ...

mera Mayank mujse cheen liya... aur cheena bhi to iss

tarh ki koi chah kar bhi usse Mayank se juda naa kar

paayee...pehle uske sath kaam kiya uske sath bussiness

kiya aur jab usse pata chal gay ki Mayank us par pura

trust karta haii to ussne uss moke ka fayda uthaya...
aur mein.. mein bichari dekhti reh gayii... nahi samaj

paayi kuch bhi... haar gayi... Sneha haar gayi

uncle..." n started to cry... Mayank's dad came n

hugged her... n Sneha smiled evily...


"wah Sneha tera to jawab nahi ... itne acche acche

dialoge marti haii... tuje to bollywood mein hona

chahiye...aur acting to itni acchi karti haii...uncle

ko to apni mutthi mein rakhungi mein... kabhi Nupur ko

uss jagah nahi lene dungii jo meri haii... kabhi nahi

... aur Sneha kabhi kisi se nahi haarti kabhi nahi...

har ek chiz ka badla lungii... aur uss bacche ki

wajase Mayank mujse dur hua haii to baccha bhi Mayank

se dur hoga.. kisi bhi chiz ko nahi rakhungi jisne muje

Mayank se dur kiya haii...iss ghar mein to tum safe ho

Nupur bass ek baar iss ghar se bahar niklo bass fir

dekho kaise bachati ho tum apne so called bacche ko..."
Sneha said in her mind... n Mayank's dad felt very bad

for Sneha as he always treated Sneha as his own

daughter as he always wanted a daughter too...
n dat was the reason he too made distance with Nupur

never exchange a single word with her...


sumthing was cooking up in Sneha's mind...
n in these days... office started to talk about Nupur

and Mayank's relationship... so once he called press

conference n broke the news about him n Nupur...
yes he told dat he married to Nupur n knw she was his

wife...so everyone stopped gossiping about Mayank and

Nupur...everyone was socked hearing the news...
n this news became breaking news... everyone asked

about party but he replied dat Nupur was nt really

well so he couldnt throw party... he was too asked

about hiding wedding bt Mayank politly replied n

finally got over wid all...

back to present...

"mamma mein kuch karva lu???" Nupur asked to shilpa

aunty as soon as she entered the kitchen...


"beta tum yaha kyu aayi haa...tumhe daal ki smell acchi

nahi lagegi... is waqt tum bahut hi sensitive hogi

naa... aur tumhe morning mein vomit bhi huyi thi..."

"mumma mein pura din ghar par beith kar bore ho jaati

hu...morning sickness ki wajase Mayank muje office bhi

nahi jaane de raha haii na ghar par aap kuch kaam karne

deti ho... mein aaram kar kar ke thak gayi hu ab..."
Nupur said sadly...

"beta tum bore ho gayi ho naa jaao office ho kar aao..

i knw agar fir se sabse milogi to accha feel karogi...

par thodi der ke liye haa... aur ek shart par ki tum

apna aur baby ka pura dhyan rakhogi..."
shilpa aunty pointed fingure at her...n instructed

her...n Nupur nodded n looked at her tummy...which

showed up little bit as she was in her third month...
she smiled n hugged her mother in law... as she got

mothers love n warmth which she was craving from so

long...


she went to office with driver...
she entered office n everyone started to congratulated

her... n greeted her happily... Nupur too met

everyone happily as saw everyone after a long time...

then she went to Mayank's cabin... Mayank was

surprised seeeing her there...

"Nupur tum???" Mayank exclaimed in surprised n a big

smile on his face...bt then he realised she shouldnt

be there...


"Nupur wt r u doing here??? r u ?? agar kuch kaam tha

to muje bol deti mein ghar par aa jata..."

"Mayank muje kuch nahi hua haii... mein ghar par beith

kar bore ho rahi thi to mumma ne muje bola ki office aa

jau..."Nupur came n sat on chair in front of him..

"kya mumma ne tumhe aane diya.. agr tum bore ho rahi

thi to book padhti ya game khelti..."

"Mayank plzz mein baccho jaise game nahi khel sakti

thi..."

"to kya mein baccho jaise game khelta hu???"

"meine aisa kab kaha... mein sach mein bahut bore ho

rahi thi... "

"ohkkk ohkkk to ab tum kya karna chahti ho??"

"Mayank plzz dekho gussa matt hona... plzz muje thoda

brief done ki office mein kya kya ho raha haii...

plzzz" she pouted like a child seeing this Mayank

smiled... n shook his head...

n started to brief..
after sumtimes..

"bass ab aur nahi no stress ohk... mein tumhaare liye

kuch mangava du??/"

"ek coffee..." Nupur quickly replied...

Mayank pick up receiver n called

"2 glass orange juce...my cabin..." Mayank ordered...

"muje to coffee... " bt didnt continue her sentense as

she saw Mayank was glaring at her...

everything was seeing by a girl behind glass...
yes she was non other than SNEHA... she kept her eyes

on Nupur where she goes n all... n she came to knw dat

Nupur came to office so she directly came to office as

soon as possible... then she smiled n went from

there... in canteen she gave an envelope full of money

to waiter n put sum medicines in juce...n instructed

him n waiter nodded n left...

"ab dekhti hu apne bacche ko kaise bachati ho..."
Sneha said in her mind...

waiter came to cabin n served glass... n firstly Nupur

took the glass of juce in which Sneha added sum

medicines...

n Mayank too tooked... n waiter left from there...
Sneha was standing at glass window waitinng for

blast...

Nupur was about to drink juce she felt like

vomiting... so suddenly glass was left by her.. n

broke.. n Mayank saw her... so he rushed to her...
n hold her...

"Nupur Nupur.."Mayank shouted her name...

n Nupur rushed to washroom... n pucked out...
Mayankc too went towashroom... Sneha became angry n

left from there...

Nupur washed her face... n Mayank was patting her

back...

" r u ok nw???" Mayank concered about her.. n she

nodded...

"Chalo abhi ke abhi doctor se paas chalte haii...

kyunki tumhe aaram karna to aata nahi haii... mana

kiya tha fir bhi.,.. meri sunti kaha ho tum.. chalo.."

Mayank started his bla bla.. n Nupur lost in him...
n smiled...

"ab itna muskuraa kyu rahi ho haa?? chalo.." held her

hand...n both left office... driver started car...
n Mayank sat beside her.. n closed her eyes with his

hands.. n made her sleep on his shoulder having his

hand around her... he was really worried seeing her..
he knew it was normal in pregnancy bt still he was

worried...n Nupur softly interwined her fingures with

his,,, Mayank was surprised as she never did anything

like dat bt he really felt strange n happy...
n held her hand tightly...Nupur didnt knw y she did

this... just her heart felt to do sumthing like dat n

she surrender n held his hand... as she knew she

started to feel sumthng as knw she wanted to hold him

close to him... wanted to touch him... n all...

Precap"
everyone in morena... included Sneha...
mayur scenes in morena n Sneha's next plan...

Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz update. plzzz. pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
interesting. plz mayank ke bacche ko kuch mat hone dena
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update

after long time u updated... its very nice ot see this update.

well, his father's reaction was lil expected. he loves his son, bahu n grandchild ...bt he didnt show it.

again that sneha ... i wish i could kill her ... how a woman trying to kill an unborn child??? she was mad ... just a disgusting lady ...

plz do something to save mayur child.

continue soon.

thanks for thepm.


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