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Posted: 14 years ago
superb!
even walk to remember is one of my favourites!...though in the end i always end up in crying!😆
poor maan!...he is so confused with geet behaviour!...
wonder who is the stranger!...
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part
who is this stranger?
I hope his plan is not going to work.
thanks for pm
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chala bagundhi anna and naa fav movie kuda a walk to remember
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thanks 4 pm

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THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

Part 11

Sydney, Australia

The whole day geet was busy in the lab. She couldnot get enough time to call maan. On the other hand maan waited for sunny whole day. But sunny didn't came. Maan started to become nervous regarding job.

maan: sunny aaj bhi nahi aaya...aur kithne din mein geet ji ke ghar mein rahu...job ka bhi kuch patha bhi nahi chal raha hey...

he impatiently walked in the room not knowing what to do...

Sunny entered vinathi's flat in fully drunken state...vinati gave him a disgusting look...she closed the door on his face and told him to leave...but sunny pushed the door with the full force, entered the house and locked it from inside scaring vinati...

vinati: sunny i said leave...don't create a scene here now...

sunny held her by hair and brought her close to him...his eyes were red...his face was swollen due to heavy drinking...vinati struggled to get free...but was unsuccessful...

sunny: isssh...ek aur shabdh nahi...bahuth hogaya ab...

vinati got scared with this avatar of sunny

sunny: meine zindagi mein aaj tak sabko cheat kiya...lekin ek tujhse hi sachcha dil se pyaar kiya...badle mein tune mujhe dhoka diya...aur iss dhoka keliye tumhe sazzaa zaroor milega...

vinati got scared thinking that sunny might harm her physically...

vinati: sunny...mujhe chod dho...plz...

sunny: ghabrao math...i will not touch you...how can i when u r someone else property...but i will give punishment to your heart...aise sazaa dhunga ki tum soch bhi nahi sakthe...ur countdown starts now vinati...

said these words he pushed vinati away and left her flat...

at evening geet returned from lab. On reaching the flat she saw maan sleeping on the couch...she smiled and went to her room to get changed...when she came back to kitchen she saw all things arranged neatly like morning...

geet: sab ke sab aisa hi hey...iska matlab maan ne lunch nahi khaya...

she got angry...she came near maan and started making sounds to wake him up...maan woke up and smiled at geet...

geet: yeh aapne kya kiya?

maan looked at geet confused...and got scared for a moment thinking whether he did any mistake by sleeping on the couch...

maan:" woh...room mein neend nahi aa rahi thi...isliye...

geet rolled her eyes and sighed...

geet: mein khana ke baare mein pooch raha hu...jab saara saman hey aap ne khana kyu nahi banaya...mein ne kaha aapse ki aap isko apna hi ghar manlijiye...lekin aap...

she turned her face aside in anger...

maan: woh...mujhe khana banana nahi aatha...kaaskar yeh angrezi khana...isliye...

maan lowered his head saying these words...geet felt very bad for maan...

geet: mein bhi naa...kya kuch nahi bola...mein kaise bhul gaya ki unhe yaha ki khana banana nahi aatha...shame on me...

geet then turned towards maan... took his hands into hers...

geet: iam sorry maan...really sorry...mein bhul gaya tha..woh lab ki tension mein...aap bhuke rahe..aur mein bina soche samjhe bakwaas baathe karna shuru kardiya...iam really sorry...

maan was touched with geet words...but her closeness started to make him nervous...the urge to hold geet back was increasing in him...but geet suddenly removed her hand from his...giving a break to his thoughts...

geet: maan...mein aap keliye achcha sa paratha banathi hu...sirf aapkeliye...

said these words geet moved to kitchen...maan stood there dumbstruck ...

maan: maan yeh kya ho raha hey tujhe...control kar apne iss feelings ko...

geet: aap waha aisa hi sochthe rahenge ya mere madath bhi karenge...

maan snapped out of his thoughts with geet words and went to kitchen to help geet...

geet started kneading the flour to prepare parathas...maan was helping her in cutting the vegetables...

geet: maan...aap ke baare mein bathayiye...

maan: kuch khaas nahi hey geet ji...

geet: maan for god sake...woh..ji hatayiye...it sounds weird to me...call me geet...

maan smiled and nodded...

geet: aap ne bathayiye nahi..aap ke baare mein...

maan: daaaji ne paal pos kar badakiya...padayi mein bilkul interest nahi tha...isliye mushkil se graduation complete kiya...uske baad aise hi sports kheltha raha...mere aur daadaji ke beech mein kuch differences aagaya..isliye ghar chod ke aaya naukri doondne keliye...aur achanak mumbai mein arjun ji se mulakath hua...aure woh yeh job offer diya...

geet silentely listened to maan's story...

geet: don't worry maan sab kuch teek hojayega...

maan nodded

geet: aur aapka hobbies?

maan: mera hobby,goal sab kuch foot ball hi hey

geet: foot ball...omg...aap foot ball khelthe hey...mera fav. game hey foot ball...plz plz..mujhe bhi sikha dijiye...

maan smiled

geet: patha hey maan...mein iss game keliye ithna crazy tha..ki mein ne socha ki ek foot ball player se hi shaadhi karlu

having said these words geet laughed...but maan stood speechless with geet words...some new feelings started to arouse in his heart...

geet: lo maan..gharam gharam parathas ..tayyar...

maan was lost looking at geet...

geet waved her hands infront of maan...

geet: kya hua?

maan was back to his senses...and said "kuch nahi"

maan and geet sat at the dining table to have their parathas...

geet: maan bahuth dino ke baad paratha bana rahi hu...patha nahi kaise hoga...

After seeing parathas maan couldnot control himself...when he took his first bite...his face changed...

geet looked at maan confused

geet: kya hua maan...achcha nahi hey

maan then closed his eyes and started chewing it...he then slowly opened his eyes

maan: bahuth achcha hey geet...

geet smiled...and both enjoyed their dinner...

After dinner...

geet: maan...sunny aaj bhi nahi aaya hey na?

maan nodded...

geet: mujhe patha hey woh bahuth irresponsible hey...call karona arjun bro ko...

maan: hmmm...

he then called arjun from geet's mobile...

A faint smile came upon arjun's lips when he saw the name of geet ...

arjun: hello geet...kaise ho?

maan: ji mein maan bol raha hu...

arjun got confused...

arjun:(monologue): yeh geet ke paas kya kar raha hey?

maan: hello arjun ji?

arjun: maan...tum geet ke paas...mein ne kaha sunny se..tumhe ek naya flat dikhane keliye...woh aaya kya

maan: nahi...mein bhi unkeliye wait karraha hu...

arjun: don't worry...i will be there by tomorrow night...

said these words he cut the call in anger...maan got confused...

arjun: this idiot sunny...ek kaam bhi teek se nahi kartha...mujhe jaldhi sydney pahunchna hoga...isse pehle mujhe mera kaam poora karna hoga...

Mumbai

Avinash was waiting for that stranger who called him at taj residency. With each passing second his tension was increasing...

He heard a voice from behind...":hello Mr. Avinash"

Avinash turned back...there he saw a 28 yr old tall guy...dressed in formals...

stranger: jyada intezaar nahi karvaya na

avinash: aap?

stranger: myself arjun...


to be continued...

Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update bro😳the geet-maan moments were very cute...by the way was the paratha overcooked????i feel so😆now this arjun loves geet🤢...i hope arjun lets maan live in geet's house😊continue fast...waiting for the next part...no precap😭😭dun forget to write one next time😃
Edited by mansi95 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.. love the convo between maaneet and the way maan started feeling for geet😉😆. or geet ka kehna ke she want to marry football player

thanks for pm and pls update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
that stranger is Arjun
he love's geet
Arjun is bad person
pls cont

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Posted: 14 years ago
oh so Arjun is the stranger

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