Bhageeratha- maaneet(ss) part 16 pg 63 updated - Page 18

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WOW excellent enjoyed it...😊
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awsome


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Sunny kitna chalu hai
Pata nahi kya kya loche kare ke rakha hai
Loved Maaneet moments
Bechara Maan kuch khane bhi nahi mila😭
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wow awsome one yaar...loved it
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i loved it... i liked the story very much...
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THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT


Part 10

Sunny was in a dilemma when his brother mentioned about the flat...he thought for few hours...finally an evil smile came upon his face...as he found solution to his problem...his thoughts were interrupted by a call from vinati...his face changhed on seeing vinati's number on his phone...

vinati: hello sunny...where are u idiot...how many times should i call...where is mohit? did he reached geet's flat safely?

suuny clenched his fist in anger...he tried his best to control his anger...

sunny: yes darling...mohit reached safely...right now he is taking rest ...

vinati sighed in relief...

vinati: sunny are u with him?...if yes then give the phone to mohit...i want to talk to him...

sunny: he is sleeping darling...why to disturb him unnecessarily...he must be tired due to long journey ..tomorrow morning we both will come to your flat...is it ok...

vinati: you both? i mean...u may be having some work...so u just give him my address ...he will come...why to waste ur time ...

sunny couldn't control his anger anymore...

sunny: ok vinati...as u wish...i will meet you this sunday...bye...

said these words he cut the call and drove his car towards vinati's flat...with an evil intention in mind...totally forgetting maan..

After having dinner maan and geet went to sleep in their rooms...maan was very tensed for his new job...whereas geet was tensed about her research...both of them couldn't sleep...they came outside of their rooms at the same time...

geet: maan..aap abhi tak soya nahi...

maan: nahi...neend nahi araha hey? aur aap

geet: mujhe bhi...hmmm...

maan: woh sunnyji abhi tak nahi aaya

geet: uska koi bharosa nahi hey...patha nahi kaha kis halath mein hoga...aap tension math lijiye...agar koi gadbad hua tho...arjun bhaiyya se hi khud hi baath karvadhungi

maan smiled...

geet: u look good while smiling...

maan was shocked with geet words...but for geet...it was just a compliment...

geet: achcha maan...hum koi movie dekhenge kya?

maan was still in shock...he simply nodded his head...geet took out lot of DVD's

geet: maan...aap kounsa language dekhna chahthe hey...hindi/english...

maan couldnot understand geet's behavior...as he was from village where a boy and girl doesnot even talk properly to each other... he looked at geet surprised...

geet: maan...bathayiye...kya dekhna chahthe hey aap?

maan: koi bhi...

geet: then we will see "a walk to remember"...mera favorite movie hey...

maan nodded...they both sat on the couch to watch the movie. ...maan maintained distance from geet...but geet pulled him near to her...

geet: oh o maan...ithne dur...yaha aayiye...u can see clearly from here...

maan's heart beat was faster with the close proximity of geet...in his life for the first time he is sitting near a girl...that too closely...but geet was lost in the movie...she didn't notice maan looking at her...

while watching the movie...geet felt asleep on maan's shoulder...making maan's condition still worse...he was feeling terrible...the urge to touch geet was increasing with each passing second in maan...he couldn't control himself from touching her...he kept his hand near her cheeks to touch them...but stopped instatly when he got back to his senses and realized what he was doing...he slowly made geet to lie on the couch...covered her with blanket...and left to his room after switching off the TV...in his room he couldn't sleep as geet's face flashed whenever he closed his eyes...he struggled whole night to sleep...but fell asleep only during early hours...

next day

geet woke up...and was surprised to see herself on the couch...before she could recollect what actually happened her alarm rang reminding college timing...her eyes widened in shock looking at the time...she immediately rushed to washroom to get ready...after getting ready she prepared some bread toasts...by then maan too woke up and came outside...saw geet running all around the flat busy in getting ready...

geet: maan..u woke up...i have urgent work at lab...mujhe jaana hey...mein ne breakfast bana diya...aap kha lijiye...aur yeh mera number hey..agar koi bhi zaroorath hey tho mujhe call kijiye...mein chalthi hu ...bye...

said these words geet gave a paper with her number to maan and left the flat like a storm...maan smiled and looked down through the window ...geet took out her car...but to her bad luck the car was giving trouble...she tried several times...but failed..she then got down kicked the car and was cursing the car company...maan immediately came down...

maan: kya hua?

geet: ufff..yeh car...start nahi ho raha hey...

maan: kya mein dekh saktha hu?

geet: aap ko yeh kaam bhi aatha hey?

maan smiled and went ahead with repair...after few min...

maan: ab start karke dekhlijiye?

car started...geet felt very happy...she got down and hugged maan saying...:thank u ...thank u...thank u very much...leaving maan speechless...maan was in shock and stood there like a statue when geet was leaving in her car saying...byeee

Mumbai. India

Avinash was worried about his son mohit... as he didn't recieve any call from him after reaching sydney...

subadra: aap bhi na...woh chote bachcha nahi hey...upar se woh hum par gusse mein hey...thoda time dijiye unko...zaroor phone karlega...

avinash sighed after hearing his wife words...just then he received call from the same stranger...avinash went to the terrace...

avinash: who are you? why u want to share the details of geet?

stranger laughed...

stranger: that's none of ur business...if u want her details...meet me at taj residency tonight at 10pm...

said these words stranger cut the call...avinash was in dilemma whether to meet him /not...

Stranger took out geet photo...kissed it...

stranger: geet...u will be mine and ur property will also be mine...

."aur uske baad..." he burnt the photo laughing hysterically...

to be continued...
Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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nice part... thanks 4 pm..cont soon...
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wow great part
loved it
pls cont soon
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am jst loving is shy shy maan.
He is really in shock the way geet behaving wif him.
She is jst being norm. Its just maan whom is not use with gal mixing well wif guys.
Poor man. he need to get use wif this till arjun comes to rescue him.
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awesome update yaar. i love the way geet is talking to maan. it is very sweet fo her and i am sure maan will like it tooo.

thanks for pm and pls update soon

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