Bhageeratha- maaneet(ss) part 16 pg 63 updated - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

345

Views

54.7k

Users

74

Likes

1.6k

Frequent Posters

MunaMeet22 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
#11
nice starting...
i have trust on u ...as i am a daily reader of LOVE WITH MAAN
as though i am very much hopeful of this new story...(bas MAAN ka entry thoda jhatke karna yaar)...plz...
esha143 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 14 years ago
#12
nice start...waiting to read more...😊
Audiwalia thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#13
Nice. . . . . Of course maan singh khurana can convince her.
jwalamukhi thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
#14


Part 1

"This is not fair geet...he is ur father...he is almost in hands of death...atleast for humanity sake..plz come here" said avinash in a pleading tone.

"father...i rather kill myself than calling him as father...he was not and will not be my father...just he is my mother's husband...who killed his wife...mercilessly...i will never come there for his sake...even if he dies also" said geet who is getting irritated with repeated calls from avinash..

"avinash uncle...u were a good friend to my mother...and that's why iam talking to u...if u again bring this issue...that will be the last call between us...i hope u can understand" said geet in a stern voice.

"geet...if not for ur father...atleast think about the companies and the employees working there...it will be a big loss to them..." requested avinash with a last hope.

"uncle...i don't bother about anyone...i will not come...that's final" said geet.

" you are so selfish and mean" said avinash showing his anger.

"yes uncle iam...so don't bother me by these unnecessary calls..."said these words geet cut the call and smashed the phone..

"geet...geet..." oh ...no...that was the last hope that too gone..." sighed avinash.

"god plz send someone to help me'plz...now that's all I can do" said avinash when his last hope had gone

Sydney, Australia

" Oh no'...another murder...geet u saw the news today...another Indian student got killed" said ambika , the dearest friend of geet and also her roommate.

But geet was lost in her thoughts''she was not paying any attention..

"geet...geet...what happened? Why are u looking so dull? Any health problem?" asked ambika worrying about geet.

"hmm...no..no..iam fine...just thinking about sunny" replied geet.

"Sunny? Why are u thinking about that idiot no?... he told last Sunday that he will be here...but till now...he hasn't come...let him come I will show who ambika is?" said ambika.

"yeah...iam also expecting him...last week I asked him some money''.to pay my fees...he agreed...but now he is missing...I couldn't reach him on phone also" sighed geet.

"geet ...if u don't mind...can I ask u onething" said ambika

Geet nodded saying yes''.

" geet u r the sole owner of around 1000 crores property'.then why u r staying away from all that'and asking others for help? Just leave this stubbornness and go to india'..colourful life is waiting for u" said ambika.

"ambika!!!!!!!!!!!" shouted geet

Ambika shocked with sudden outburst of geet'.

"ambika'u know what happened to my mother...then how could u say to me to take that property which has blood marks of my mother...i prefer dying of hunger...rather than going there' said geet fuming in anger and pain.

" geet leave about property'.think about urself.. ...are u normal...like other girls of ur age...no...why u are punishing urself like this...by staying away from all...from all happiness...locking urself...alone...don't u think that there should be someone in ur life" said ambika worrying about geet future

"no...I don't need anyone in my life...iam alone...so what...iam happy the way iam...plz don't ever talk about this again...its a request" said geet

"geet...what if that someone comes in ur life and make u feel special...u will change definitely...my sixth sense is saying that...who knows?" said ambika

" ambika stop day dreaming!...such things I will never accept in my life...never" said these words geet left for college

"who knows?..anything may happen?" smiled ambika

Hoshiarpur, India

"savithri'...where is maan? asked mohinder ''.

"hayerabba...yeh agaya...patha nahi maan kaha gaya...yeh ladka bhi naa ghar mein ek min nahi tikhtha" mumbled savithri

"savithri'mein tumse kuch pooch raha hu? Jawab do?" shouted mohinder at his wife

"woh...woh...kya hena ji...humare sarpanch ki beta hey na...adi...uska thoda thabhiyath teek nahi tha...maan use hospital leke gaya...bas atha hi hoga" lied savithri to save maan.

" bas kar savithri...bahuth hogaya...aur kithne din uski galathiyon aisa hi chupakar rakhega thu...mujhe patha hey who iss waqt kaha hey?" said mohinder

Savithri lowered her head not knowing what to do...

Govt..degree college play ground, hoshiarpur

A 24 yr old guy, with well built physique (hatte katte nowjawan) was looking at the goal keeper...everyone in the ground were watching the match curiously...last minutes of game...one more goal is needed to win...with each passing second...the tension was increasing...finally that guy made the goal...that's it everyone in the ground started screaming with joy

"maan...maan..maan...maan"

To be continued...

Plz do comment😳

Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
kawaii_geet thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#16
res

yippie...me 1st!!!!!🥳



now cuming to the update...
luvly dear...so geet doesn't wanna go back to india!!!😲
and our maan IS SUM GAAON KA GOORA CHORA...😆
am luving it😳
eager to see how they meet!!!!
😃



Edited by kawaii_geet - 14 years ago
esha143 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 14 years ago
#17
That was a nice update...so Geet is still adamant on not going back to India n she's not ready for any relationships too...who is Sunny?And Maan is in Hoshiyarpur...how will he reach Geet...?😆...will be waiting fo rteh answers in the coming updates😃...Do continue soon...
Audiwalia thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#18
Oh dn't tell me Maan is handa nd geet is khurana better not i jst his name Maan Singh khurana. . . . . Anyway IS its inpaired by bhageerath's strugle to bring ganga from heaven???? Maan's or avinash strugle to bring geet. . . . He took help 4rm lord shiva. . . .
-MansiKohli- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#19
wow...thats great..
so maan is from hoshiarpur...sounds interesting...😃.
geet is refusing to come india...by the way whats maan's surname?
handa????😕
do cont fast...😃
mrk-1 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#20
wow awsome one yaar loved it

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

9 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1008 page no 21 Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1008 page no 21

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3 (90%)

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

5 months ago

NehTaj SS ~ Written In The Stars (chapter 3 updated) NehTaj SS ~ Written In The Stars (chapter 3 updated)

[NOCOPY] Cover credits to Shibani aka oh_nakhrewaali P R O L O G U E The whole house was decorated like a bride. The lights were shimmering,...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

7 months ago

SuVeer/RUhaani SS ~ Wedding Bells (ch 5 updated)

This is my first work on SuVeer/RUhaani, I hope you all will like it. The prompt is given by Koeli, thank you so much for that. I have narrated...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: abavi

4 years ago

Arhi FF: Destiny Games T6 (Chapter 23.2 Updated 3rd Mar 2025)

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".