MayUr FF... Hum miley ge ..Last part on pg 78 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
feelong soo sad to seeing both of dem lke dis...😕

tczzz
laods f love
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
nice part maria.
mayur scne was nice...bt painful.
i dnt like mayur separation.
bt why did they separetae???
update soon.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: cutiepie12

feelong soo sad to seeing both of dem lke dis...😕


tczzz
laods f love
cont soon

@umaima
Thankss dear🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
nice part...
bt plz mayur ko jaldi milwao...plz
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
aww.. maria...
part 2... soo heart wrenching!!!
i felt so bad 4 MN...
continue soon!
luv ya!🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

nice part maria.

mayur scne was nice...bt painful.
i dnt like mayur separation.
bt why did they separetae???
update soon.
thanks for the pm.

@sujal
THanksss sis🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

aww.. maria...
part 2... soo heart wrenching!!!
i felt so bad 4 MN...
continue soon!
luv ya!🤗

@pariii🤗 Thanksss sis🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
Note...
Thank u sooo much friends for ur beautiful comments n responce🤗🤗🤗
secondly...i want to tell you something about story...
Friends...it is very emotional story,,,story related about emotions,a girl who sacrifice her love,who has lost her husband...its not very romantic story its just simple story..
Friends...most of you are confused why MayUr were seperated...?they were seperated as Nupur got Married with Adhiraj and Mayank went to abroad,,,
why she agreed to get married to Adhiraj?
in which cuircumstances she agreed to get married?
u ll see answer of these questions in coming parts...
According to me..its just my POV..ur POV can be different..
"its very difficult to sacrifice ur love...There r very less peoople who sacrifice their love for their parents,family"...MayUr was one of them in the story...
this story is very close to my heart..n i hope u all feel it from ur heart..
i ll try my best to tell ,to show their emotions..i hope u ll read it from ur heart not ur mind...😳
Love
Maria
Edited by maria-soniarti - 14 years ago
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#89

Part 3'.

Nupurs looked towards him who was watching her'they both felt pain in each other eyes'They wanted to hug each other tightly, to tell each other..how it was difficult to stay away from each other but sigh!they cant'

She came close to him'

Both were silent 'first time they were trying to choose word how to start conversation'

Nupur kaisi ho'finally Mayank asked her after long silent'

They looked at each other'

She wanted to tell him her pain'it was true she got married with Adhiraj she could not forget him as he was her heart beat..

Main theek hoon'she said in low voice 'trying to control her emotions,her tears'

Main aj hi wapis aya hoon'Adiraj k e bare main suna..jo bhi hua theek nahi hua...tum se milna chahta tha'Tumhare ghar gaya tha..Uday ne hi yahan ka address bataya'he told her hesitantly'and looked towards her but she was lost in her thoughts,silent,quite'he was hurt to see his Nupur like that'he likes his non-stop talking,her blabbering, her jokes'.

Nupur'kuch toh kaho'he said trying to get her attention,,,,he wanted to listen her voice,her talks'

She looked at him when she heard his voice'

Kuch toh bolo..Mujhe Sadu hi keh do..woh bhi chale ga'he said while a smile came on his face'remembering their fights'

Nupur smiled a bit as she remembered she used to call him Sadu..and Mayank got irritated and angry..

He loved his smile'I can do anything for your smile'he thought..

Mayank tumhain yahan nahi ana chahiye tha'she said hesitantly while lowering her eyes'she was scared what Adhiraj parent's will think about him..

Nupur'main tum se milna chahta tha'tumhain dekhna chahta tha..'koi mujh se mera sab kuch bhi cheen le , pir tumhain dekhne ,tum se milne ka 'tumhain pyaar kerne ka haq mujh se koi nahi cheen sakta'koi kuch bhi kahe ya soche mujhe is ki koi partah '

Bachpan ke saawan beete, ladakpan ki beeti dhaara
jab mud ke dekha peechhe to chhoota jeevan saara
Phir bhi teri aas pakad ke har ek din guzra hai
teri ek nazar pe meri saans ka sahara hai
tum se binti karat hoon dil todo na hamara

She looked at him she could feel truth in his words'she knew he loves her a lot'she knew may be they can not meet but their love is true,they love eachother unconditionally'they can feel eachother pain,they can feel each other heart beat,,,

She looked into his eyes and both were lost into each other'..


Do matvale naina hamaare
teri hi raah takat hain pyaare
man ki mere preet bujhaye,
tan ki mere sej sajaye
sochat kya re, hum to haare
baar baar har daal daal
har dagar karu tera intezaar aa...

ke dil jhoom jhoom chale jhoom jhoom chale soneya soneya
dil jhoom jhoom chale jhoom jhoom chale soneya soneya
Soneya

Bhabhi'gunjan called her name while coming close to them

They came back to the world when they heard Gunjan voice.,,,

Bhabhi'here is coffee'..she aid while putting tray on table'

Nupur looked at Gunjan and smiled

You both are friends then why you are so quite its seems you both are strangers not friends'she chuckled while looking at them

Both were silent just looking at each other'they have no answer of that question'.

Nupur lowered her eyes'trying to avoid Mayank gaze on her'while Gunjan was confused at their behavior'

I have to go now'Mayank said while getting up from sofa'

Ap ki coffee '.Gunjan did not even complete her sentence'Mayank interrupted her..

Actually I have to do some important work..mujhe abhi jana ho ga'coffee phir kabhi pee loon ga'he said with smile'

Gunjan did not arguing more as she thought he must have some work

Ok'She replied..Nupur did not utter a word'and she did not try to stop him..

He was expecting she will say something but she did not'

Bye Nupur'he said looking at her'

Bye'she said trying to avoid his gaze'.

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Precap'..

Mayu tujhe Nupur ke ghar nahi jana chahiye tha'Shilpa aunty said

Kyun maa..Nupur bhi yeahi keh rahi thi'per kyun?main kyun us se nahi mil sakta'he said angrily

Mayu who Nupur ka sasural hai'agar us ke ghar walon ko bura laga toh'she was trying to convince him..

bas maa..main ab thak chukka hoon ,,,ab mujh se aur saha nahi jata'he said while putting his head on her lap..

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here is next part...i hope u ll like it...plz do comments n press like tab if u like it😳
Edited by maria-soniarti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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They were so lost in each other...it pains them to see each other in pain...good going...cont soon...!!!
Edited by valiyah27 - 14 years ago

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