Pride and Prejudice:Maaneet Style THREAD 2 - Page 28

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mirnalini thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

nice update
can we get an idea where this ff is heading to and how would he repent his mistake by doing something unexpected that would include his life otherwise i dont see any way geet would forgive him

plz reply to this post as soon as u read it

Don't worry
Something big will definitely happen that'll make Geet forgive him.
I'm working towards it.
This FF is definitely headed towards a happy ending😛
Edited by mirnalini - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mirnalini

Don't worry
Something big will definitely happen that'll make Geet forgive him.
I'm working towards it.
This FF is definitely headed towards a happy ending😛



would u update it daily or once in a while and one more question r u thinking to end this ff quickly because i dont like this ff to end
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Posted: 14 years ago
well I know that Maan had in past hurt Geet, but Geet is not doing anything to make this feeling less...hope she would be able to understand this feeling
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome yaar..read the last two updates in one go..i loved it ..atlast they are married ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
I was waiting for your update so long
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Posted: 14 years ago
Please pm me when you update. I will be really thankful.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the strong Geet!!!!!!!!!! I wish she gives a hell of a time to Annie.
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Posted: 14 years ago
dude, i am soo sooo late in reading the last two updates! exams dete dete life paani paani ho gaya, kya karoon?! anyways, fab updates! both of them!


ab kaam ki baat karte hai, next update kab milega? abhi toh online ho, does it meaning u r thinking of updating tonight? 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 39

Two months had passed living like this.
Every member of the Khurana household was trying to make amends.
But Geet had no ear to lend to what they said.
Annie would try to be friends, but the people Geet called friends had set the bar so high, that there was no way that Annie could meet the standards after what she had done.
Dadi would try to be motherly, but Geet had surpassed that stage where she needed a mother.
All the struggle in life had made her so independent that she mothered others. There was no way that she needed someone to mother her.
And Maan would try shower her with his love, but there was no more room for love in her heart.
The slot that had been dedicated to a man's love had died long ago.
All she expected of them was to be a good bua, par-dadi, and father to her children, which they were.
Geet could feel them trying to reach out to her, but she couldn't forget what had happened.
She was afraid of trusting them again, lest the history repeated itself.
...
"Annie plz, plz just listen to me!
Annie you can't do this to me!
Plz..."
"Listen Mr. Arjun Singh Rathore!
There is absolutely nothing between us any more.
Sign the divorce papers I sent you!
We're over!!"
"Annie plz, for the sake of our child, plz!"
"What child Arjun?
If you're referring to the one in my womb, then you'd better forget about it!
Cuz I'm aborting this child!
There's no way that I'm going to carry the child of a man like you!!
Tumhari wajah se bhai aur Geet alag ho gaye!
Tumhari wajah se Geet ko itna kuch sehna padha!!
Tumhari wajah se hum sab ne Geet ko itni delicate condition mein ghar se nikaal diya, jab woh maa banne waali thi, aur woh bhi uski shaadi ke din!!
Kitna dard sehna padha hoga use, socha hai tumne!!
Aur is sab ki zimmedaar main bhi hoon!!
Tumhari baaton mein aake maine us bholi-bhali ladki par shak kiya, jiske saath pehle hi itna bura ho chuka tha!!
Hum sab chaahe bhi, to zindagi bhar pachta kar bhi apne gunaahon ka prayashchit nahin kar sakte!!
We can never make upto her!!
Humari wajah se Maan bhai aur Geet 3 saal tak ek doosre se juda rahe, aur ab milkar bhi nahin mil paaye!!
Geet hum sab se nafrat karti hai, aur kyun na kare, hum hain hi is layak!!
Yeh to uski mahaanta hai ki woh apne bacchon ke liye waapas aayi hai!
Warna woh chahti to akele bhi reh sakti thi!!
Usne hum sab ko ek mauka diya hai, apni galti sudhaarne ka.
Aur kya hak hai mera is bacche par!
Kya hak hai mera iski khushi par!!
Yahi humaari saza hai Arjun, ki hum saari zindagi dukhi rahen!!
Naa hume ek doosre ka saath naseeb ho, naahi is bacche ki khushi!!
Khaaskar tab, jub humne ek maa ko uske bache ke saath marne ke liye chod diya tha!!"
and with that said, Annie pushed Arjun aside and got into her car.
She was going to the hospital.
Arjun fell on his knees, crying.
This was the punishment for his sin.
Justice was done.
...
Geet stood behind a tree in the porch of the Khurana mansion, and saw Arjun falling on his knees, crying.
All this drama had commenced in front of the main door of the house, and Geet had arrived when Arjun had been pleading Annie for forgiveness.
Arjun looked up, and saw Geet emerge from the trees lining the rose garden besides the porch.
He scrambled to his feet and rushed to Geet, falling on her feet.
"Plz Geet!!
Plz forgive me!!
This is all my fault!
Isme aur kisi ki galti nahin hai!", he said holding her feet.
"I blindly trusted my sister!
NT ne kaha tha ki Khuranas ne uski zindagi barbaad kari, isliye main uska badla lene yahan aa gaya!!
Usne jo kaha maine kiya!
Main usse bahaut pyar karta tha, isliye jab NT ne mujhse kaha ki usne Maan se badla lene ke liye tumhe hire kiya tha, aur iska saboot tumhare bhai Brij ne bhi mujhe diya to maine un dono par blindly yakeen kar liya!!
Aur phir Maan ko todne ke liye hum sab ne yeh sab kuch, jise main sach maan raha tha, Annie ko bataya, aur phir Maan ko!!
Plz Geet, mujhe pata hai ki tum bahaut acchi ho, plz mere bacche ko bacha lo!
Annie aur us bacche ka saath to shayd mujhe is janam mein bhi na naseeb ho, par is sab main us maasoom ka kya dosh!!.."
and with that Arjun kept crying and blabbering.
Geet stood their numb, so much was happening around her.
So much had been revealed!!
She could not make sense of it all right now.
There was something very important that she had to do before that...
So people,
that was PART 39.
Hope you enjoyed!!😃
Edited by mirnalini - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

loved the way geet is emerging as a powerful woman

now that the truth is out in front of geet i really want her to save annie's child
hope she does

arjun annie part was beautifully written

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