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Ambar

@applegoldcoin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: anushkajain
wow !!!!!!!!!
so madame finally graced me with an AR FF after pestering u soo much 4 one😃
well i must say interesting ch ⭐️
awesome start 👏
n ya do add me in ur pm list😊
continue soon

Thanks a lot Sweety...Thanks for such a beautiful reply😊

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Ambar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Riddss
nice parts
continue soon

Thanks ...will surely continue ...

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

cute ff.. bt it wud me more good if u make it clear who is speaking wat ina dlg form. as the para form is confusing...

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keya

@krazy4kash

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

hey

reallyyy good parts...update soon...n i have send u a buddy req...do accept it...

luv
kj

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Ambar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: krazy4kash
hey

reallyyy good parts...update soon...n i have send u a buddy req...do accept it...

luv
kj

Thanks a ton for appreciation ...and will surely PM u😊

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Ambar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: vaishiksg
cute ff.. bt it wud me more good if u make it clear who is speaking wat ina dlg form. as the para form is confusing...

Hey...Thanks especially for suggestion .From next part will try to make it more clear by narrating in dialogue format...Please do keep suggesting😊
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cuteshilpa

@cuteshilpa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

hey lov ethe part

it was awesome pm me plzz

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zesty.me

@zesty.me

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

hey...nice beginning but its kinda confusing as to who is saying what and to whom..i didn't get a bit of the conversation between i guess armaan nikki and riddhima in the second chapter at all..hope u portray your thoughts in a better way next time..keep up the good work..i guess the story would be interesting