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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey syria..
awesome update..
so..pia slapped T...hahaha..u made my day...
abhiya scenes were awesome...abhay winked at pia...awww...he is tooo cute...
was abhay's past love evil??
continue soon...
thanks for the pm...dear..
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Chapter 4(The Tour)
Piya left Misha's home, and drover her to her house. Piya! It was already late. The guard opened the door for her. She parked her car , and slowly sneaking her way in went upstairs not to disturb her mom. Her mom was had already slept, and had book in her hand. She slowly turned the light off of her mum's room, and went to bed. She checked her facebook, and turned her lappy off. When she went to bed, soft breezes blew from the window. Abhay was there watching her. Abhay did not what happened to him for the past couple of days. From the day of the encounter in the forest to today's college meeting, had sparked something in every inch of his body. When he had brushed her hair in the forest and to shaking hands, his instincts, and urge to touch her more and more were getting stronger. He watched Piya sleep soundly . She looked like a angel . He planted a small kiss on her forehead. And, left through the window. Piya woke up.
Abhay! Piya said. She looked around to there was no Abhay. Piya smacked her head?What's wrong with me, and why I am seeing Abhay every where , and feel like he is present here. I am so stupid she said blushing. She did not know what she was feeling , but she felt like she had known him forever for some reason. She did not know, just one presence ,and she had only known him for two days she was feeling some strong feeling stirring for him. Piya woke up the next morning, and her phone vibrated.
Abhay: Hey Sleeping beauty! Piya blushed when he called her that over the phone
Piya: Sorry! I have never slept for so long .
Abhay: I know! It's must be the jetlack. Enjoying Dehradhun's weather. It's noon. Would like to take tour of the city with me my lady?
Piya: My lady ha! That's a gentleman like . I would love to she said trying to sound like a high societal.
Abhay: Then I will pick u up at 1: 00 clock. You have hour to get ready . Is it that enough?
Piya: Yes! It's more than enough. Piya was excited more than ever now. She had gone out with guys before but Abhay felt different . She decided to wear a orange shirt, ripped jeans, and converse. She did a light make up, and wore a the S necklace she had from her biological memory. And, she finished it up with a small pearl earing.
Piya in a hurry rushed downstairs. She could not anticipate to spend more time with Abhay, to get to know him better. Piya kissed her mum on the cheek and gave her a huge hug. Rose was arranging flowers.
Rose: Piya! As part of our new being town and wanting to get acquainted with people, we are having a party tomorrow. Hope you don't mind sweety.
Piya: No mum ! It's great.Mum I am going out, I will be back in few hours. Take care! Hey Piya! Since , your going out could hand out some of this invitations sweety? To Raichands, and the Dobriyals. I don't have time , and have to see the arrangement here. Thanks! Mum will sure do . I will give Misha the invitation tomorrow, and the Raichands when I am on my way out. Piya was excited to had the invitation to Abhay. He would meet her mum she thought. Piya smiled, and tip toped her way . Abhay was leaning against the car outside her gate, and he was wearing grey shirt, black jacket, and jeans. He looked so sexy she thought.
Piya : Hey you! Piya greeted him.
Abhay: So you ready to explore the town with me. He opened the door for her.
Piya: Nice car! looking at his audi.
Abhay: Thanks I could the same about yours. Though I would perfer Lamborghini, but it's rare here. The road might not be able to handle it.
Piya: I had a Lamborghini back home?
Abhay: Shut up! What kind ? Abhay acting like a little child
Piya: Gallardo! I like fast cars.
Abhay: Check ! A girl who knows her car. I like it
Piya: So tell me about yourself, and your whole gang
Abhay: I am pretty lame ,and I don't have exciting life as you
Piya: I am sure you do. Abhay told her how he loved to read books, art, and about his family. He told her about his gangs Dhruv, Maya, John and Farah. Maya cannot be a little protective, and bitchy but she has a good heart he said. Btw, I saw your interview.
Abhay; I told you about me,and now it's your turn. Tell me about back home
Piya: You already know I have a sis, and there is my mum Rose( who cannot be little intimating), her gangs Ben, Rose, Anthony, Britney,and Matt. Ben is my bestfren, and she told him all he needed know.
Abhay: You speak so fondly of sister . I am suprised being that over protective she did not have a bodyguards hired for you.
Piya: Trust me ! She wanted to hire me body guards, but I have convinced her I don' t need them. She might be over protective like you fren she has a good heart. I will make you meet her someday.
Abhay: It would be an honor to meet the famous so sis of yours.
Piya: Thanks! She said blushing Abhay can we stop by Misha's house. I have to hand this invitation to her family.
Abhay did as Piya requested him, and parked his car far away from Misha' house.
Piya: Abhay ! You are not coming?
Abhay: Please Piya! Your fren gangs, and my fren gangs are rivals. They don't like each other that much, and you could lose you frens . Please Piya try to understand he said touching her face. Piya felt like a jolt of electricity, and thoughts were racing through her mind she should not imagining. She got out of the car, and knocked on Misha's house gate. The gatekeeper opened the door for her. She rang the bell. The butler came to greet her, and said Misha was in the living room. As soon as Msha saw Piya, she came running,and give her a big hug.
Misha- Buddy! I miss you. I know we have known each other for two days, but feels like eternity.
Piya- Me too Misha. Btw, where is aunty, ur sis?
Misha- Ever since your come called that she was having a party, the 2 fashio fiasco have been going crazy, and u know Panchi idolizing ur mum and sis all decided to go shopping. They wanted to look their best, and it's not my family only that have lost it. But, I swear the whole town is on some kind of drug or something.
Piya with amusement pretended to scowl at her, and laugh at her sarcasm.
Piya- Shut up! Mish! But I have to admit you are one funny chick
Misha- See! I am not funny, but expressing my opinion rolling her eyes
Piya- I am sorry Misha
Misha laughed- I am kidding stupid. You are so cute, and innocent Piya
Piya chuckled at her compliment. Misha request Piya to stay over and over again, but she convinced Misha's she had been somewhere important. Misha frowned at Piya.
Misha- I am kidding by giving you my frown face.
Piya- I will never get you Misha she said and left
Abhay was leaning at against the car, and looking like a Calvin Klein model. Piya ! shook her thoughts off.
Abhay with inquiring curiosity asked- So ! You were there for long.
Piya- Sorry! Abhay! Misha was not letting me leave. Piya looked at Abhay who was smirking at her with his arms crossed.
Abhay and Piya drove through the local markets of the town.
Abhay- So Madam! Where would like your humble servant to take you?Anything you wish , and want to go shall be granted.
Piya- Do you have a church here?! Piya had heat rising upon her cheeks.
Abhay: There is one near the down market.
Piya shouted Abhay. Abhay Abhay! Stop seeing the flower shop ! Abhay nearly crashing the car.
Abhay: Ok ! Be patient! Let me stop the car completely. Abhay stopped the car completely. This not the church.
Piya- I know! I just have to buy a flower. I will be quick
Abhay-Make it quick. U have 5 mins. Scott! Rapido
Piya pretended to snicker at him. Piya saw an old lady who was carrying a bag of groceries that were too heavy for her. Piya asked the lady with a smile , if she could help. Abhay did not get out the car. He observed Piya with amusement. Piya aided the old lady to unload the groceries in her car. Abhay was touched by her concern for other. Piya! Truly ur magnificent. You are a quite a helper he thought intently focusing on her. Piya hurried to the flower shop, and bought flowers for church.

(At the Church)
Piya: Do you want come?
Abhay nodded his head, and followed Piya. Piya ended her walk near a grave. She placed the flower near the grave.
Piya: You are pondering why we came here?
Abhay: Piya! I am not gonna ask you that. I will respect your decision whether you want to tell me or not. Piya felt she could trust Abhay, but she did not want him to know the darkest secret of her life yet. She did not know what he would, and what question would arise in his head about her character
Piya: No! This grave belongs to my aunt. She died when I was 10 , Piya said crying. She had cancer Abhay. Her last wish was to be buried where she was born, and in her homeland.
Piya; U know when I have not been here in 10 years, but last time I came here was for her funeral. I feel at peace and ease here Abhay she said. Piya could did not know whether to tell Abhay it was the real grave of her mother. Her biological mother. Piya broke down . The memory of losing her mother came back,and her father betrayal. She emotionally broke down, and felt weak. Abhay seeing her, and gave her emotional support. He slowly picked her up, and tightly wrapped her around his chest. He calmed her down, and Piya hugged him. Abhay passion, and urge to touched fired through his whole body. He never had felt like this for so long, and did not pull way. Instead, he soothed her.
Abhay: Sshhh! Piya! Your aunt would you want to see you happy. She is watching you from heaven. Suddenly, Piya pulled away from the proximity she had already gotten away with Abhay.
Piya: I am sorry Abhay for jumping on you like that.
Abhay: It's ok Piya! It's not you fault. Now, I want you erase that frown of your, and bring a smile to your face.I can't see gloomy mood on that beautiful face.
Piya: You do know how to charm a lady ha! Abhay! She said
Abhay: Thank you Miss. He said doing a curtsy. Piya laughed, and crossed her finger.
Piya: Come on ! We have to get going silly. I have a town to explore
Abhay : Yes Madam! He said saluting
Abhay drove Piya to the whole town. Piya made him stop by Panipuri cart. Piya asked him if he wanted some. Abhay refused , and said he did eat outside. Piya plainly stared at him blankly. Hwo could you refuse pani puri? O well! Not gonna force you, ur missing out a lot. Later Piya, and Abhay explored the lower part of the town. Piya bought anklets, jewelries, and artifacts which she was fond of collecting.
Abhay: Madam! I am ur chauffeur for the day? Would you mind if I carried you those enormous bags you have? Abhay said itching his head nervously
Piya: Sure! Why would I refuse if such a sexy guy is asking me . She said winking
Abhay pulled her: You think I am sexy ha! he said smirking
Piya: No! I never said that. I said sadhu , I said sexy guy who is right there saying hi to me.
Abhay felt a sting of jealousy , but brushed it off.
Piya: Abhay ! I am kidding. Sorry , I shopped a lot. I love local market stuff, and I wanted to buy something for Misha, Panchi and Ruhi . And, also thought of doing of shopping for fren's back home to send them these. Now, since your my tour guide, where do you plan to take me next?
Abhay: Do you wanna see my fav spot in the whole town.
Piya: Let's go she said enthusiastically. Abhay took Piya to mountains , where his favorite spot on the whole town lied.
Piya: Abhay! This is such a beautiful sight she said breathing the fresh air, and shouting. Hello! Dehradhun! And, Abhay shouted along with her. Abhay, and Piya sat on his car watching the scenery. Abhay took out his guitar from his car, and played it. Piya intently watched him play. She found herself losing to the beat. Abhay's music was full of pain she thought. The way he was putting his heart, and soul could easily be concluded some deep pain was buried underneath, and he was concealing. Abhay asked her if she wanted to play. Piya obliged. And, she said play one of favorite tune by Bertucli . Abhay was impressed
Abhay: You study, you have a 4.0, u play music, ur beautiful, kind,. I could go on. Is there anything you can't do? Abhay questioned raising his eyebrow
Piya: One thing I can't do is properly holding myself. I am very clumsy,and a known for being damsel in distress
Abhay: Then , ur safe bec I will be there to save every time u get in trouble. Abhay said touching her face. Piya dropped the guitar, and Abhay bent down to help her pick it up. They both ended up heating each other head. Piya! slowly looked up. Abhay was staring at her,and they have a eye lock scene. Piya slowly made her way to kiss Abhay, but Abhay retried . Piya felt embarrassed , and gazed in other direction .
Abhay feeling guilty. Damn! he thought that was close. He wanted to grab and kiss her so bad,but could not. Bec, the animal in him would take over endangering him. He reminded he had to be careful. Abhay called Piya, and they both left for her home. When Abhay pulled his car in Piya's house, Abhay opened the door for her. Piya feeling awakard from almost happened kiss. She did not look him at him. When she was far enough away from him, she waved him good bye. She thanked him and headed towards her home. She sang as she entered the house. Her mom was watching CSI Miami . She hugged her mom, and went upstairs. She changed in her p.js.and went to sleep. Later that night, she dreamt about Abhay. Abhay situation was similar. He kept on pacing around his house back and forth. He did not what was happening to him.

Piya, and Abhay are falling for each other hard. Don't throw shoes at me , but there is a huge twist coming up. it will last 2-3 chappy. and it's a major climax that will help abhiya emerge strong together, and their love will reach beyond ... love u guys. remember comment. plzzz. I am sorry this update is so late. But it was easter, and i had things to do. I typed this chap after I came easter egg hunting. I will make the next longer.

Chapt 5 Precap
Abhay and Piya get partnered for the upcoming dance. Piya will fall more and far Abhay. Abhay,and Piya will secretly be frens bec their gangs does not like each other.Abhay will display his vampric power to save Piya. Piya will start to question how he got all that power. Abhay will go insane bec he is feeling stronger day by day for Piya...











Edited by syria2014 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
cool.. cool.. cool.!! i love it.. its awesome i read al the parts n t s just awesome.. i love the fact that pia is rich..!! and da strange pull btw Abhiya.. v nice.. pls cont soon..!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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bloody fantastic i am in love wiv ur ff nd i love how in your story abhay is so open 2 pia keep it up xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Dear all d Chaps were Awesome.. Amazing.. Loved it.. I lik Piya's Sis alot. U write so well yaar.. M in luv wit both ur FF's. Continue soon.. 'll b waiting for d next part.. Thanx for d pm..lolz.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tahani01

bloody fantastic i am in love wiv ur ff nd i love how in your story abhay is so open 2 pia keep it up xxx


he is gonna be open right now, but abhay will kind of have change of heart. u will see.m u won't be disappointed.there is a huge twist coming up . i have to do this to make abhiya emerge strong together.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: meaw

hawww

pia is a witch



maybe u never know what i am planning.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update and plz continue soon..,...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi syria
firstly i love ur ff, i think its awesome👍🏼
i read some of ur posts, i wish i could comment on all but unfortunately time doesnt permit me coz of my examz coming up.
but i just had to take time out to reply coz i love this concept n i hope u will complete it. it rocks😉
take care n do update soon hun
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Originally posted by: Rozy77

hi syria

firstly i love ur ff, i think its awesome👍🏼
i read some of ur posts, i wish i could comment on all but unfortunately time doesnt permit me coz of my examz coming up.
but i just had to take time out to reply coz i love this concept n i hope u will complete it. it rocks😉
take care n do update soon hun


i am glad u like it. will update. typing chapt 4 and 5 right now. will do.
Edited by syria2014 - 14 years ago

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