SS-Maan Geet ka Anokha Pyar -Part 13(last):Page 62 - Page 37

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Posted: 13 years ago
lacchi abhi tak heart attack se mari nahi?? specally after seeing nanga punga maan???
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Posted: 13 years ago

sorry friends for the delay .. i am so busy with my job that i am working even at home after working in my college ... no time to do any thing ... will update once i become a bit free ... sorry 2 keep u all waiting ...

thanks for the lovely comments u have showered on my FF ... loved reading them.
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Loved reading all your replies … thanks for commenting … Girls just now got a thought that if I end this SS of amritsar track may b the amritsar circus will be wrapped up from the show … so ending it quite quickly in the only asha that next week amritsar circus along with devini will be gone forever … this part is dedicated to all readers have who read all parts & liked & commented on it … thanks readers … love u all … thanks for reading liking & commenting ...

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Loved reading all your replies … thanks for commenting … Girls just now got a thought that if I end this SS of amritsar track may b the amritsar circus will be wrapped up from the show … so ending it quite quickly in the only asha that next week amritsar circus along with devini will be gone forever … this part is dedicated to all readers have who read all parts & liked & commented on it … thanks readers … love u all …

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Part 13 :-

While maan & geet romance in amritsar … Dev goes back to delhi … Mama & Lachi both catch Maan & geet romancing plenty of times … but could not do anything … as lachi is scared to inform beeji & mama while going to inform beeji about maan & geet bumps into some one or the other & forgets what he wanted to convey to beeji … Time flies by … maan as balwant impresses everyone in the family with his work as well as his intellectual brain …

After 1 month ….

Finally maan decides to reveal his identity to beeji's family …. As per the plan … Dev comes back to amritsar to inform them that dadima will be arriving in a week or so to take her bahu back …… along with maan & geet & entire beeji ki family Every one is gathered in the hall … dev enters the hall takes his seat & informs beeji & her family … while informing them … dev is looking at maan while delivering his dialogue …

Dev - dadima is coming in a week or so to take geet back …

Beeji – hmmm …. Ok …. We will give our decision after we meet your dadima … you can go and rest now …

Dev – ji … beeji ….

Dev starts leaving … geet who was standing next to maan feels like throwing up …. Geet searches for a wash basin to throw up … but before she could proceed towards a wash basin she ends throwing up on dev … dev too feels like throwing up after he sees what happened to him … goes to the wash room to wash himself …

Maan could not bear the sight of geet throwing up & he was worried while he was watching geet as she was throwing up … he was feeling helpless was unable to decide how to take care of geet what to do how to take her away from her family … he wanted to take her to the doctor immediately …. after throwing up geet faints … as maan was beside her … he holds her … beeji asks everyone to make way & maan lifts geet in his arms takes her to her bed room … maan goes & brings the doctor … everyone is rubbing geet's feet & hands … doctor comes home …. along with maan every one are asked to wait outside … While the doctor Checks on geet … beeji felt that something was poking her since a long time but as geet was not gaining conscious … she ignores it … while the doctor is checking geet … beeji pulls out the thing which was poking her … beeji is shocked to see what she finds out after pulling the thing from below geet's pillow … doctor comes out of geet's room …. Geet slowly gains consciousness …

Doctor – congratulations …

Everyone seeing each other's faces – congratulations … why …

Doctor – she is pregnant … where is her husband …. Need to congratulate him …

Maan who was present over there …. Comes forward …only to realise that he is still disguised as balwant …. Everyone is worried and are unable to react to the situation … dev was still in the wash room …

Beeji – thanks doctor …

Doctor – please send her to my clinic I need to do some check ups on her …

Beeji – sure doctor …

The doctor leaves …. Every one enter geet's room … beeji calls maan also inside … tejji protests but beeji asks tejji to keep quiet …

Maan – beeji … I am …

Beeji – maan singh khurana … isn't it ….

Maan is shocked as to how beeji came to know that he is maan … beeji shows him his & geet's wedding picture ….

Beeji – why maan singh khurana … have you done this … why have you fooled us … cheated us …

Maan – I did not have any way … I wanted geet's forgiveness & she was not ready to forgive me … so I did not have any option left … so had to become balwant driver to take my geet back home with me …

Beeji – geet … even you kept quiet … inspite of knowing that he is maan …

Geet – sorry … beeji …

Beeji – you both were playing with all of our feelings …

Maan & geet – no beeji … it was not our intention …

Maan continues as geet stops … he narrates the entire story …

Beeji – still what you did is not right … you hurt all of us …

Maan – I am sorry … beeji …

tejji – sorry is not enough Maan singh khurana …

geet – what else you want tejji veerji …

tejji – we want surety that he will never humiliate you or ill treat you or abuse you … will be affectionate with you …

geet – you want surety from maan … that maan who did every thing for me … just to make up for what he did in delhi to me … he came here to seek forgiveness … from me & to take me back … just because I did not … he joined here as a driver … he has 10000 butlers at his service … still he was cleaning cars at your doorstep … never ate indian food in his life as meals … but for me … he is eating plain dal chawal … man who ate continental … thai … is now eating dal chawal … & a man whose voice is like a command & at whose service 10000 butlers used to arrive … is working here as a driver … only for me … for his geet … if he shouted at me … at the same time he showed his unconditional love for me … I have already forgiven him … long back … wanted to go back … but he insisted on staying here so that he can win your love … which I guess he did as balwant … but when you came to know that he is maan singh khurana … you are back to hating him …

geet – maan … you don't have to say sorry to them maan …. Lets go …

maan – no geet … we made a mistake we hided our truth from them we should have told them about us long back …

maan – when it comes to me … geet cannot keep quite she fights back … that is her love for me … I am sorry on her behalf …

geet – why are you saying sorry maan … you know you were not wrong …

geet – tejji veerji … you are talking about affection … I have never seen you being affectionate towards pammi bhabhi …

pammi – geet … rehne do …

geet – no bhabhi … I am not … tejji veerji have you ever thought how much pammi bhabhi longs for you … pines for your affection … you have never realised that … please give her her share of affection ….

Tejji – wo … main …

Pammi is crying … geet goes near her … consoles her …

Geet – beeji … thanks & I am sorry for everything … I should not have come over here or stayed so long …

Beeji – no puttar … its ok … I understood … I think we all should forget everything & just live our life happily … chal aaja gale lag jaa …

Dev enters then … he sees that maan & tejji are hugging each other … then maan hugging lucky ...

Dev – what happened did I miss something …

Tejji winks & hugs dev – oye dev paaji … sorry yaar … galthi ho gayi …

Dev too hugs tejji … mama then comes & tells beeji that he saw maan with geet so many times & he tells that he was with geet ... beeji then tells mama who is maan ... lachi does not open her mouth but understands that she has been fooled by maan & geet …

maan geet & dev take leave and are leaving to delhi … dev in 1 car & maan & geet in another car … dev's car is ahead of maan's … suddenly maan & geet's car breaks down …

Geet – maan ... what happened …

Maan – let me check …

Maan tries to figure it out but he cannot fix the car … maan tries calling dev … but he cannot reach him … as his cell is out of service area ….

Geet – now what maan …

Maan – probably … take a lift …

Geet – lift …

Maan – yes … sweetheart …

Geet & maan are tired & are walking on the road with their luggage … checking their back if any vehicle is coming … while they are walking they hear some vehicles noise … they stop that vehicle … it is a RV … it started from kanyakumari & is going to kashmir … well precisely … from trivandrum … to chennai … pondicherry … place close to coimbatore … hyderabad …. Bangalore … mumbai … calcutta … dhaka also For a special friend … then to … jaipur … chandigarh … haridwar … their last destination was delhi … girls from ouside india came & met in mumbai … their sole aim of the trip is to meet maan & geet …

yes … these are the CI group members … so as soon as they spot maan & geet they recognise them from the back …. Stop their bus … and all these crazy girls get down & surround maan & geet … do not let them breathe … they are over whelmed to see maan & geet at the same time maan & geet were over whelmed to meet their crazy fans … whom maan once told to geet & made geet jealous of in one of the parts … maan never met them … but only heard about them … so each girl introduces the other girl to maan & geet & then they all get into the RV … take their seat … & have a nice chat … & enjoy their trip … all these crazy girls feed maan & geet all different delicacies they bought for them from their places & take snaps with them … & then drop off maan & geet in khurana mansion … & are back to their journey to their homes … as their dream to meet maan & geet has been fulfilled …

later on geet delivers twins … one boy & one girl & dev he never got any girl in his life … after NT left him … geet & maan lived happily ever after with their twins …

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Girls let me know how you liked this update … hope you liked it … comments & criticism are welcome …

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Edited by dewdropred - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow!great endng dear.omg geet gav birth to twins that to boy and girl.iam impressd dear especialy dev nt havn any girl in hs life.
U did a great work dear.keep up the same work.
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Originally posted by: maneetlover1

Wow!great endng dear.omg geet gav birth to twins that to boy and girl.iam impressd dear especialy dev nt havn any girl in hs life.
U did a great work dear.keep up the same work.

thanks a lot dear ... after watching todays episode could not control myself so i decided to end this SS ... atleast hoping that we will see an end to amritsar circus in the show ... yes ... i wish i could send dev to prison but as he has been forgiven now .. i could not do anything ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww what a happy ending!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update hima di..best part geet puking on devil.. Lol..so geet gets pregnant and twins wow.. All crazies meet maaneet..our dreams are true now.. More ppl will also have their dreams of meeting gurti true..happy that devil lived alone all his life he deserves to be alone. .
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update...thanx for happy ending...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow amazin superb update luvd it
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