~maitri~ maaneet FF THREAD 2 UPDATED 1may - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congrats on new thread.. Update soon.. Waiting!! and TM too..
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CONGO muski for the new thread 🤗



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Congras on the new thread dear
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Hello dear................. loved your maitri a lot. You can really start as a story / script writer. You will won the NO.1 place always. What all modullations you have using to express your love for Maneet............ 😉😉😉😉⭐️⭐️⭐️ You are amazing........ Now that you are online can we expect some more updates (offcourse even other FFs also)
Love you sweety,
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hey muski!!!!congrats 4 new thread🥳
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Love your fanfics. Congrats on new thread 👏👏👏
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congrats!!!!!!!!!!!!

already new thread .... wow !!!!!!!! gr8! going ...........

continue soon ........
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Congrats on the new thread...
I just Love DODO n GENIE...❤️
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waiting ...😃


plzz muski TM bhi update kero gi naa? 😍
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~maitri~
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Maan & Geet looked at each other maki chus!!!!! & laughed.. now u can't call me that ..I am giving u 50% partnership. she smiled naughtily. He smiled & drank water. He gulped down a whole glass of water in a go.
She shook her head, too the phone & texted Pinky.
Geet - order Italian lunch for one immediately
Pinky - yes mam
Geet kept the phone back on the table - lunch nahi kiya na?
he checked his tie & walked to his side of table.
Why do u skip ur lunch.
He tried to ignore that conversation, he was strangely feeling emotional. But it was not new with his dodo, she always knew him inside out, more than even he knew himself.
Genie
umm
main ne kitni bar kaha hain tumhe time pe khane ke liyen, dehko kya haal banrakha hain
u don't listen to me, u never. Why didn't u have ur lunch today. ..i know typical excuse of urs
.
she looked so worried, he walked across to her. He cupped her delicate face, towering on to her.. kya karoon tum jo nahi thi humesha yaad dilne ke liyen.. their eyes met..something sparked between those pair of eyes, something they never spoke before. The hold around her cheeks had butterfly effect on her, she left like a electric current running down her spine. She blankly looked at him, trying to hide the evident red tinge touching her cheek. He kept looking at her eyes like he was drawn into them. He was just inches away, he still stayed so close lost in those eyes. He was tempted to still move closer, & her heart paced harder. She could hear her heart beat in her ears. Almost unconsciously they inched closer, her lips shivering feeling his breath fanning them now.

As he watched her, another blush began to satin her cheeks & unwillingly he felt himself become entranced by the sight. He couldn't think of anything but taking those shivering lips in his. Oh gosh she smelled sweet, he thought.. still keeping her captive of his glare. She slowly bit her lower lip, oblivious to the way his eye followed the movement. She wanted to say something but her throat went dry. His physical nearness seemed to have paralyzed her thought process. Not that they have never been so close, they probably have been much closer, but this was felt differently. Oddly she was feeling his breath warm & his every breath touching her raising her pulse higher & higher. He left her instantly when they heard a knock at the door. He straighten himself, like a teenager being caught being mischievous. She seemed flushed.
He cleared his throat - come in
Pinky came in with the lunch box.
He went behind his chair & wondered wat was he thinking. He pretended to flip a file.
Geet - thanxs Pinky
she smiled & left.

Geet nicely opened the lunch box. She placed the fork walked toward him. She pulled away the file he was flipping & gave the lunch in his hand.
Chicken pasta!!! his eyes glittered in delight..more because his stomach was hungry..no no starving!!
he kept the plate aside wat about u
I had my lunch in the flight
she knew he won't have it alone. She lifted the plate from the table & fed him.
Tumhe sab yaad hain na
tumhe bhi tho
but I was mean na
she rolled her eyes khana khate waqt
yah yah ..I know no talking sad stuffs while eating..I still don't get that bit
she smiled ..u never got many of my bits
he looked at those eyes which definitely tried something more than those words.

He sipped water now... she smiled
wat he said
tum bilkul nahi batlen
aab kya kiya main ne?
She fed him another bite.. u sip water usually
yah I sip water.. I always do
no ..not when u r hungry
he narrowed his brow
she fed him another bite.. u gulp water down when ur hungry
do I???
she laughed
yah I know u know me better!!!


Precap
😲oops the posters in his room

-PREV PART 8 NEXT PART 10-
thanks a lot for the warm welcome to maitri
love u all a lot
please please comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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