~maitri~ maaneet FF THREAD 2 UPDATED 1may - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
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CONGRATULATION FOR NEW THREAD. NICE UPDATE WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE
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waiting 😃

muski plzz TM update too
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Thanks Muski for listening to my humble request for an update...........
Love ya. 🤗
WAITINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
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congratssssssssssssssss😳😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats on the new thread Muski!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg...u r also updating??......keyma is also updating remorse.....double updates....yippeee!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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so.. very serene and unbelievably beautiful!!! *sighs* muskaan you write wonders seriously!!! there's a bit of fluttering in my heart as I read maan getting emo and geet saying you never get many of my bits.. it said so much more in that single line.. i think even if I say loved it.. it wud be an injustice.. its so much more towards you work.. keep it up!!!
Edited by QueenbeePallavi - 14 years ago
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waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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~maitri~
10

she laughed
yah I know u know me better!!!
so u do accept it now
when did I ever deny
she looked at him meaningfully, they shared that cute little eyelock which spoke for itself. .

She pulled the napkin out of the box & leaned closer to wipe his cheek. Her hand softly brushed pass his lips. He instantly jolted with her touch, looking at her & hesitated a bit. her touch was tickling him, teasing his senses. He so much wanted to bring his erotic thought to a halt. She was not even flirting she was just being herself why was he turning on then every time the distance seemed inseprablely close. Dam!! he hated himself being so silly around her. He can't believe he stayed 3 1/2yrs under the same roof as her & never thought or felt this sort..he got up straighten to his full height. She fell back with his aggression & dropped the desk calender down. she swallowed alarmed by his sudden moment.

I am sorry didn't mean to panic u
she smiled & bend down to pick the calender so did he. They were instantly drawn back to the day when she moved in to his house.

**************
He carried her suitcase to the flat.
She coolly stopped by every floor meeting the kids & getting introduced as their new neighbor.
He was staying here for last 6months no one even knew he lived there, but she has not even stepped in the flat but the whole neighborhood was aware already.
Milne milaana hogaya tho ghar challen
she twisted her lips & moved on
Wow kitna bada flat hain
thanxs
tum kyun thanxs bol rahen ho
mera hain
very smart tumhara nahi hain..
he banged the suitcase down kaha na mera hain
nahi ..
he by now knew she would have a silliest of explanation for that ..he just waited for it
this is ur papajis place ... beda aayen..she snapped her hand & dragged her luggage to the room..he immediately ran...covered & closed the enterance of the room.
This is my room...woh tumhara room hain
tho kya main tumhara room nahi dehk sakti
he gulped hard ..thought for a while..dehk sakti ho...pehle aapna room dehk lo
she suspiciously looked at him & then at his hand pulling the door closed. He left it immediately & faked a smile.
Genie sometimes u really behave odd..actually all the time
he showed her the room. He was walking out.. won't u help me un pack she plonked her hand on the hip & tapped her foot. Yah sure he tried to be genuine, though he was wanting to run to his room & pull out all the posters. He arranged her books & jutti's there were like 15 different colors of the same pattern.. he could now imagine them all falling on his head one after the other !!! he was so scared, that the moment she came behind he jumped back. Uff dodo
genie wat is wrong with u
he wiped the sweat nothing...
she wiped his sweat with her pallo.. lagta hain u r tired
aacha challo we will have dinner
ek min!!!
wat??
tum change karlo, main bhi change karke aata hoon
kyun iss dress main kya problem hain, she turned around & checked herself
koi problem nahi..I was just wanting u to be comfortable
I am comfortable
he wanted to bang his head now & wanted to ask..don't u know the concept of night dress.. but well this was dodo..she may just simply say woh kya hota hain
ok .. I need to change.. main change karke aata hoon
challo main bhi chalti hoon.. that way I can see u room too
dodo main change karne jaa raha hoon
haan !! tho???
that was it.. he was losing it now.. how can u be in the room when I am changing he asked
chi chi babaji wat r u saying
wat r u saying
I meant u will change in the washroom & I will see the room.....chi chi waisen bhi mujhe iss machar phelwan ko dehkna ka koi shook nahi hain
kya kaha tumne
dehknaka shook nahi hain
nahi usse pehle
chi chi???
he rolled his eyes usske baad
pata nahi kya kay bolte raheten ho..iske baad uske baad.uff .challo room dehkten hain
nahi.. tum yanha rukoo.. I will change & call u
genie tum bahut badal gayen ho.. dehko jab se main ghar main aayen hoon u r scolding me
he hit his head with his hand.. dodo aisen kuch nahi hain
paka na
he hugged her & placed soft peck on her forehead.. paka
challo mujhe room dihkavoo phir
arre yaar phir room.. uff jaisen woh room nahi koi hawaa ho!!... he calmed himself.. dodo just give me 5mins
ok
he went to the room..she followed right behind him
he went in & quickly closed the door behind. He pulled off all the posters & binned it.. stuffed them all right below the trash.
Genie aur kitna der lagega
ek min
genie u r taking time like a girl
dodo ek min yaar
main andar aa rahi hoon
she came in & saw ..yeh kya
he got scared & looked behind thinking probably he forgot something, sighed in relief the wall was empty.
Yeh kya u haven't changed ur dress yet.
Woh..
he had almost forgot. Aacha tum room dehkloo I will change in the wash room
thats wat I said before genie
he took his night suit & went in checking the room one last time to be sure he didn't miss anything.
He relaxed & changed into his shorts & vest when he heard her scream..
GENIE !!!!!!
he stopped putting his vest mid way & wondered wat happened
babaji!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
another scream followed even louder
he came out slipping the vest...she stood there closing her eyes, face & turning her back the closed door
he realized it was the bikini calender. he stood there frozen!!! expecting all the galis to follow may be juti...too


Precap
wonder wat will happen now!!

-PREV PART 9 NEXT PART 11-
thanks a lot for the warm welcome to maitri
love u all a lot
please please comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
ohhh noooooooooooooo
not again!!! if i hadn't been spacing out.....i'd have been 1st again.............waaahhhh😭

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