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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update.. wow geet planning such a sweet surprise for them... hope they sell her the house.. liked maneet phone convo.. cant wait for the next one.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome!
so this is the surprise!...
wow!..geet has done a really good job!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ritzy...absolutely loved it!!!! BTW...my ID used to be "apekshatksha"...lately IF and FB is giving me headaches...so I opened under a new ID...
Keep the story going :-))
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Posted: 14 years ago
It wasn't drab in any way, i rather liked it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved their convo over the phone and their self talks more...lovely update...
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Posted: 14 years ago

nice streight forward planning... handsome offer for old peoples...

i think this is the right soluation for old peoples leaving alone in big houses and staying away their kids... they must use this trick for their peace ful old days
smart geet...👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting for the update please aaj kardena
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it, what a great idea geet has thought i hope Mr & Mrs Narang says yes.
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Posted: 14 years ago
I like Geet's idea, if her plan works then Maan will be staying next to her 😊 I can't wait for the next update, want to see Maan with Geet soon, please do continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Guys,

Here is the next update. Thanks for all the lovely comments. I was not going to do an update today but your encouraging comments have energized me again.

Hope you will like this. Enjoy!!!!!

Also, Ajenn had asked me if Geet was that rich. So I will try to clarify that Geet is a successful business woman who is a finance whiz kid. She along with Rahul has extended their father's business which was already huge. I had touched upon this in the prologue.

Maan on the other hand is a very famous doctor primarily because of the breakthrough in research. He is being considered for Nobel Prize and is a sought after doctor worldwide. His father was an orphan and Raj sponsored his studies and considers him like a brother. He was handling Juhi's father's business which now he has transitioned to her brother's son.

Hope it is clear now. Let me know if still there are doubts.

Chapter 19 – Homecoming

Next day 9:30 AM

Geet was busy in a meeting with her CFO but her mind was restless waiting for call from Narang's. She jumped out of her thoughts at the ring of her phone.

"Hi, Main Mr. Narang bol raha hoon"

"Yes uncle, please tell me"

"We are ready for the deal. Actually, thanks. Your proposal is like a dream come true for us. There is no scope for refusing after the way you have packaged it. When do you want to come and finalize everything?"

Geet was really excited – "Yes…I did it." She gave a quick thank you to her Babaji.

"I will be there in the evening with all the required papers. Do you have a floor preference for the flat?"

"You know beta…you are really unique…I am overwhelmed with your attention to detail and concern. I feel your love even when trying to buy our house. No, we do not have a preference but will not want ground floor to avoid disturbances and have peace of mind"

Geet smiled. "OK...see you in the evening."

Geet immediately put in motion her plans for next steps. She called KC office and demanded for a meeting with head architect. (Poor guy was really tensed thinking why the hell MD is asking for meeting!!!!!)

She met him and told him exactly what she wanted and how she wanted. She explained the brief layout, main requirements and details like materials to be used.

Next few weeks she spent approving the designs, decorations etc. She had given a very tight schedule of 4 weeks to complete the whole house and the only reason why she was able to bully everybody was because her own company was doing this project. What was more difficult was to keep all this a secret from entire family including her brother who was co-MD for the company. But somehow she managed and eagerly waited for time to get over.

4 weeks later

Rishab, Maan, Juhi and Annie got down from the plane. They claimed their baggage and moved towards the exit. Shifting to Delhi was a big step and all were super excited to start this new phase in their lives.

They met Raj, Nisha, Pari and Rahul outside who engulfed them in a bear hug. Raj had tears in his eyes. This was indeed a big day when his friend, his brother was returning home finally.

Maan's eyes were searching for Geet. He was going to ask where she was when he saw his angel coming towards them. She was wearing a white churidaar with white bangles in her hand. Her hair was loose and she had beautiful silver baalis in her ears. Her dupatta was flying and she was trying to control it with one hand while the other was holding multi colored flowers. Maan was seduced all over again with her semi hidden face laced with her white dupatta, little sounds of her bangles and payal. She looked perfect. She looked a fairy.

Maan caught her flying dupatta and set it.

For some reason Geet blushed profusely and said shyly "Thanks".

"Jhalli control kar…nahin nahin who itne dinon ke baad dekha hai na…and those dreams, isiliye shayad aisa ho raha hai…God let him think I am just flustered."

Maan noticed the blush and his heart was singing seeing those cheeks which were red like pomegranate. He decided to have some fun and teased her further - "Koi Na…tum aise hi dupatta udati raho…hum hain sambhalne ke liye"

Geet got even redder. Geet hurriedly moved to Bauji and Beeji, took their blessings and then hugged Annie.

She gave red color roses to Bauji and yellow to Beeji. She gave white and blue tulips to Annie. Now only a black rose remained in her hand. She gave it to Maan – "your favorite colors"

Annie – "Wow Di, you are great. These are beautiful"

Everybody laughed especially seeing black color roses in Maan's hand. Maan was dumbfounded at this girl's what to say…attention to detail…love…concern.

From there, everybody went to Khurana Mansion and got settled in the respective rooms. (It is a big house with additional bedrooms. Maan and Annie were given guest bedrooms downstairs whereas Rishab / Juhi settled in the room next to Raj/Nisha)

Two days later

Geet again woke up feeling Maan's breath and lips on her face. She huddled on her bed hugging her knees, setting her face on them. "Hmmm…kam hone ki bajaye yeh ehsaas to badhta hi jaa raha hai. Pata nahin kyon…I love everything about him…last two days feel like a bliss. Man karta hai ki sab kuch uske hisaab se karoon. Kyon aisa lagta hai ki I can do anything for his smile. Babaji…please…kyon aisa kar rahe ho…Don't give me these feelings…these dreams which can never come true" but somewhere in her heart she knew it was just a wish. Maan had already made a space in her heart. She had never felt such euphoria before and it felt heaven even when all the feelings were unsaid "Shayad yehi pyaar hai…lekin I have to control myself…stop myself from falling in love with a man who is forbidden"

Same time Maan woke up again hugging his pillow. It was slightly wet with all the kissing and nibbling. (I don't think I need to even detail out his dreams. Just imagine based on the halaat of the poor pillow). He sighed "Shuru ho ja Maan beta…waise kabhi kabhi, her smile blushing face tells me maybe she has some feelings for me. I have to be careful…let's start with baby steps and take her out with everybody. Adi ko phone karke, let's plan for some movie."

Everybody was having a gala time at morning tea. Annie and Maan were yet to start college / work. Maan tactfully slipped in – "what is the plan today? Agar kuch khaas nahin to movies chale?"

Juhi almost dropped her cup. She touched Maan's forehead "Movie…wow…I think last you went movie was like ages ago"

"Mom…stop it…thik hai…I know I was not much fun but I was busy and moreover it was not that bad also."

"Acha!!!!" Everybody exclaimed and grinned.

Geet - "Idea acha hai but not today. I have some other plans"

Maan was crestfallen. "Damn!!!"

Geet continued nervously– "Any other day is fine but today I have planned a surprise for you all"

Maan head snapped with attention - "oh…the same surprise we talked about…cool…chalo ab to batao kya hai"

Geet- "Aise nahin…aap sab tayiar ho jaiye phir mujhe aap sab ke saath kahin jaana hai"

Rishab – "Beta tu itna nervous kyon lag rahi hai…sab thik hai na?"

Geet – "Woh to aap logon ke reaction se pata chalega…please main abhi kuch nahin bolna chahti."

Everyone got up to get ready as now all were curious

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Precap – The Dream

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