arjuhi os: only 1 night...?

--priyal--

@--priyal--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

ohh u r awsome yaar why don't u try for kmh we will get arjuhi scene like dis

seriously i was imaging d whole os wid arjun n arohi

gosh u made me ur fan

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Madhusmita das

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Omg? Hw cud u write so nicely. M jst mad abt ur writng. M fallng in luv wid ur writing dr. Its awsome.amazingly beautiful. Plz dnt stop writing ever. Each and every line is full of romance n emotion. Swthert lots of luv 4 u for gving such a beautiful os n ff.:-)

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Mahi-Mahak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

thnkkk u so much, i m realy

glad dat u all like it,, realy u all
r SWEATHEARTS. luv u, muahh...
u keep liking my work and i"ll keep writing;)
will reply 2 each cment separately ,
and ya , v r waiting since kmh1 to 4 children to bnte hen, 09-011 3 chldren, and + 1 bonus.. ;D
thnks again

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sweet_angel27

@sweet_angel27

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Please continue, and please pm the second part! :)

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Mahi-Mahak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

hey sweet angel27, its updted.

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naveen

@Mrs-KaranKundra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

awww just read this

very nice

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Jasmine

@Div_Ridz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Amazing story, good way to start and I hope you are going to Cont soon! :)

its good, but why do you not write word fully?

"2 yrs b4,dy met on kitni set,dy got their 1st break and wer v.happy. "

you could write: Two years before they met on Kitani Mohabbat Hai set, they got their first break and were very happy.

Thats so much better to read and you get a clean text :)

i hope i didnt hurt your feelings but " wy du u all write like dis?" I mean everyone here?

why not writing the real english and complete our sentences?

to lazy? haha just kidding!

Please dont feel like i am firing you with these questions or whatever you can call them..! i am just saying that you maybe please the readers more :) .. because the most important part of a writer is to please readers

I hope you see this as free advice!

Peace to all IF Members and IF itself!

Sahar

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Mahi-Mahak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

hey sahar ! i dnt mind at all. i m wrtng lk ds,bcoz usng cell. my p.c iz nt wrkng. hope u undrstand. glad u like it.

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Pratibha Sharma

@justprati

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

hey jst read ue os n its jst awesome...i desperately want a part 2 if u dnt mind writing it...wow kitni amazin luvstory hai...arjuhi simply d best...u r a fab writer luv to read ur amazin pieces...thnx n tc

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