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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#731

part 39 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#732

Vicky and Meera's convo made me laugh. Those you are gonna be something, eventually I hope. lol Geet missing her buddy Maan. Where is he? Loved the update!

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#733

Wow...just noticed that you updated 😃 will run off to read it ...will be back 😆

Edit:

OOOH... thanks for the super engrossing update after you (your comp actually!!) gave a no show 😆

Well, Vicky's dialogues and Meera's expressions were too precious...oof😆

Loved that Vicky came to the point directly, both the brothers are very direct in their expressions...one claiming his best friend the other his person of interest 😊 Well, I was looking forward to Meera turning up as well...but I guess she is not one to get convinced so soon...

The party scene was equally happening - now that everyone has realised Geet is slowly moving ahead and the cause behind it - I hope they make things happen - sply Sid

I guess Maan didnt turn up as a result of this jealousy thingy - and Geet missing him was "super"👏

Well, the two month exchange programme ended too quickly - I am sad... so now do we get less Maanet and Vicky-meera instances 😔

Fab update and continue soon... 😃

Edited by mystique_girl - 13 years ago

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nazsij

@nazsij

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Posted: 13 years ago

#734

hope...yahhh beautiful title...loved it yaar...vicky and meera's conversation and that after effect was awesome...hehhehehehe hhmmm geet enquiring abt jealous and possessive frd was super...and i liked farhan's answer...plsss update soon...30 thak wait karna mushkil hi nehi na mumkin hai...sorry ho sake tho jeldi hi update kardena...plsss

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#735

Loved the update!!

Vicky's and Meera's progress is as endearing as progressive exchange of words between Maaneet!! Totally cracked up at their earlier exchange and then smugly happy at their bumps and misses.

And just few lines and my heart soared as I saw what Maan and Geet have come to mean to each other.

Maan happened!! Perfectly penned, these two words echo the whole underlying essence of the story.

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Deepa

@harshdb

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#736

THE UPDATE WAS

FOR THE UPDATE AND PM

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Simran Kaur

@DDbiggestfan

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#737

Nice part dear. Loved it.
Continue soon...
Thanks 4 pm

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undisclosed

@undisclosed

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#738

amru...i loved the way vicky was so streight forward with meera...he left her shocked👏...thanks so much for squeezing in an update..was really good!

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bhakbhartifan

@bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#739

Loved the update.. Vicky and Meera's convo was gr8.. Loved the way Geet kept asking abt Maan and the dialogue 'Maan Happened' was really nice..

Looking forward to more..

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mechantefille

@mechantefille

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#740

Originally posted by: Vidushi89
Hello...
Oww...somebody is really very busy...he he...
No problem dear...personal life needs attention first...n dont worry whatever you give us, m more than happy with that...

Awesome part...
Loved it...but i was missing Maan like Geet...
Why is he not coming...???

Vicky n Meera's part was good...

Updt soon.
Thanks for the pm.

Haan re Vidu - am neck deep in glue - literally ...

But thanks ya. Maan in the next part - can't avoid him. the man has persona.

love