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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
amazing update..... Please add me 2 ur pm list!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
great going......
the story is very similar to this new show in star plus.....
i am very excited to read how you will take it forward and the relationship between geet and maan.....
love along with hatred.....this is going to be great and very interesting....

all the best for ur new ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Totally different concept where do u these ideas hun
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: smj1977

hope thius one gets a green signal from the MODs



its gn be blocked. LOL TO VIOLENT. WHY GEET IS OLDER. WHY THERE ARE CHILD MARRIAGE..

ugh....

me gn be so angry if they do this ever again.



UPDATING U ALL🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85

meeeeeeeeeeee toooooooooooooooooooooooo 😍

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Posted: 14 years ago
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...... KOSH......
English meaning- cocoon... trapped in his/her embrace...


PART 1


Maan "I have my wife to serve me!" geet looked at him in shock! What was he talking about? She looks at her mother & father in low for support then dushant! Talli who stood there. Shaken! Wife! She never have looked at her in that way or maan! Looking at her this way! They member when they were young!
Geet "ku? Talli ko serve karne de na! Akhir she will..." maan snaps & slides the plate of! Everyone jumps! Geet looked at him just couldn't understand while maan eyes burning with anger! She still didn't like this! She looked around! Maan snaps again & walks off without eating! Talli have tears on her eyes.
Geet "baca hi! I will see!"
Bua "he is a grown up man now! Not a bacca any more!" geet looks way! In shame! She wasn't sure what exactly maan was thinking. She comes close to talli & tells her to take the food when her father stops!
Motabaa "geet! You take the food!" she looks at him then talli! Who wanted run from the spot. Hide her face somewhere! Geet prepares the food & holds Tallis hand. Taking her along.
Talli "geet... Dek, please let me go! He is really angry! I don't want to see him! Please!" she tried to free her hand from her grip but geet didn't listen at all! What's wrong with maan? She couldn't think! He knows why I exactly married him! Then! Why would he? Geet stopped thinking when both entered the bedroom! Maan was lying down on the bed. Starving! Maan gave one glare to talli & that was enough to make her dissapear! geet gives maan a angry glare!
Geet "what's wrong with you?" she pulls maan up to sit down. Then she sits opposite if him! "tuje pata hi na! How scared she gets!" maan looks down at the food.
He was starving! Geet flows his eye then hands him the plate.
Geet "ae le! Khana kha le! No one is here to feed you now! As you told talli to get lost! Eat! Let me see If I can find her!" maan holds her hand, but geet snaps instantly! "just wait! Let me look for talli! She is also hungry!"
Maan "you always used to feed me! You never had problem then! Why now?" geet looks at him. Again shocked! She pats his face as a friendly way! "la de!" she sat down and fed him... While talking...
Geet "do you know how much we missed you! Baba asked me every day about you! & ma! Uff! Don't ask! & talli, she probably repeated your name 50-100 times a day! Now look what have you done to her! What was her fault exactly?" She asks innocently! "you don't know how many gift she have brought for you. You have to go & talk to her! & also take some gift! You have brought her some na!" geet didn't concentrate where exactly was he looking! Or what exactly was he thinking! All she cared about how much everyone missed him! & somewhere felt guilty as she was the reason for his absence! Otherwise vashant, would never let him go!
Maan "aren't you going to ask what have I brought you?" geet smiles...
Geet "what do I need! You are here! Safe good! That's all I want! My & vashant dream was always the same! That you grow up & take over this business!"
Maan "was it your or just bros!" he finishes eating & walks in to the bathroom geet flows with a towl!
Geet "of course it was both of ours! Now get ready & take talli out! Becari have been waiting for you!"
Maan "I am taking no one!"
Geet "what rubbish! Maan! Just take her out! She will be so happy!" geet walks out. Leaving maan to think! He had no intention to go! But he have been very rude to her! & that to on his first day back home!

He walks down! Geet was outside crashing some spice along with with all the other ladies at home! He observes her from far! She looked happy! Beautiful! There was completely different sense that was taking him over! Not that usual one! Like when he was young! Always look up to geet if something needed! His sense took him somewhere els! He wasn't sure why that feeling was there! Was it because they were married? Or was it because he always took there marriage in a very personal way.... or was it because he want to know the reason behind her supporting the murder.

Talli stood there. Next to geet. Pulling face! Maan walks down...
Maan "tuje ka hua?"
Talli "tu bath hi math kar muhce! Her waqt... Anger comes before talking!" geet smiles seeing there childish act!
Geet "now take her out at-least! She have been waiting for you so long!" maan looks down in anger again! While everyone, specially maans mother wasn't approving this! Geet was his wife! There marriage have taken place! Then why she was after this? Everyone knew her intention! For past 10 years that's what she have been doing! Creating a image of maan in talli! & she cries in the darkness of night!

Dinner....

Geet again was serving the food. Bit worried now after the lunch incident! What will everyone think & talli stood there. Very scared. She wanted to serve maan but out of her luck maan was in no mood of amusement! Maan read geets facial expression. She was worried about talli!
Maan "talli serve me!" he ordered! Geet took a shigh relive! Like some sort of storm just passed by! But of course it haven't! Maan only have mentioned this to keep geets heart!

Geet was holding plateful of rice. Serving everyone & when it came to maan, she smiles at talli & hands the bowl to her,
Maan "why? Are there any problem of you serving me?" geet looks at him. Wasn't sure exactly what to do...
Geet "na! Tu bhi na!" she tries to take the situation in her way. She serves him.
As everyone finished, geet completely forgot to eat. There was just too much work. It was 11pm when she managed to finish her work. Switching all the light off! Makes her way to the bedroom! She did felt a bit drowsy but still refused to eat! Maybe no one els cared in the house! But maan have noticed. Geet walks in her bedroom & maan knocks!




Next- geet having hard time to understand maan...😳

Thanks for all the LOVE & support..
LOved reading all the comments...
please do leave me some more




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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow great part i am watching Gulal and i love kesar as your maan ...

maan possessive about geet he want her all attention for him as she is his wife wow good , he is become angry bec talli serving him...

geet thinks about why she marry with him but she forget time moved all ready and this is different maan..

he had his dinner at least when geet serve wow..
i am glad maan worried for her she did not had her dinner so sweet..

thanks a lot for this part ..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

wow great part i am watching Gulal and i love kesar as your maan ...

maan possessive about geet he want her all attention for him as she is his wife wow good , he is become angry bec talli serving him...

geet thinks about why she marry with him but she forget time moved all ready and this is different maan..

he had his dinner at least when geet serve wow..
i am glad maan worried for her she did not had her dinner so sweet..

thanks a lot for this part ..



awww me love gylaal to.. specially bcs current track...
kesar & maan... in a extent same..
except he have this happy go lucky nature... where maan don't. he is more mature...
:D
thank you for liking it & for the lovely comment
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow loved it n hope geet has her dinner
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome!
maan did have feelings for geet but geet doesn't have!
talli is kabab me haddi b/w maan and geet!
continue soon!

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